Author Topic: Looking for comparable story suggestions?  (Read 3020 times)

Offline swfdressed4good2

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Looking for comparable story suggestions?
« on: January 15, 2018, 01:50:00 am »
My post references two stories...
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Story #1 of 2 = The story "My Lucky Life"
(Link removed)

Ignoring some of the unrealistic parts

Also I don't like the underage female  -- I saved it as text file and for my reading I had to change this to 18 years old (also modify certain school years references)
No into underage stories.

Lastly I kind of wish the Male Dom didn't be such a mean person manipulating the young girl's mind and emotions... the author even wrote sections of inner monologue to the affect of "I am an evil manipulating bastard" or such

But there is stuff about the story I like.

The young girl pushing her limits (without going beyond reluctant consent)

Naturally I like the idea of a virgin female submissive first time sex "during strict heavy bondage" (as per the story).

I also like that this story has enough length to it to give a good attempt at character development (not the best example of character development)


Too bad there is no sequal to the story... even though the story hints at "summer training" ideas.


What do you think would be a good comparable story?

I assume nobody has ever found a sequal to this story?

Has this author written anything else?
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Story #2 of 2 =  "The Long Hard Weekend"
http://www.boundstories.net/storieslr/longhardweekend.html

Any suggestions you feel are comparable?

Any suggestions for further reading?

Link removed to BDSM Library because story referenced violates Gromet’s Plaza guidelines.
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« Last Edit: January 16, 2018, 03:34:58 pm by 64Fordman »

 

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