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Caught in Chastity by Jackie Rabbit

Started by teanndaorsa, February 15, 2025, 08:34:03 PM

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An interesting and welcome part 4.  I think we can safely assume the "bet" was about how well her husband would take to a second dominant woman bossing him around, and also how he would respond to being introduced to the "meditation room", a name / description that does make me smile :)

His internal world, the thoughts and concerns all ring very true and real, you really can see how he would be having such thoughts, concerns and worries, locked away in the darkness, wondering what his wife was really thinking and doing.

The introduction to the "power women" of the area makes so much sense as the reason for her being off on her own, there is a quiet sense that this is opening a new door for her, for them, and setting them on the road to riches and community standing.

For all of this, I think this part lacks some of the power and feeling of the earlier parts, since its more "quiet inner world" and looking at how he is thinking and responding to all of this.  It does wrap things up rather nicely though, and does offer answers to the big questions here :)

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