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Title: Perspectives by Jack Peacock
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 10, 2021, 09:11:37 pm

You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storieslr/perspectives1.html
M/f; bond; blindfold; cage; collar; gag; straps; breathplay; captive; naked; sendep; reluct; XX

https://www.boundstories.net/storieslr/perspectives2.html
M/f; bond; blindfold; straps; captive; naked; sendep; reluct; XX

https://www.boundstories.net/storieslr/perspectives3.html
M/f; cage; handcuffs; straps; captive; naked; public; rom; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Title: Re: Perspectives by Jack Peacock
Post by: MasterKGray on March 12, 2021, 05:49:57 am

Excellent beginning, grabbed my attention right from the opening lines.  Please continue...

Title: Re: Perspectives by Jack Peacock
Post by: MasterKGray on March 15, 2021, 02:19:02 am

I like where this is going, more excellent work.  Take away her freedom piece by piece... delicious!

Title: Re: Perspectives by Jack Peacock
Post by: MasterKGray on March 16, 2021, 03:37:18 am

Very nice story, I like how chapter 3 ended, where it could be left to your imagination, or continued ...?

Title: Re: Perspectives by Jack Peacock
Post by: Eido on March 16, 2021, 03:02:30 pm

Gripping, compelling, and tremendously creepy. I had to force myself to slow down and really read instead of skimming the uncomfortable parts. Not a complaint, just one of the ways I know a story has affected me.

Enjoyed the slow build and couldn't help but wonder where the line between fantasy and reality existed.

Thanks for sharing your work,
Eido

Title: Re: Perspectives by Jack Peacock
Post by: jakbird on April 15, 2021, 01:22:32 pm

Tremendously creepy, the highest form of praise...at least for this kind of story.  I strive to construct a different kind of story, starting with a sort of "gedankenexperiment" (a physics term, thought experiment, invented by some guy named Einstein), create a scenario, then ask what has to be realistic to lead to that result, and finally build a story around it.  Where does the line cross into fantasy?  Maybe someone else can answer; I have no idea.  Maybe there is no line....
  Jack Peacock

Title: Re: Perspectives by Jack Peacock
Post by: Redhead on May 30, 2021, 07:14:03 pm

Great story Jack Peacock. Please continue my friend!!!

Best regards,

-Redhead