The Detectives And The Dominatrix by Rbbral

[mactex]

Hi Rbbral, As you have said its not upto you, however I wish Gromet would hurry up and post the next chapters! very interested to find out how she ensnares the Detective.

thanks Mactex

[Gromet]

Part 6, 7 & 8 are now online.

[bert56]

yabba dabba doo!

[rbbral]

Thanks again, Bert, hope you enjoyed the latest episodes. Only two more to come....

[mactex]

thanks Gromet

and thank you Rbbral looking forward to the last 2 episodes

Mactex

[feathersntar]

Just read the next installment - actually I downloaded the whole story to my ereader (for personal reading only) and enjoyed the whole story from the start again. This is a beautiful and engaging piece of prose, sexy naturally but really a great story...

I am so looking forward to what happens next...

Thank you, ever so much...

Rich

[bert56]

Al,
Loved the episodes!  Meeting Mum and Dad?  You sadist!!! :
You do wander down unexpected pathways!  Only two episodes left and so many threads to finish!   

[mari0]

I adore the way this story hops across genres and perspectives.
The shift to Ruby, then back, the shift from the tension of unfamilair bondage to the "mundane" horror of meeting your boyfriends parents, the cunningly phrased bet leading to public predicament.
But most I think I love the characters, the way they resist change to well worn routines and the growth in character that comes with it.

Looking forward to seeing where you will take us next

[rbbral]

Thanks for taking the time to comment. Supportive or critical, I always appreciate feedback. We all write just for the pleasure, but to know people read them, like them and actually then even make comments is a big bonus. This is probably the most comments I've had, and yet, it's probably not my own favourite story, but there you are.

All these nice comments make me feel perhaps I should extend the story, clearly there is lots of potential to extend the existing characters, or bring new ones in. The difficulty in writing a story is not starting, or really getting into it, it's knowing when to stop, for me anyway.

It could go on a long while, but I then I usually think of another completely different story that I can't get out of my mind, so move on, no regrets really.

Anyway, when Gromet posts the last two parts I hope you like them.

[mari0]

Not sure why this story, of all the great ones you posted, attracts the most comments.
Maybe it's a zeitgeist thing as much as a story one.
This is a relentlessly nice and positive story where kinks are explored, not shamed, people are friendly and understanding.
In a world like we have today I atleas need some of that more than ever.
(which is not to say that I also don't enjoy darker stories but thats besides my point here)

Definitely looking forward to those last parts as well.

[mari0]

Just finished the last one and I can only say perfect conclusion to the series.
It's sweet, genuinely loving and kinky as fuck.

With these chapters I completely concurr to your sentiment.
Obviously there are still things you could write about but in a way that would be fan service, like a TV series that has gone on for too long.
Thanks for creating this world and I am looking forward to reading your next one