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Title: The Blue Suitcase for Kinks by Polythene WrappedMe
Post by: teanndaorsa on April 25, 2020, 02:11:24 pm

You can view the story here on the plaza:

[EDIT]: The author has since withdrawn this story, it is no longer available on the Plaza
Solo-M; Sbm; packaged; mast; voyeur; discarded; garbage; truck; compacted; death; caught; accident; cons; XXX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

Title: Re: The Blue Suitcase for Kinks by Polythene WrappedMe
Post by: Polythenewrappedme on April 29, 2020, 09:34:20 pm

Amazingly, you can see the blue suitcase from 4 minutes 45 seconds in the video, till the end.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rDTCB03CKsA

It is crushed the first time, shortly after being loaded in, with the trash at 4 mins 59 secs. After the packer blade is stopped twice.  Would you scream ?

It falls back on the hopper at 6 mins 00 secs.

It is crushed a second time at 6 mins 12 secs.

It cannot been seen as the trash is crushed a third time.

However, it makes a reappearance, at 7 mins 53 secs.

It then gets crushed a fourth time at 9 mins 14 secs.

~~

All the time it miraculously looks unscathed for its adventure.

If you had zipped yourself up inside the suitcase, and got loaded into a Geesink Vulture, I wonder how many times you would have braved the hopper ?

All the way to the landfill site.

The sound of all that snapping crockery, being crushed with you !!

Title: Re: The Blue Suitcase for Kinks by Polythene WrappedMe
Post by: alsrx700 on April 30, 2020, 04:55:59 am

The blue suitcase is idestructable!    ;D ;D ;D

Title: Re: The Blue Suitcase for Kinks by Polythene WrappedMe
Post by: Polythenewrappedme on April 30, 2020, 10:35:21 am

Thanks alsrx700.

I hope so, I am in here !

Title: Re: The Blue Suitcase for Kinks by Polythene WrappedMe
Post by: GarbageBagDiaper on May 29, 2020, 02:47:52 pm

Cool story  :)

Title: Re: The Blue Suitcase for Kinks by Polythene WrappedMe
Post by: Polythenewrappedme on June 01, 2020, 08:19:45 pm

Hi GarbageBagDiaper,

Thanks for posting your feedback. I am glad you liked the story.

PWM

Title: Re: The Blue Suitcase for Kinks by Polythene WrappedMe
Post by: jana2002 on September 23, 2023, 04:23:35 pm

I just found this story again, slightly modified but still the same story I think. (I think the main character is older now.)
You can view the story at https://www.scribd.com/document/469310088/Country-Of-Dreams