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Title: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: teanndaorsa on January 04, 2022, 08:36:34 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/mrs_andersson1.html
F/f; fpov; latex; hood; catsuit; straps; collar; cuffs; gag; mast; heels; tease; climax; feet; cons; X

https://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/mrs_andersson2.html
F/f; fpov; bond; latex; cuffs; spreader; electro; pain; buttplug; toys; catsuit; hood; corset; armbinder; climax; susp; hum; machine; pain; clamps; crop; predicament; tease; torture; mast; cons; reluct; XXX

https://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/mrs_andersson3a.html
F+/f; fpov; bond; forniphilia; hum; cuffs; collar; leash; gag; spit; spreader; electro; intubate; catheter; toys; insert; buttplug; latex; catsuit; corset; hood; chair; paddle; torture; mast; extreme; cons; XXX

https://www.latexstories.net/storieslr/mrs_andersson3b.html
F+/f; F/m; fpov; bond; hum; ponygirl; gag; cuffs; straps; harness; intubate; corset; collar; buttplug; clamps; toys; insert; latex; catheter; electro; torture; spit; treadmill; machine; tease; denial; squirt; extreme; cons; XXX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: glasgow-sub on January 08, 2022, 02:54:05 PM
I enjoyed it very much and hope you follow it up with more of Mrs Andersson's training and sessions
Title: Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: morkaii on January 20, 2022, 03:40:45 PM
I enjoyed it very much and hope you follow it up with more of Mrs Andersson's training and sessions

Thank you!

Part 3 is in the works :)
Title: Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: absolutist on January 20, 2022, 09:22:31 PM
Hello morkaii,

quite the experience you're putting the adventurous Mrs. Andersson through. I for one look forward to read about her further trials and tribulations. Thanks for sharing this story!

Cheers, Absolutist
Title: Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: mickey on January 21, 2022, 12:03:26 AM
Really loved this story, thank you. Best on this site in a while. Constructive criticism, the jump in play level between part 1 and part 2 is quite rapid, maybe a more gentle transition in future stories. I know i myself would panic and it does kill the scene when you have to call a timeout.

You write better than me and my first language is english :)
Title: Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: morkaii on January 21, 2022, 08:26:55 AM
Hello morkaii,

Thanks for sharing this story!

Cheers, Absolutist

Thank you and glad you like it! 🖤
Title: Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: morkaii on January 21, 2022, 08:33:49 AM
Really loved this story, thank you. Best on this site in a while. Constructive criticism, the jump in play level between part 1 and part 2 is quite rapid, maybe a more gentle transition in future stories. I know i myself would panic and it does kill the scene when you have to call a timeout.

Thanks! 🖤

Point taken, the jump is intentional in this case since as I want my protagonist to experience the panic and feeling of being WAY WAY in over her head as part of her story arc. Could probably have been better written and executed.

That said, your criticism is well received and I have learned that next time i do such a lengthy story I need to have a more complete story arc before starting writing at all.
Title: Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: teanndaorsa on February 19, 2022, 06:25:33 PM
Part 3 up in two parts tonight
Title: Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: T.H. on February 20, 2022, 03:52:09 PM
I've missed the first two parts and started reading from the beginning in one go.

That approach was a mistake. At 1/3 of part 3a I started just to feel numb... At the end of 3a I was in a (yeah whatever... mode) It felt like predicament was set up on predicament on predicament and... well... I wasn't bored each and everyone of the settings and encounters was interesting in its own way... but there was simply so much of it.

I was just numb. I know it should have made me feel something but simply didn't. On the other hand... It was kinda fitting because at such long sessions the "victim" recedes into numbness.

Maybe there is kind of a lesson to be had here: too much of a good thing can get 'meh'... (or something?)

Maybe I'll restart 3a tommorow again and reading it 'fresh' changes things?


In the end... I would be very disappointed if there wouldn't be any interaction between Mrs. Anderson and her stepdaughter.
Just... please keep it at the mortifying humiliation. Life's too short for depressing smut.
Title: Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: mari0 on February 21, 2022, 08:33:23 AM
I love this series. Yes it is intense, yes having all of episode 3 happen in a single stay would be pushing physical limits but damn do I love the fantasy. Also I love the airy nature, it’s intense for sure but playful and happy and that is completely my jam
Title: Re: Mrs Andersson by Marcus
Post by: T.H. on February 23, 2022, 04:25:01 PM
I've reread parts 3a and 3b again while fresh and it was a good read.
That reminds me that "fluff-elements" sometimes are good for pacing-reasons, so that the reader doesn't burn out.