Horrifyingly compelling read. Made more intense by my personal aversion to all things medical. The normalization of Marie's torture made it more surreal, and the details and realism of her predicaments fascinated me.
I know it's a bdsm story on a kinky website, but I was pulling for Marie's escape attempt and hope to see her dish out a few more epic ass beatings, in detail, especially to those bitchy Saturday staffers.
On a technical side, I was thrown off by some of the dialog switching within paragraphs, and the story could benefit from another proofreading pass.
Look forward, with dreadful anticipation, to the next chapters.
Eido