Thanks everybody I really appreciate the feed back, thanks for reading my stories.
I know this one was a little darker I have been trying to remember this is just a fiction not really something I would want to do.
I have always been leery of writing something really dark not wanting to make it seem I want to do those things,
I am a full believer in trust and the continued ability to play with my partners and would never intentionally harm or break their trust.
Thanks again
Mikel