The Laundromat by DownTheHobbittHole

[Gromet]

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http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machine/storieslr/laundromat.html
Solo-F; laundromat; accident; machine/f; process; strip; wash; scrub; foam; insert; denial; dried; packaged; bagged; conveyor; cons/nc; X

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[ElectroPainLover]

Interesting story DownTheHobbitHole. A nice job. A few rough edges that should work themselves out as you write more and gain experience...experience we writers never quit learning from.

As it appears to be your first story; at least here on Gromet's; it is a very nice piece of work. Keep up the writing. I look forward to reading more from you.

Dana

[64Fordman]

Quite interesting how you switch between first, second and third person narrative, yet make it work. Very nice story, thank you.