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Packaged & Encasement => Packaged Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on December 05, 2022, 07:36:00 pm
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display1.html
M/f; fpov; display; objectify; public; susp; naked; toys; insert; impale; bond; cuffs; climax; feeding-tube; rope; oral; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display2.html
MF/f; fpov; display; objectify; bond; rope; gag; public; outdoors; leash; susp; feeding-tube; toys; buttplug; cuffs; spreader; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display3.html
M/f; fpov; bond; rope; leash; gag; cuffs; toys; buttplug; display; objectify; naked; piercing; sold; trick; cons; reluct; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display4.html
M/f; fpov; bond; rope; display; objectify; gag; leash; susp; cuffs; collar; grope; climax; feeding-tube; X-frame; sex; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display5.html
M/f; bond; rope; gag; naked; display; objectify; toys; buttplug; climax; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display6.html
M/f; bond; rope; naked; display; objectify; gag; susp; bedtie; frogtie; analhook; cook; trick; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display7.html
M/f; M+/f+; bond; rope; naked; display; objectify; gag; kidnap; machine; susp; cons; nc; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display8.html
M/f; FM+/f; bond; rope; naked; display; objectify; gag; toys; cook; machine; cage; susp; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display9.html
F/f; M/f; bond; rope; naked; gag; display; objectify; susp; collar; basement; sleepsack; mast; toys; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display10.html
M/f; F/f; bond; rope; pregnancy; naked; display; objectify; gag; susp; cons; X
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display11.html
M/f; F/f; bond; rope; display; objectify; naked; gag; bagged; vacuum; susp; hood; climax; sold; transport; trick; buttplug; oil; cons; X
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display12.html
M/f; F/f; bond; rope; display; objectify; naked; gag; susp; force-feed; vacuum; wrap; hood; transported; toys; oral; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display13-1.html
objectify; cons; X
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display13-2.html
M/f; fpov; objectify; bond; rope; naked; sex; gag; display; susp; transported; cons; X
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display13-3.html
M+/f+; fpov; objectify; public; display; naked; susp; sold; cuffs; machine; force-feed; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display13-4.html
M/f; fpov; bond; objectify; public; display; susp; naked; gag; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display13-5.html
M/f; fpov; bond; objectify; public; display; susp; clamps; cuffs; spreader; toys; naked; gag; cons; XX
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display13-6.html
M+/f; F/f; fpov; objectify; naked; display; public; susp; rope; transported; toys; grope; cons; nc; X
https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/emma_on_display13-7.html
M+/f; fpov; objectify; public; display; naked; susp; transported; rope; gag; sold; piercing; feeding-tube; frottage; climax; cons; XX
https://www.maidbots.net/storiesek/emmabot_on_display.html
M/f; fpov; sexbot; public; display; objectify; F2doll; doll; collar; machine; costume; frame; mind-control; programmed; oral; climax; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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I have read the story several times. Looking every day for the continued episode. Well written. Thanks for giving us so good well written stories.
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Wish granted :-P
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Thanks :)
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I loved this story. I'm not into the whole meat girl thing, but this story, as I read it, was more about the psychology of role playing, with the meat girl serving as a representation of the girl's livestock like status.
The writer did a wonderful job of describing what was going on Emma's head, and explaining why she was so turned on by the fantasy (even if she didn't want the reality). The goal is to edge yourself, and feel the risk and danger and humiliation, ramping it up as far as possible so you get 99.99999999999% of the way there, without ever adding that final decimal point.
The other aspect of the story that I love is how, once in her role, things go out of control. Losing control is part of the fantasy, of course, so adding some REAL danger only makes it more exciting. You capture the mental game perfectly.
The obvious way to do that is to include people in the game who don't realize who she is, and will treat her like just another piece of meat. So the drivers and customers become part of the thrill, as they are giving her that genuine experience.
Once Emma becomes livestock, and totally objectified, so being left in the store over night, or having her head shaved, or being bar coded, or even sold, become routine. Nick can walk past her without even noticing her, because, after all, she's only inventory.
Brilliantly written. As a side not, I've written a number of slave girl stories on Literotica that have a similar tone. I hope one of my stories inspires you, the way your story inspired me.
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Part 6 and 7 up tonight, a few more in the queue will be coming soon, enjoy!
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one of these days emma is going to wind up on someone's dinner plate with no way for nick to save her. :3
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one of these days emma is going to wind up on someone's dinner plate with no way for nick to save her. :3
Perhaps, but not today! Part 11 up tonight, and more in the queue... :-)
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Those paying attention will have noted the shift from devouredstories.net to packagedstories.net with the start of part 13. If Emma ever does end up on someone's dinner plate, it'll go back! :-P
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The mental games of living out one's fantasies with a sense of real danger sticks out the most. We get teased at things going severely wrong which leads me at least to see how it all concludes. It had felt like it ended when she got pregnant but guess once a meatgirl, always a meat girl. Need that thrill.
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It was overall an interesting and fun journey that ended in a way I have come to expect from Gromet's stories. The premise was odd initially but as I read on and figured out what it was really about, I was more drawn into the mental aspect that Emma endured as she found herself in various while living out fantasies and desires. I am glad I gave this series a chance and stuck through it.
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And a little maidbot/sexbot themed entry to round out the series, posted today :-)
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Loved it, hope there is more coming!
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Great adaptation!
Really enjoyed this story!
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I very much enjoyed the bot story. I have not read the other ones. But that bot one was very well written and fun.
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It will be interesting to see how the bot story evolves compared to the original. I'm always happy to see more maidbot stories.