Discontinued Item by 64Fordman

[Gromet]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.packagedstories.net/storiesad/discontinueditem.html
FF/f; MFF/f; bond; rope; gag; tape; suitcase; store; transport; delivery; discovery; hotel; cart; room; cartrunk;  rescue; babywear; pacifier; public; hum; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks   

[superdude103194]

To be honest, I'm not sure the writing style worked out here. The lack of block paragraphs combined with the jumping between characters left me quite confused.

[64Fordman]

Thank you for your feedback Superdude, I like to experiment with different styles. It's helpful to hear when they don't work.