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Title: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 22, 2020, 09:26:53 pm
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/building_reality.html
F/f; latex; catsuit; bond; chastity; toys; oral; hypno; cell; cons; X

https://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/building_reality2.html
F/f; latex; chastity; toys; mind-control; hood; gag; collar; mast; shave; cuffs; mittens; electro; F2doll; denial; cons; reluct; XX

https://www.latexstories.net/storiesad/building_reality3.html
F/f; latex; bond; isolation; sendep; naked; catsuit; toys; hood; catheter; gag; blindfold; electro; objectify; cons; XXX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: jaymiechan on March 23, 2020, 12:20:31 am
minus the hypno this is the type of entrapment i love in a story. The hypno makes the loving consent at the end kinda questionable, though!

Did love the long term rubber, the room, the control of environment and clothing, the chastity; And really wondering how she was breathing in the box. Also, a plug that size locked in all the time can lead to....internal bruising >.>
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on March 23, 2020, 01:35:03 am
minus the hypno this is the type of entrapment i love in a story. The hypno makes the loving consent at the end kinda questionable, though!

Hehe. This is one of those story where I flirted with the grey zone. :) So, questionable is the right term. I just wanted to experiment a bit and see. :) For what it's worth, I know Tracy really well and she loved every minute of it, and it was not because of the hypnosis. ;) (and now they are using the TV in the room to watch movies together on Friday night while cuddling in rubber.)

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Did love the long term rubber, the room, the control of environment and clothing, the chastity; And really wondering how she was breathing in the box. Also, a plug that size locked in all the time can lead to....internal bruising >.>

I thought about the air problem, but I made a conscious choice to leave it aside and focus on the fantasy as this was already a fictional story with non-realistic elements. I preferred to let rubber lovers imagine what it would feel like to be prisoner of such a confining box soundproofed and lined with cushy latex. :) ... I know I would love it.
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: jaymiechan on March 23, 2020, 02:05:57 pm
Thinking about it now, easy answer is an oxygen tank or two in the back of the box, hidden by the box's design, maybe.

But yeah, having to bend over to eat from bowls with a large toy locked in deep....ow >.>
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Sarah on March 24, 2020, 09:05:25 am
I enjoyed this story a lot. It was well written and imaginative. If the story was anything but fiction i would have been worried about the non consensuality of what April did to Tracey and the amount of time spent conditioning her to April's will. But since it was all fiction it was a very interesting read. Well done Tiger Stretch, keep up the good work.
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on March 24, 2020, 11:21:11 am
I enjoyed this story a lot. It was well written and imaginative. If the story was anything but fiction i would have been worried about the non consensuality of what April did to Tracey and the amount of time spent conditioning her to April's will. But since it was all fiction it was a very interesting read. Well done Tiger Stretch, keep up the good work.

*pets your pony head and gives you a carrot*  Thanks Sarah. I re-read it when Teann posted it and there are a couple of things I realized. One is that I'm not that experienced at writing shorter stories. It felt like every paragraph very moving the story forward. It felt rushed. Second, I used the 3rd person, and kept flipping back and forth between the two girls, which made me repeat their names a thousand times.

Morality, I think I like 1st person and long slow series much better. I'd have enjoyed to see this little kinky couple in a series. :)
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Sarah on March 24, 2020, 01:34:12 pm
hehe This pony would love to see this story as a series too but she fully understands that you have limited time as you have other stories running around in your creative head so she will forgive you this time.
Third person pony lol
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: rubberthing on March 24, 2020, 08:27:01 pm
Nice story, thank you!
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on March 24, 2020, 11:17:37 pm
hehe This pony would love to see this story as a series too but she fully understands that you have limited time as you have other stories running around in your creative head so she will forgive you this time.
Third person pony lol

*gives a third person carrots to the third person pony*
I wish I could write more about those two, but it would be difficult, yes.
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on March 24, 2020, 11:18:14 pm
Nice story, thank you!

You are welcome. Thanks for reading it.
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Sarah on March 31, 2020, 11:22:32 pm
*munches on both the first and third person carrots and whinnies my thanks* You could always write a whole new story about April and Tracey rather than trying to continue this one although I fro one would love to know what happens when Tracey is finally let out of her case. ;)
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: teanndaorsa on July 12, 2020, 09:52:29 am
Next part up today
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: jaymiechan on July 13, 2020, 07:37:53 pm
oof, looks like the gray zone flirting turned into a deep dive instead.
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on July 13, 2020, 09:55:52 pm
oof, looks like the gray zone flirting turned into a deep dive instead.

You know what ... I just realized that I forgot to add the note at the top of the story... Doh! I decided to write 2 sequels. One good ending and one dark ending ... Addiction is the good ending ... hehe ... no ... Addiction is clearly the dark ending. :)

The good one will definitely be more joyful than this one. hehe. I have yet to draft it though, I was too busy with other stories lately.
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: teanndaorsa on January 01, 2021, 07:47:50 pm
A new part up today. Double the fun!
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on January 01, 2021, 10:49:31 pm
Just a little note about Building Reality: Love ... It is the sequel of Building Reality, not the sequel of Building Reality addiction. It is an alternate ending.

So, in a nutshell:
Building Reality = Original story
Building Reality: Addiction = Bad ending sequel
Building Reality: Love = Good ending sequel

Enjoy!
TS
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: dengamle68 on January 04, 2021, 06:55:36 am
Wow, the story getting better and better, hoping for revenge and still love between them  ;) what Tracy loved the revenge done at her
Looking forward to the next  :D
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on January 04, 2021, 01:07:31 pm
Wow, the story getting better and better, hoping for revenge and still love between them  ;) what Tracy loved the revenge done at her
Looking forward to the next  :D

Thanks for reading. There won't be a next. This series is truly over. I have no more interest to work on it. It was supposed to be a one-off but I wrote 3 chapters. It's time for me to move on to other stories.
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Seyras on January 06, 2021, 11:14:02 pm
@Tigerstretch I really love the third chapter 🥰, I'm waiting for the fourth now 😋
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on January 06, 2021, 11:51:38 pm
@Tigerstretch I really love the third chapter 🥰, I'm waiting for the fourth now 😋

Haha. No! I'm DONE with this one. :) Glad you liked it, though.
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Dianag on January 07, 2021, 07:21:19 pm
Oh please, can't you stretch to a 4th chapter??
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on January 07, 2021, 10:02:35 pm
Oh please, can't you stretch to a 4th chapter??

Let's say you give me 20 stocks of Canadian National Railways, then I might consider it. ;)

But no, I wrote enough about those two girls. The style of building reality is not really one I like to use. I did it two more times because people asked me to, I was happy to oblige, but now I'm done.

Instead, there will be a story about mermaids coming soon... You like mermaids, right? :)
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Dianag on January 08, 2021, 04:48:02 pm
Sad to say, my supply of CNR stock is at an all time low just now, so I suppose I'll just have to wait for the mermaids to swim up from the depths !!
Title: Re: Building Reality by Tigerstretch
Post by: Tigerstretch on January 08, 2021, 04:59:18 pm
Sad to say, my supply of CNR stock is at an all time low just now, so I suppose I'll just have to wait for the mermaids to swim up from the depths !!

Darn! Those readers are so hard to extort these days. ;) Mermaids are coming... they were very deep, so they should arrive around the end of the month. (if Teann manages to catch them with her fishing net)