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Packaged & Encasement => Packaged Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on January 10, 2023, 10:29:20 pm
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesad/denise_in_a_tight_spot.html
M/f; F/f; fpov; dungeon; gibbet; cage; ironmaiden; collar; scolds-bridle; public; display; rom; cons; X
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesad/denise_in_a_tight_spot2.html
F/f; fpov; gag; pillory; public; display; costume; strip; punishment; latex; sleepsack; entombed; encased; buried; cons; X
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesad/denise_in_a_tight_spot3.html
F/f; MF/f; fpov; bond; public; display; pillory; spank; castle; rope; roleplay; costume; gag; scolds-bridle; susp; strip; flogger; enclosed; mast; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesad/denise_in_a_tight_spot4.html
F/f; M+/f; bond; fpov; rope; bench; cell; dungeon; costume; roleplay; corset; hood; armbinder; blindfold; analhook; collar; clamps; pillory; public; oral; group; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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Wow great story. Well written. It’s a story I would read several times. Also hoping it would continue.
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I really enjoyed this, the basic concept of a castle putting on a show comes up occasionally, and it is one that always interests me, since it just has so much wonderful potential built right into it, without needing to put much work into the situation, to help things come to life.
Part 1 is really very gentle, and rather romantic, young love finally being confessed and shared :) The whole experience is fun, sexy, and the situation and setting works really well. The twists at the end of part 1, the things we are told, that really is quite the surprise, but it also helps to explain why her role as the captive is accepted so easily and works so well. Clearly a sexy woman playing the role of the captive is just a terrible burden placed upon the business, so they are very brave to accept this, and try to cope with the horror that sex sells *giggles*
Having reached the end of part 1 I was really pleased to see a part 2 ready and waiting already for me. Seeing how the castle tours have really embraced her acceptance of her role as the wicked wench who always needs to be punished is an absolute delight! The early comment about wandering hands seems odd, but makes so much more sense by the end, when we know much more about what is going on here.
The whole Egyptian theme is done very well, and I do enjoy the comedy elements being worked into it, to keep the audience engaged and happy with the events!
Speaking as a self confessed "soppy romantic" I am a little unsettled by the ending, since it has echo's of some rather dark stories that I know some people do enjoy, even if they are not my thing. Still, it is what she wanted and clearly enjoys!
Given how well her role of naught wench works, and all of the lovely opportunities this situation / setting offers, I do hope that we can see some more parts to this sexy and fun story!
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Enjoyed the two stories. Thanks for sharing.
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Part 3 up tonight, enjoy!
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I was thrilled to see more parts of this go up, but I was a bit surprised at first, reading part 3, since things seemed to have gone backwards. Then again, things ended with such an "extreme", but also not really easy to follow up on event, that something had to change if the story was to continue.
It was really good to see Denise once more being such a focal spot for the entertainment of the guests. It was sad to read that her hopefully to be boyfriend had moved on though, but to be fair, he really didn't feature in part 2, so I was left wondering what was going on there, especially in light of her being so happy to reward good work during part 2, since this didn't really fit in well with some traditional relationships.
Seeing Denise put to work as a serving wench has a very satisfying and fitting feeling, it works so well with the whole theme of the venue. Combine this with the fact that now two of the women in charge of events are properly up to speed on her submissive nature and desire to be bound and punished, and life is clearly looking up for her. I do wonder if her mother is ever going to make a reappearance, even if only to offer further incriminating evidence at one of her "trials", to make sure that the guilty one gets the punishment she so desperately needs and desires :) There is just something quite delightful about the idea of her mother being released from her own bondage just to make sure that her daughter gets tied up and punished :)
The trial works well, and the idea that she is being judged for bewitching and tempting the men who visit really made me laugh, especially since she is being used as eye candy, so this is basically her official job role :)
The punishment seemed a little odd in the moment, but thinking about it, drowning the witch is very much on topic, and I really did enjoy how everyone "accidentally" left her sealed up and tucked away for the night. Almost as if this was organised deliberately ;)
Part 4, it feels like the story is hitting its stride once more, since we are back to being a bit more "forceful", after the rather extreme events of part 2 and the much milder part 3. I do have to say that I fully applauded Denise's giving nature, having won the contest to make sure that she has a good role for the visitors, it is only right to make sure that all those other tour guides who have done so much to make use of her for the visitors delight, put her on show and have a quick grope finally get to really enjoy her charms :)
The mental image of her regularly being forced to put on a very revealing and bound wet t-shirt look, top and bottom, really does warm my heart and brings a smile to my face. I always loved the setting, and thought that it had quite a lot of scope for return visits, so I do hope that Gromet has some more ideas and plans for this naughty lady, and we can read about more of her adventures and punishments soon!
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I am still finding Denise's exploits fun to read.