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You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/a_mental_balancing_act.html
F/f; bond; incest; latex; blindfold; gag; collar; catsuit; corset; armbinder; toys; buttplug; clamps; tease; flogger; dungeon; mast; oral; cons; XX
https://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/a_mental_balancing_act2.html
F/f; fpov; latex; catsuit; leash; cuffs; collar; spreader; clamps; electro; tens; oral; toys; buttplug; hood; corset; climax; pain; tease; rom; cons; XX
https://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/a_mental_balancing_act3.html
F/f+; fpov; bond; latex; cuffs; pain; buttplug; toys; electro; oral; clamps; gag; catsuit; hood; corset; climax; pain; clamps; tease; cons; XXX
https://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/a_mental_balancing_act4.html
F+/f; fpov; bond; latex; cuffs; spreader; pain; dungeon; mast; buttplug; toys; catsuit; hood; corset; climax; pain; clamps; tease; incest; cons; XXX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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This story was really one of the best.
I'd like to read further adventures by this trio. Victoria could dominate Rachel too. Or maybe they could exchange roles, in a planned escalation of torments.
Nicole could be a slave of both.
Pair (or trio) self-bondage sessions could also happen...
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This story was really one of the best.
I'd like to read further adventures by this trio. Victoria could dominate Rachel too. Or maybe they could exchange roles, in a planned escalation of torments.
Nicole could be a slave of both.
Pair (or trio) self-bondage sessions could also happen...
Thank you very much!
Part 2 is already submitted and I am currently working on part 3. Part 4 is somewhat finished idea-wise. I do not want to give away anything but Rachel will most likely "be back" although most likely not exactly as you suggest.
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I look forward to reading the rest...
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Part 2 up tonight, enjoy!
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Thank you for continuing this story!
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Thank you for continuing this story!
Most welcome 😅
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I have enjoyed the story so far and looking forward to where it heads.
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I have enjoyed the story so far and looking forward to where it heads.
Thanks, glad you like it 🥰
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English is not my native language, so please excuse my grammar. I really like the very detailed description in your Mrs Andersson, which gives me a very strong picture. And the new work A Mental Balancing Act I like better, your description of latex is still meticulous, and your setting of the characters makes me feel innovative: Victoria was not a mistress at the beginning, and Rachel was not a natural sub (although I have read It's her end, hope I'm wrong). I have read too much BDSM literature, and most of the roles have been fixed, as if there is only one side of a person. I always have a question, why DOM will always be DOM, and SUB will always be SUB? Hope you write better and better. :)
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I really like the very detailed description in your Mrs Andersson, which gives me a very strong picture. And the new work A Mental Balancing Act I like better, your description of latex is still meticulous, and your setting of the characters makes me feel innovative
Thanks! I try to make the reader "care" for my characters and perhaps give them an insight in to what they are about. Personally that is quite important for me when i read stories :)
I always have a question, why DOM will always be DOM, and SUB will always be SUB?
That's a very good question and i could write loads about my thoughts about it, but as a switch I tend to agree. Personally I think that anyone can dom or sub, it all comes down to with whom you interact with.
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Part 3 up tonight, enjoy...
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I'm excited for your update, I'm pleasantly surprised by the new chapter. Victoria made a big change, although she gave the reason for the change, but I think this change is too hasty. I think you can add more space to describe The change of Victoria's psychology or behavior makes her character more three-dimensional and the story more fluid. I'm glad you adopted my last suggestion (maybe it's my self-indulgence :P, maybe it's a coincidence.), I hope it hasn't changed you The original frame of the story. Looking forward to the follow-up development of the story.
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I'm excited for your update, I'm pleasantly surprised by the new chapter. Victoria made a big change, although she gave the reason for the change, but I think this change is too hasty. I think you can add more space to describe The change of Victoria's psychology or behavior makes her character more three-dimensional and the story more fluid. I'm glad you adopted my last suggestion (maybe it's my self-indulgence :P, maybe it's a coincidence.), I hope it hasn't changed you The original frame of the story. Looking forward to the follow-up development of the story.
Glad you like it :)
To be Frank I already have the story arc more or less locked in way before I start to write so any feedback, although nice to get, never really makes an impact on the outcome of the story. I write first and foremost for my own sake and is purely an creative outlet. If people find what i write enjoyable, awesome - if not, then they don't ::)
Also, since Teann Daorsa reads through and verifies all stories submitted on the site there is a bit of an understandable backlog. So when people give feed back I am usually one or two parts further down the line already ;)
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Thank you for your work, I really enjoy your wrirting. Whilst the bondage is so extreme as to be unsafe and unrealistic, I take it as the fantasy as it's suppoed to be and do enjoy it.
I felt that the way Miss Tia handled the reveleation was just too unrealistic, though. Throughout the chapter, we see Miss Tia adjust her approach to Victoria, based on how Victoria's acting - whic his pwaht a professional does. Therefore it is uncharacteristic for Miss Tia to essentially abandon Victoria in the way she did, let alone apply time locks which, short of cutting expensive equipment, cannot be released. If I had been in Miss Tia's position, I would have released Victoria whilst giving her a piece of my mind before leaving. No professional would leave a novice in that state. It's just not done. That really took me out the moment and spoiled the chapter for me. It just didn't make any sense.
It's your story to write, and again I do enjoy your work - I'm hoping this is contructive criticism and not a reader telling an author how to write.
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Just read Act 4 and am really enjoying this story. I think it's the mother daughter thing that adds a dimension not generally found in erotic literature. I know it's a bit creepy if one came across it IRL but hey, this is fantasy (perhaps?!) so pretty much anything goes. Keep up the good work, I look forward to Act 5.
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I have enjoyed bondage both as a top and a bottom but I have never approached anything as radical as described here. Parts of it seem to be too radical for real life, judging from my personal experience, but it is still an exceptionally arousing story.
I found the mother/daughter, incest, aspect of it especially interesting. All young men fantasize about having sex with their mother when they first become aware of their sexuality sexual and I certainly fantasized about her to being a "dommy mommy". I never had the nerve to discuss it with her.
Keep up the good work!
Coinflipper
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Thank you for your work, I really enjoy your wrirting. Whilst the bondage is so extreme as to be unsafe and unrealistic, I take it as the fantasy as it's suppoed to be and do enjoy it.
I felt that the way Miss Tia handled the reveleation was just too unrealistic, though. Throughout the chapter, we see Miss Tia adjust her approach to Victoria, based on how Victoria's acting - whic his pwaht a professional does. Therefore it is uncharacteristic for Miss Tia to essentially abandon Victoria in the way she did, let alone apply time locks which, short of cutting expensive equipment, cannot be released. If I had been in Miss Tia's position, I would have released Victoria whilst giving her a piece of my mind before leaving. No professional would leave a novice in that state. It's just not done. That really took me out the moment and spoiled the chapter for me. It just didn't make any sense.
It's your story to write, and again I do enjoy your work - I'm hoping this is contructive criticism and not a reader telling an author how to write.
Glad that you like it and as you say, since this is fiction i take a lot of liberties that would not work in the real world. This is possibly not for everyone but as I have mentioned earlier i write these mainly for myself as an creative outlet. If folks like it, Yay! If not, well not much I will do about that to be Frank ;)
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Just read Act 4 and am really enjoying this story. I think it's the mother daughter thing that adds a dimension not generally found in erotic literature. I know it's a bit creepy if one came across it IRL but hey, this is fantasy (perhaps?!) so pretty much anything goes. Keep up the good work, I look forward to Act 5.
Thank you very much and glad you like it! Agree that the mother/daughter is very enticing as a fantasy but quite sure I would find it strange and even creepy if seen IRL 😅
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I have enjoyed bondage both as a top and a bottom but I have never approached anything as radical as described here. Parts of it seem to be too radical for real life, judging from my personal experience, but it is still an exceptionally arousing story.
I found the mother/daughter, incest, aspect of it especially interesting. All young men fantasize about having sex with their mother when they first become aware of their sexuality sexual and I certainly fantasized about her to being a "dommy mommy". I never had the nerve to discuss it with her.
Keep up the good work!
Coinflipper
Thank you, glad you find it to your liking 🥰 Yes, I usually write very extreme scenarios that are not sane to perform IRL but that is what fiction is for I think. Regarding "all young men fantasize about having sex with their mother" I respectfully disagree, at least in my own experience but each to their own for sure.
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I've read this story a few times and am wondering if you are still writing future parts for this one. It is most enjoyable.
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I've read this story a few times and am wondering if you are still writing future parts for this one. It is most enjoyable.
I have a seed for a new chapter but has not started writing anything yet. Hopefully will soon 😊