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Other Worlds Section => Pet & PonyGirl Stories => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on January 28, 2020, 09:47:57 pm
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia.html
M/f; rom; petgirl; catgirl; latex; catsuit; collar; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia2.html
M/f; rom; petgirl; catgirl; latex; catsuit; collar; oral; mud; breathplay; messy; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia3.html
M/f; rom; petgirl; catgirl; latex; catsuit; collar; oral; sex; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia4.html
M/f; rom; petgirl; catgirl; latex; catsuit; collar; oral; sex; cage; catheter; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia5.html
M/f; rom; petgirl; catgirl; latex; catsuit; collar; oral; sex; cage; catheter; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia6.html
M/f; latex; catgirl; petgirl; catsuit; rom; cage; catheter; blindfold; oral; sex; polyamory; trick; cons; XX
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia7.html
M/f+; F+/m; latex; catsuit; petgirl; catgirl; bond; rom; cage; catheter; blindfold; oral; sex; polyamory; cons; XX
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia8.html
M/f; F/f; catgirl; petgirl; catsuit; latex; oral; sex; spanking; catheter; rom; polyamory; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia9.html
F+/m; M/f; catgirl; latex; rom; bond; gag; tease; oral; sex; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia10.html
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia10-2.html
MF+; FF; M/f; rom; catgirl; latex; polyamory; ravish; roleplay; costume; maid; bond; gag; boxed; suitcase; tease; oral; sex; basement; bikini; force; naked; spank; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia11.html
M/f+; F/f; latex; catgirl; petgirl; oral; sex; strapon; maid; collar; polyamory; rom; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia11-2.html
M/f+; F/f; MF; latex; catgirl; petgirl; oral; sex; maid; hotel; collar; polyamory; rom; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia12-1.html
MF+; latex; catgirl; petgirl; oral; hotel; polyamory; rom; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia12-2.html
MF+; latex; catgirl; petgirl; oral; hotel; messy; mud; polyamory; rom; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia12-3.html
MF+; latex; catgirl; petgirl; oral; sex; hotel; polyamory; rom; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia13.html
M/f+; mpov; costume; catsuit; cage; shower; sleepsack; spank; denial; rom; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia14-1.html
F/f; FF; latex; petgirl; costume; collar; cafe; rom; cons; X
http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storiesek/feliformia14-2.html
FF; fpov; latex; petgirl; costume; collar; cafe; tease; oral; feet; rom; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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Liked this. Hope there's a lot more to come.
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I absolutely adore this little story. Such a fun and loving begin of the story.
Hope there is more to follow
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Lovely story so far. I hope it continues soon. :D
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I had no idea Teann created this post. :) I felt the need to register to the forum to let you know that I've seen your comments and appreciate them a lot. I've been following this site since the 90s, I couldn't even remember if I ever had an account.
Well, thanks for the kind words. I'm very grateful that you took the time to read my little story.
First, I need to apologize to Teann for submitting messed up versions of the chapters, it won't happen again. I have to be more patient and edit my texts better before being tempted to submit them. I feel so guilty every time I submit something, then realize it is full of errors.
I also apologize in advance for chapters 2 and 3. They are completed and currently with the admin, but I felt as if I struggled a bit while searching for a direction to take. I hope I didn't damage the characters you liked in the process and you'll still want to follow the story. All I can say is that I am personally much happier with chapters 4-5-6, but I have yet to edit those.
Thanks for reading and thanks to Teann for all the tips and patience.
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Parts 2 and 3 up today.
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Enjoying this story Tigerstretch. Hope to see more soon!
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Enjoying this story Tigerstretch. Hope to see more soon!
Glad you like the story so far. Kitty wanted to give you a hug, but she is tied up at the moment. ;)
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I like where this is going. So they bought some sex toys though, as in the new catsuit. Perhaps we can see some more of that in the following chapters and if they will become a happy family of three. :D Please don't take too long to continue this. I'm really enjoying this story.
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I like where this is going. So they bought some sex toys though, as in the new catsuit. Perhaps we can see some more of that in the following chapters and if they will become a happy family of three. :D Please don't take too long to continue this. I'm really enjoying this story.
I just talked with Kitty and she said "NO! You can't tell them."
So I guess you'll have to wait to find out what will happen next. ;) I mean, you can try sending her an email, but she can be quite stubborn.
However, chapter 4 is around the corner. Rejoice. Now that Kitty knows she is going to stay, we begin a new arc, which is super exciting to me.
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Hey, Kitty from Feliformia story had an idea today. She asked me to create her a Kik account so her "fans" can talk to her directly. ;)
Her Kik name is KittyRubberCat ... She is often in bondage, but be patient and she will get back to you. ;)
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I just talked with Kitty and she said "NO! You can't tell them."
So I guess you'll have to wait to find out what will happen next. ;) I mean, you can try sending her an email, but she can be quite stubborn.
However, chapter 4 is around the corner. Rejoice. Now that Kitty knows she is going to stay, we begin a new arc, which is super exciting to me.
Well, if she's in her catsuit perpetually, she won't be able to answer my e-mails... Darn, I really have to wait. :D
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I love your story Tigerstretch. I think, this is one of the best stories I've read in the last time! Very erotic AND very realistic.
But one question: How can Kitty use the loo? And wipe herself? With her pawns, she can't open the crotch zipper... or grap the paper... When Mark will be at work, he can't help her.
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I love your story Tigerstretch. I think, this is one of the best stories I've read in the last time! Very erotic AND very realistic.
But one question: How can Kitty use the loo? And wipe herself? With her pawns, she can't open the crotch zipper... or grap the paper... When Mark will be at work, he can't help her.
Thanks for the nice comment. it means a lot to me.
As per Chapter 3, only 24 hours elapsed so far on the timeline and Mark spent 100% of his time with Kitty. But you are right, her little paws are going to cause some challenges in her life. You may want to read chapter four when it is released.
As for number two, Kitty told me to never discuss this topic. Sorry, there won't be any reference to it in the story. :)
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As per Chapter 3, only 24 hours elapsed so far on the timeline and Mark spent 100% of his time with Kitty. But you are right, her little paws are going to cause some challenges in her life. You may want to read chapter four when it is released.
Thanks for your answer.
And be sure, I'm waiting wishfully for chapter four.
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I love the new chapters.
You mentioned you worried about doing the characters justice but in my mind (and given the other responses here) you did great.
Cant wait for the next chapters in this lovely tale
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I love the new chapters.
You mentioned you worried about doing the characters justice but in my mind (and given the other responses here) you did great.
Can't wait for the next chapters in this lovely tale
Thanks, Mari. You are right, I got amazing support from you, guys, so far. I'm so lucky.
There is a lot more coming as a reward. :)
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Chapter 4 up today.
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Chapter four is awesome again, Tigerstretch, I love it very much. But...
The remarkable about the first three chapters are their realism. You believe that it could happen to every man of us. That's so inspiring!
I'm sorry to say that with chapter four, imagination took over. Only one meal a day when caged? No good idea for an underweighted slim girly. Catheterized for two or three months? There's a risk of infections, incontinence and decreasing of bladder volume. Locked up nearly all day long? What's in case of fire etc.?
I think it's worth being considered.
Let's wait for chapter five. I'm dying to know what will happen.
(Please excuse my poor English, I'm not a native speaker)
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Chapter four is awesome again, Tigerstretch, I love it very much. But...
The remarkable about the first three chapters are their realism. You believe that it could happen to every man of us. That's so inspiring!
I'm sorry to say that with chapter four, imagination took over. Only one meal a day when caged? No good idea for an underweighted slim girly. Catheterized for two or three months? There's a risk of infections, incontinence and decreasing of bladder volume. Locked up nearly all day long? What's in case of fire etc.?
I think it's worth being considered.
Let's wait for chapter five. I'm dying to know what will happen.
(Please excuse my poor English, I'm not a native speaker)
Hey John. Thanks for your comments.
Sorry to hear that the story took a turn that you did not like. It was always intended to be a fictional story. To me, their emotions and profound love and how they help each other are what interest me the most. :) Doing this to Kitty was just an excuse to highlight that aspect.
That said, the story is already fully written. To you specifically, I'd say, wait until chapter 8 or 9 (if you are that patient) and based on what you said, I feel you are going to love it.
By the way your English is great. :)
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I like the idea of the cage, but I'm not sure about the catheter thing either. And it's in the way when fucking too. :D Perhaps they should tink about another way for that situation, perhaps a big litterbox under a floor with holes. Or Kitty needs a cage outside to spend the day. ;)
What will Kitty say, if her "owner" comes home with Erika? Will she get jealous? Or will she notice it at all? For now she is surely locked away in her box. ;)
Great work again, thanks for sharing it.
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I like the idea of the cage, but I'm not sure about the catheter thing either. And it's in the way when fucking too. :D Perhaps they should tink about another way for that situation, perhaps a big litterbox under a floor with holes. Or Kitty needs a cage outside to spend the day. ;)
What will Kitty say, if her "owner" comes home with Erika? Will she get jealous? Or will she notice it at all? For now she is surely locked away in her box. ;)
Great work again, thanks for sharing it.
It's okay to not like some aspects of a story. I don't even like everything I write myself. ;)
I am more following what the characters feel like trying. What feels right at the moment.
That said. Hang in there. Don't let this distract you from what is coming.
Kitty will give me a hard time if I were to spoil anything. But maybe Erika and Kitty paths will cross. Maybe Erika would have some influence on our characters ... Maybe some of the things you guys dislike will vanish ... So many maybes. ;)
I personally love Erika so much(don't tell Kitty). Chapter 5 have more of her I can't wait for it to be published. Chapter 5 might be hard to tolerate for some of you, but bear with me. The story will not continue on that path forever.
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Just registered to say how much i love this story, there should be more cute petplay fics!
Now i'm off to read the new chapter...
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Just registered to say how much i love this story, there should be more cute petplay fics!
Now i'm off to read the new chapter...
Haha! Kitty said "Rubber-dog pet knows what is good for the humanity."
Enjoy!
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I am firmly in team kitty.
How I love that girl, but not just her but also her "owner"
(you can debate who really owns who here ;) )
Thanks for chapter 4, looking forward to the next chapters.
And whoo that it's so many of them yet to come
Thanks again for writing these
-Mario
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I am firmly in team kitty.
How I love that girl, but not just her but also her "owner"
(you can debate who really owns who here ;) )
Thank you! That is exactly it.
Thanks for chapter 4, looking forward to the next chapters.
And whoo that it's so many of them yet to come
Thanks again for writing these
What amazes me the most is the reaction of people. It really helps when people give feedback like this. We should always comments on the stories we read.
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What amazes me the most is the reaction of people. It really helps when people give feedback like this. We should always comments on the stories we read.
I only comment stories which are outstanding or which are touching my heart.
This is the most commented story in the Gromets petgirl section. See it as a compliment on your awesome story.
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I only comment stories which are outstanding or which are touching my heart.
This is the most commented story in the Gromets petgirl section. See it as a compliment on your awesome story.
I'm definitely flattered I'm happy to have a chance to read and reply here. I'm not here for fame. I'm just here because I like making people happy. :D I want to hear about your ideas and criticism so I can achieve that goal. I do take in consideration everything that is said here. :)
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this story pretty much made me make an account, since (aside from the sex) it is pretty much ripped from my desires and fantasies...and i'm talking to someone about potentially being their doll and pet. >.>
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this story pretty much made me make an account, since (aside from the sex) it is pretty much ripped from my desires and fantasies...and i'm talking to someone about potentially being their doll and pet. >.>
Thanks for reading.
Kitty said : "I approve this message."
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this story pretty much made me make an account, since (aside from the sex) it is pretty much ripped from my desires and fantasies...and i'm talking to someone about potentially being their doll and pet. >.>
Thanks for reading.
Kitty said : "I approve this message."
for me, the difference is chastity belts and remote toys instead of sex. even more control lost, unable to even rub and masturbate. heh.
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Feeew! What a weekend. I finished editing Feliformia- chapter 6. I just submitted it. So it should be up in a couple of weeks. :)
Chapter 5 is somewhere in the queue already. Hopefully you'll enjoy it.
I also wrote the first chapter of a new story ... It is submitted as well. Maybe you'll want to take a look and let me know what you think once it's up. I'm quite proud of it. :)
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I have to admit new chapters in this story are why I refresh this site way more than I know I should.
Looking forward to you new story as well, I found your style so far novel in story and very pleasant. Always looking for more of that
-Mario
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I have to admit new chapters in this story are why I refresh this site way more than I know I should.
Looking forward to you new story as well, I found your style so far novel in stories and very pleasant. Always looking for more of that
-Mario
Hehe. I'm guilty of that too. It's coming. :) Please be patient with Teann. Did you see the amount of story that are published recently, it's nuts.
Here is a sample of chapter 5 to make your wait more bearable. ;)
“NO!”
“Kitty, stop acting like that.”
“No!”
“Why are you refusing to eat?”
“I’m not. I’m just not hungry.”
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:o you are making it worse!
But you are absolutely right, I love the influx of new stories and I am certainly grateful to Teann.
So I hope my "complaints" come across as the ramblings of an excited fanboy rather than a grifter of sorts
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:o you are making it worse!
But you are absolutely right, I love the influx of new stories and I am certainly grateful to Teann.
So I hope my "complaints" come across as the ramblings of an excited fanboy rather than a grifter of sorts
Thank you :-), they do.
Part 5 up today.
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And I love it, thnx Teann and Tigerstretch.
I'm actually starting to feel bad for Mark.
Rooting for him and Erika as kitty in her current state is like the loveliest of crosses to bear.
What I found interesting from a story perspective is the way the coffin is used.
As a tool it is not that uncommon but it's usually depicted. From the perspective of the submissive. I had never given it any thought how disempowering, in a way, it would be for the top.
Especially if he/she was looking for more than just submission
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Thanks, Tigerstretch, for this again awesome Chapter 5!
It's just a shame that these flashbacks are getting fewer and fewer. I love these fights between Mark and Kitty over everyday things.
In Chapter 5, you are using acronyms which I don't understand (I only have an idea):
"she was a >DG< for a big tool renting chain"
"self >TLC<"
Can you help, please?
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wow, part of me feels REALLY CALLED OUT by Kitty as a character, lol. and makes me glad she never heard of an esophagogastric tube instead of a nasogastric one.
also, sex coffin reminds me of this. https://i.imgur.com/ppkyP3n.jpg
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Thanks, Tigerstretch, for this again awesome Chapter 5!
It's just a shame that these flashbacks are getting fewer and fewer. I love these fights between Mark and Kitty over everyday things.
In Chapter 5, you are using acronyms which I don't understand (I only have an idea):
"she was a >DG< for a big tool renting chain"
"self >TLC<"
Can you help, please?
I had the same thing with DG
Given the context I had interpreted TLC as Tender Love(ing) Care
A phrase often used in the context of empathy or taking care of some ones emotional state. (in this case caring for his own emotional state)
Hope that's correct and helps
-Mario
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And I love it, thnx Teann and Tigerstretch.
I'm actually starting to feel bad for Mark.
Rooting for him and Erika as kitty in her current state is like the loveliest of crosses to bear.
What I found interesting from a story perspective is the way the coffin is used.
As a tool it is not that uncommon but it's usually depicted. From the perspective of the submissive. I had never given it any thought how disempowering, in a way, it would be for the top.
Especially if he/she was looking for more than just submission
Glad you liked it. That was the chapter I was the most nervous about. I saw the elements that my characters introduced as a risk that could have made people disconnect from the story.
It's interesting, indeed. I honestly didn't think about how other authors depicted similar scene in the past. I just wrote and described the feelings as I felt them, and they shaped the story line. I didn't have a desire to display the other side of the medal. I'm not that smart. It just happened.
I never plan any of my stories. You may not believe me, but the way I write is always the following.
1- I get a vague thought. Let's say, i want to write about a latex catgirl. (cause they are so cute)
2- I write down a title, just something random ... (as an exemple, for chapter 2, I was watching woodstock videos and Joe Cocker sang the song "With a little help from my friend". And when i wrote chapter 3, I watched a song from Richie Haven, Freedom. It makes no sense, but it is steering the storyline to a new place every single time.
3- I put a character or two in a location (Mark and Erika in a pub in this case)
4- I just follow them. I have no idea what they are going to do. (I honestly don't know)
In chapter 1, I had no idea what Mark was going to tell, no idea Kitty would appear, no idea why Mark was trying to date Erika while having Kitty already. I learned the reason only a few days before you did when I wrote chapter 5. When I write this way, all the ideas are coming effortlessly as if they are happening, I never get blocked and the story develops itself without any conflicts.
I'm not sure if that is why I present things differently ... But it seems to work for me so far.
Thanks, Mario!
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Thanks, Tigerstretch, for this again awesome Chapter 5!
It's just a shame that these flashbacks are getting fewer and fewer. I love these fights between Mark and Kitty over everyday things.
In Chapter 5, you are using acronyms which I don't understand (I only have an idea):
"she was a >DG< for a big tool renting chain"
"self >TLC<"
Can you help, please?
Ah yes, the flashbacks are coming to an end now that the timelines merged. Not much I can do about that. I'll miss them too.
DG = Director General ... we use that expression in our spoken language. High paying job position for smart people.
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wow, part of me feels REALLY CALLED OUT by Kitty as a character, lol. and makes me glad she never heard of an esophagogastric tube instead of a nasogastric one.
also, sex coffin reminds me of this. https://i.imgur.com/ppkyP3n.jpg
I remember that pic. Some people are lucky.
Kitty is cute. Nose tube is just fine. ;)
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Thanks, Tigerstretch and Mari0, for your explanations!
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With Chapter 6 on the way, I had to prepare chapter 7. I finished it today, now I just have to edit it. It is a much more casual one and it is a bit short, but I think it is a good thing after the very intense chapter 6.
The other thing is, I already wrote the final chapter, which is a 15000 words monster. (double the size of a regular chapter) ... Because of what I put in that final chapter, I had to align the earlier ones so there wouldn't be any weirdness. Because of that I re-wrote part of chapter 7 and I had to scrap 8 and 9 entirely.
So I think I can tell you today, with a certain degree of confidence that there will be a chapter 8, it will be mostly prep work for the grand finale, and the final chapter will be 9.
While i'm working on this, I already sent quite a bit of new material to Teann last weekend. Keep an eye open for those within the next couple of weeks. :)
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Darn it Tiger, this way I'll never get my incessant urge to refresh the site under control.
(well I guess after chapter 8, but then you start teasing a next story....)
Thanks for taking our minds of this whole Corona thing even for a little while.
-Mario
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Darn it Tiger, this way I'll never get my incessant urge to refresh the site under control.
(well I guess after chapter 8, but then you start teasing a next story....)
Thanks for taking our minds of this whole Corona thing even for a little while.
-Mario
9 ... the last Chapter will be 9, not 8. ;) ... I actually finished writing EVERYTHING Feliformia related last night. I'm starting to edit today.
I barely remember what else I sent to Teann since last week ... I think there are three new stories in the queue, but only one of them will be series. I just wanted to help with the dead sections and test what people would like to see the most. If you like them, you'll have to let me know.
As for COVID19, Kitty said everybody should wear a latex catsuit just in case.
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As for COVID19, Kitty said everybody should wear a latex catsuit just in case.
smart lady :-)
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also whoo extra chapter ;)
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In the other thread I gathered that you now have a Patreon.
With that you also have your first sub in me (-scriber that is)
Really hop that you can turn this into something that works for you and if not... at least you got to experience it.
Good luck.
-Mario
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In the other thread I gathered that you now have a Patreon.
With that you also have your first sub in me (-scriber that is)
Really hop that you can turn this into something that works for you and if not... at least you got to experience it.
Oh My! Thanks. I'll do my best to make it to make it worthwhile and hopefully keep you for a bit. :) (nobody is prisoner of course)
I don't want to use this forum to promote my patreon, but I do have a few questions for you about it. I'll send you a pm in a bit.
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Double kitty!
I love it. It is a bit improbable but it radiates the type and amount of love that made me fall in love with the series.
Also I love how the behavior is both perfectly aligned with what has come before and I love his "stunned" expression.
To be fair, I think I would be freaking out if this ever happened to me.
(but then if I ever ended up with a latex cat girl that would likely also be cause for stress, in addition to pleasure of course)
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"She hit the nail on the head. Kitty never liked pain. As a typical girly girl, she was sensitive and loved tenderness and affection. Pain was not something on her wish list. An occasional slap on the butt was fun, she had no problem with it, but besides that, she needed comfort and pleasure. If I put her in bondage and it caused some pain, she would ask me to redo it differently. A pressure point at the wrong place would spoil the fun of her predicament. But yet, her obsession with losing control made her cross that frontier. Knowing that she could receive pain and that she couldn’t do anything about it was such a turn on for her."
ARE YOU SPYING ON ME?
No, seriously, i'm ALL about loss of physical control, and that aspect lets me explore pain play that i otherwise wouldn't.
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Double kitty!
To be fair, I think I would be freaking out if this ever happened to me.
(but then if I ever ended up with a latex cat girl that would likely also be cause for stress, in addition to pleasure of course)
Noooo! You'd love them both very much and you'd let them love you back. Imagine going to bed and having one rubber cat on each side of you, sleeping and purring. So cute.
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ARE YOU SPYING ON ME?
No, seriously, i'm ALL about loss of physical control, and that aspect lets me explore pain play that i otherwise wouldn't.
I do! Didn't you notice that suspicious teddy bear that appeared in your bedroom, the one with a shiny eye?
The part of the text you quote, I wrote it a while ago and kind of forgot about it. It must be one of the best paragraph I wrote in the whole series. It reaches so many of us. There is always a little something inside of us, as humans, that pushes us to exceed our limits.
Thanks for bringing this back to me.
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This is a brilliant story. I tend not to read stories with a male "lead" but I'm enjoying this one and I'm looking forward to reading a lot more.
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This is a brilliant story. I tend not to read stories with a male "lead" but I'm enjoying this one and I'm looking forward to reading a lot more.
Thanks a lot! I don't know about brilliant, but I'll take it. :) ... More is coming. I plan on stopping at 9 ... but ...
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Part 7 up today
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Kittieeeeeeessssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Also on a barely related note, what is a proper name to describe his two catgirls?
The official name for a group of cat is (apparently) a clowder.
That sounds weird for regular cats let alone catgirls.
A herd? to bovine
A pack? to directed
A harem? well that would imply he has any degree of say in it ;-)
A murder perhaps?
A murder of catgirls does have a ring to it (though might also describe something way worse)
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(For some reason, the system keeps seeing me as a spammer)
Kitty says that Harem has a nice ring to it. In chapter 9, there will be ... wait ... I can't talk about this, right? :)
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(For some reason, the system keeps seeing me as a spammer)
Not just you, but I don't think that's what it's saying (I can see the error message in the logs), just that the CleanTalk integration has some issues. I need to get it updated so when I get around to that I will try to address it. Presumably it lets you retry and submit properly?
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(For some reason, the system keeps seeing me as a spammer)
Not just you, but I don't think that's what it's saying (I can see the error message in the logs), just that the CleanTalk integration has some issues. I need to get it updated so when I get around to that I will try to address it. Presumably it lets you retry and submit properly?
Its not a big deal. I just cant find a specific way to go around it sometimes. In this case here. It didnt let me post until i replied without the quote from mario. Ill try to keep a history of my issues and send them to you at some point. It does say something about this email address considered as spam or something. As i said, i didnt think much of it, no big deal.
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(For some reason, the system keeps seeing me as a spammer)
Kitty says that Harem has a nice ring to it. In chapter 9, there will be ... wait ... I can't talk about this, right? :)
Damn you and your fear of accidentally giving away story details ;-)
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Lucky guy. :D
I'm looking forward to the next part...
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Lucky guy. :D
I'm looking forward to the next part...
Yes .. When I wrote that, I was so jealous. >:(
There is another chapter coming soon on gromet, but then there will be a pause. I'm finalizing chapter 9, it is very big, then it will be posted on my new Patreon first. A few weeks later I'm going to add it here as well. Everybody deserve to follow Kitty's life. :)
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I've read everything that has been published so far and been in touch with Kitty on her Kik account to tell TigerStretch to hurry up and get more chapters out as I'm desperate to know what happens next. I won't spoil it for anyone that hasn't read everything that's been published to date but just say that this story is amazing. Thanks for all your good work TigerStretch and please keep on publishing.
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I've read everything that has been published so far and been in touch with Kitty on her Kik account to tell TigerStretch to hurry up and get more chapters out as I'm desperate to know what happens next. I won't spoil it for anyone that hasn't read everything that's been published to date but just say that this story is amazing. Thanks for all your good work TigerStretch and please keep on publishing.
Kitty can be quite chatty. I'm about to confiscate her phone. She is texting way too much and I'm pretty sure she is leaking secret information too.
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Some of you know that Feliformia 9 is ready ... a biiig 18000 words. I will post it here in a few weeks. Can't wait to share it with all of you. I got great feedback about it so far.
I also wanted to say, that it was supposed to be the last chapter of the series. But ... it proved impossible to stop it ... I fell in love with the new character and I wrote chapter 10 already ... and it's even bigger than 9 ... what am I doing to myself? Yargh! ... I also have plenty of ideas for chapter 11 and 12.
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Well, here it is several weeks later and still no chapter nine let alone chapters ten and eleven. Kitty is no help as she keeps saying that TigerStretch has her all tied up so she can't see what he's doing with the story. i'm getting desperate to know what happens next and who this "new character" is that you've hinted at. Come on please TigerStretch!!
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Hang in there, a little side story from Tigerstretch's world is at the head of the queue and will be published later in the week, with Chapter 9 not too far behind it.
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Well, here it is several weeks later and still no chapter nine let alone chapters ten and eleven. Kitty is no help as she keeps saying that TigerStretch has her all tied up so she can't see what he's doing with the story. i'm getting desperate to know what happens next and who this "new character" is that you've hinted at. Come on please TigerStretch!!
Kitty said, time will fly faster if the ponygirl were tied up with her or if she could join for an intense session of petplay. ;)
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Being tied up with Kitty would be very interesting i'm sure and now i have new images in my mind to think about ;) i'm not sure how Kitty would manage the reins with her paws but i've no doubt she would try.
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Well played Tigerstretch! Chapter 9 was a great addition
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Well played Tigerstretch! Chapter 9 was a great addition
Glad to hear. it's a longer read, probably won't please anybody, but I'm proud of it. I put a lot of work into it.
An Syr is the reason why the series will continue, so we must thank her! :)
Thank you, Syr! I love you so much!
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Hi TS, i think this is one of the best chapters so far. Are you going to turn Syr into a cat hunter for when Kitty tries hiding from Mark. She seems to be a pretty good maid so she might just work out as a cat hunter too lol. Please keep up the good work and hurry up with the next chapters. (whispers to TigerStretch, just let me know if I have to bribe Teann to get your work published faster)
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Hi TS, i think this is one of the best chapters so far. Are you going to turn Syr into a cat hunter for when Kitty tries hiding from Mark. She seems to be a pretty good maid so she might just work out as a cat hunter too lol. Please keep up the good work and hurry up with the next chapters. (whispers to TigerStretch, just let me know if I have to bribe Teann to get your work published faster)
Hehe. I don't think it will be published here for another month and a half. so probably end of July. Its a 21k words monster. (even bigger than 9) It will be quickly followed by chapter 11, it is pretty much part 2 of chapter 10... Those 2 chapters are one single 45k words story (a book)
You can give all your money to Teann, I'm sure it will be much appreciated. But there is nothing Teann can do outside banning me for being awfully unproductive. ;)
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i'm pretty sure that Teann would have banned you by now if you were unproductive but judging by the number of comments you get about Felformia i would say that the rest of the Gromet's Plaza community think you're pretty good so i really don't see Teann getting rid of you any time soon. (Aside to Teann: You keep cracking the whip over TS and make sure he hurries up with those promised chapters, please)
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Little update for those who cares. :) ... Chapter 10 is scheduled to be published on Gromet toward the end of the month. It is the first of 2 chapters about the new maid, Syr. I'm very happy with it. I really love Syr. It is 20 000 words, so it has more of a novel feel to it rather than a short story. Hopefully you'll still like it.
I also finished the first editing pass of Chapter 11 today. I'm really happy with it. It's about 22 000 words. Biiiig... I'm beginning the reviewing pass before I can publish it. It's a lot of work.
Feliformia surge of comments has died down considerably. Maybe people are getting a bit bored by the catgirls or they don't like the longer chapters, I don't know. After chapter 11, I'll take a break from Kitty and Co. It's not the end, but a longer pause won't hurt.
Keep your eyes open, because next will be a very nice ponygirl story that I'm very proud of. :)
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Little update for those who cares. :) ... Chapter 10 is scheduled to be published on Gromet toward the end of the month. It is the first of 2 chapters about the new maid, Syr. I'm very happy with it. I really love Syr. It is 20 000 words, so it has more of a novel feel to it rather than a short story. Hopefully you'll still like it.
I also finished the first editing pass of Chapter 11 today. I'm really happy with it. It's about 22 000 words. Biiiig... I'm beginning the reviewing pass before I can publish it. It's a lot of work.
Feliformia surge of comments has died down considerably. Maybe people are getting a bit bored by the catgirls or they don't like the longer chapters, I don't know. After chapter 11, I'll take a break from Kitty and Co. It's not the end, but a longer pause won't hurt.
Keep your eyes open, because next will be a very nice ponygirl story that I'm very proud of. :)
Well some of the surge may have diverted to your other, patreon place. Mine for example... :D
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Part 10! Bolded because 20K words. :-P
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Part 10! Bolded because 20K words. :-P
It's rather big ... Yes... I should start writing ebooks. ;)
I hope people will take a couple of hours to read it. It's a really good story (I know I wrote it, but I'm entertained by my own stories... It makes me feel like a real writer. ;) )
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Chapter 10 takes a little while to get into, especially if you're coming in without having read the previous parts. But once you've read it you're hooked with kitty claws....
What an interesting situation with Syr/Elizabeth. Mark can go anywhere he wants with Syr as long as he plays it within the context of her role-play.
Mark walked in the door. Syr, suddenly awake, gathered the sheet around her otherwise nude form. "Master Mark, this is my bedroom and it's late at night. you should not be here right now. You are NAKED! Wait outside. I will be out to you short..... uh... ah!"
I ripped the sheet away from her clutching hands. She was still just as gorgeous as ever, normally hidden under the maid uniform. She grasped for the sheet but it was too far away for her to reach.
"You are my maid, yes?" I pressed her as she curled into a ball to hide what she could.
"You have Kitty and Erika for this. I am your maid, not your girlfriend. But yes, of course."
"And you are here to take care of my needs, yes?"
She looked warily at me. "Yes, but Master Mark, not like th..."
I suddenly grabbed her, stretched her out on the bed. She struggled and was strong but I was stronger. Soon she was stretched out underneath me and still struggling but unable to stop me. "Then I require your services right now. Something Kitty and Erika cannot provide me. You are my maid, here to serve me, and I will have your service!"
She continued to struggle, but it was getting weaker as she realized it wasn't going to stop me. Or pehaps the reality of her feeling my hard cock right next to her vagina and wanting it there as I was certain she did. It definately smelled like that in the room.
"Master Mark,, you cannot! No! Uhhhhhhh!" Whatever she was saying was cut off as I thrust into her. She was soaking wet down there...
The next morning my breakfast was perfectly prepared and more than it's usual delicious. "Good morning, Master Mark." She greeted me as she delivered the tray.
"Thank you for last night." I replied, watching her eyes. "I hope you enjoyed it."
She gave me a bewildered look. "I am uncertain how to reply to you, Master Mark. While I did nave some very vivid dreams I had a perfectly wonderful and restful night last night. What in the world are you referring to?"
"Oh it was nothng, a mistake. Please ignore it. I hope you did have a relaxing night last night and enjoyed your dream."
She said nothing as she turned to go but as she turned I saw her broad smile. As she walked away I think I heard her mutter: "Oh yes, quite a wonderful dream."
Another thought: I wonder how Elizabeth would react to being tied up by Mark? He could one night, and then take a few pictures. To Elizabeth, his girlfriend, he coud assure her he would never use them against her. Besides, if he did it would not end well. None oof the three women in the house qouls take that kindly; two of them have claws and the third is resposible for quite a lot of the food he eats. But he could use the pictures to blackmail Syr. The game would be that to Kitty and Erika Syr's relationship to Master Mark is unchanged but actually now he is a horrible cruel tryant, forcing her to do things a proper maid would never, threatening her that if she left he'd publish the pictures and tell anyone who asked that Syr had stolen from them so she'd never get another job and would be homeless if she left. And then he would, from time to time in private, take cruel advantage of his helpless-to-resist now-captive maid. Make her stop wearing panties underneath the maid uniform. and then tell her to take her maid uniform and with her seamstress and costuming skills change it into Barbie doll clothing: He could grab it in her cleavage and pull and like Barbie doll clothing it would pull off in his hand, leaving her naked from the thighs up, except perhaps for the choker maids sometimes wear. Have her walk around all day commando in a short dress maid uniform that she knows could be pulled off her and she be left naked at any time...
Thank you for letting me meander. I feel pretty safe since you're mentioned here that part 11, the actual ending is already written and soon will be posted. I might have to sign up on your Patreon so I can see how it comes out early!
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Chapter 10 takes a little while to get into, especially if you're coming in without having read the previous parts. But once you've read it you're hooked with kitty claws....
Thank you for letting me meander. I feel pretty safe since you're mentioned here that part 11, the actual ending is already written and soon will be posted. I might have to sign up on your Patreon so I can see how it comes out early!
Hehe. Thanks for reading and sharing your love for the story. Indeed, Feliformia is something you have to start from the beginning. Also a 20k words chapter like 9, 10, and 11 are quite a lot of text to absorb. My writing style is based a lot of the light novel format. You get to know the characters then it's hard to not fall in love with them because you learn to know them at a personal level.
Yes, Chapter 11 is in the final stage of reviewing. The first half is great, but I'm still trying to improve the second half... I try not to discuss Patreon here because I don't want to use the forum to promote it. It's in my story headers and footers and in my signature, but I'll never pressure people to join. But yes, in this case its going to be published over there in about a week and then here a month later depending on Teann's business level.
For pet girls fans, keep your eyes open for two new series... Animal Café, and Girls and Bridle... I'm so excited to share those with you guys. Animal Café is in the queue and Girls and bridle should be posted here in Septembre... who loves Ponygirls? :)
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Another great installment Tigerstretch!
I can relate to Mark's dilemma in regards to Syr/Elizabeth's sexual fantasies. Hopefully you can come up with a way for him to cope with her fantasy and his genuine nice guy personality
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Another great installment Tigerstretch!
I can relate to Mark's dilemma in regards to Syr/Elizabeth's sexual fantasies. Hopefully you can come up with a way for him to cope with her fantasy and his genuine nice guy personality
Hey, thanks for taking the time to read it. I know it was a long one. In chapter 10, Syr didn't mean to make Mark feel that bad. She is just a way better actress than she thought. Erika mentioned that she got fooled by her in the past for other things too.
But in the upcoming chapter 11, I think Syr and Mark comes to a good understanding regarding how they want their relationship to go. You'll also learn a little bit more about what she was trying to achieve with her weird fantasy. :)
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It took me a while to get around to read all these. I kept starting, but I could not get part the beginning. I'm sorry to say, it was too slow for me.
But when the new Kitty stories appeared, I was able to engage with them straight away, and they were great fun. Kitty's point of view sold it for me, because that was almost pure "show" and not much exposition or set up. It just got stuck into things, and Kitty explained anything that was essential and no more, which was perfect.
Having read those, I was able to go back and start reading the main story-line again, and after getting past the first chapter it got better and better with each installment.
There was a lack of conflict in the earlier episodes, and it all felt a little too perfect, and everyone just a little too nice. With the Syr episodes that is not a problem, and there's just enough tension to keep it exciting.
Overall though, I like the safe space that the characters create. Too often now, I find that reading an erotic story fills me with a sense of foreboding that it will be yet another horrible story of total personality destruction. I don't ever get that feeling with Feliformia, and all the characters are on a journey to become more human not less.
The manga/anime tropes can get in the way of the story a little sometimes. It feels like the characters may get nudged towards those tropes instead of naturally following the slightly more realistic arcs set up for them, and maybe more effort is spent lampshading them than needed. It reads a bit like a light-novel based on a live-action remake of an anime based on a manga that ran for 750 issues. I mean it has a level of remove from the way actual manga and anime are formulated that is subtle but unmistakable.
I can relate perfectly to these damaged characters that have come together to heal themselves, and I think there's a refreshing and honest feel to that aspect of it.
In any case, thank you Tigerstretch for these stories. I hope you will write more.
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In any case, thank you Tigerstretch for these stories. I hope you will write more.
Well, thanks. And thanks for for the whole breakdown of how you perceived the story and what you think of it.
Feliformia was the first short story I ever written, and it was only a few months ago. I'm not surprised nor offended to hear that it was more difficult to read the earlier chapters. If i were to read chapter 1 to 6 again, I would undoubtedly be full of regrets. When I realized Kitty's story headed right to a concrete wall, I fortunately managed to apply the brakes and steer the story somewhere else.
Chapter 8 was really when I operated a transition. I got the tubes out of Kitty and started anew with the Trio. The first chapters were kink oriented, but I realized that it was no why people were reading the story. They were reading it because Kitty was digging through our human feelings, our joy, our fears.
Chapter 9 was supposed to be the end, which is why it was three times the size as the other chapters... but then Syr... I fell in love with her... so I wrote 10 ... and 11, which is bigger than 10... Actually, I published 11 today, so it will show up here in about a month. 22k words (soooorrry Teaaan!)
As for the light-novel feel, that is understandable... I'm 43yo, and I read my first book ever only 2 years ago... and it was a light novel. I never read any other books before that even when I was in school. And since then, I only read more light novels and a few mangas... So it's all I know... I guess I wouldn't be able to write any other way because I'd no know how. Enough people seem to be okay with that style. I experimented a little bit with Building Reality, but I didn't like it ... I really don't know how to write any other way. But I do learn from people comments... I think I'm better now than I was when I started back in January. (considering that english is not by first language, I prefer not to be too hard on myself) :)
Thanks for your detailed comment. It was awesome... and once you finished reading Chapter 11, you'd have read 130 000 words ... not bad, uh?
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Oh...My...God... :)
I have not read all your stories...yet. But this one was SO amazing.
Quite a few times you managed to elicit an emotional reaction from me while reading, and that my dear Tigerstretch is what shows (to me at least) that you are a true artist.
Thank you so much for sharing this talent with us, and please DO keep writing.
I will be very sad to know that I eventually have to say goodbye to Kitty, Erika, Syl and Mark...but that is how it goes I suppose ;)
And now I will read the rest of your stories. I am sure they are as amazing as this one!
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Oh...My...God... :)
I have not read all your stories...yet. But this one was SO amazing.
Quite a few times you managed to elicit an emotional reaction from me while reading, and that my dear Tigerstretch is what shows (to me at least) that you are a true artist.
Thank you so much for sharing this talent with us, and please DO keep writing.
I will be very sad to know that I eventually have to say goodbye to Kitty, Erika, Syl and Mark...but that is how it goes I suppose ;)
And now I will read the rest of your stories. I am sure they are as amazing as this one!
Thanks LBC.
Hehe. Im not sure about the "true artist" part, but im glad you enjoyed this series. It is my most precious one. I have some regrets about the first chapters, but i was learning to write back then. So I dont want to be too hard on myself.
Im an emotional person in real life and I try to translate that in the dialogues. That said, when I wrote chapter 11, which will be published here soon, I cried like a veal. I am not sure why it affected me so much.
Kitty and co. Are not going anywhere soon. I plan on continuing this story for a long time. If you didn't yet, take a look at Rubbercat tails. They are a spin-off of Feliformia. Animal Café is also burning hot right now. :)
Thanks for the good comments and keep reading. Plenty of good writers on Gromet. Mikel, Misti, etc. I see that this was your first post so welcome to the forum. :)
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"we're all acting" is true. i was talking with someone recently about how Jungian persona theory interacts with my kinks and how there is freedom in it.
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"we're all acting" is true. i was talking with someone recently about how Jungian persona theory interacts with my kinks and how there is freedom in it.
I'm not going to do science over it, but yeah, we are all acting to cope with the different difficulties in our life. This is human nature.
Glad you took the time to read it.
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And we return to Mark's harem of girls tonight with the first part of chapter 12!
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More fun in hot climes tonight.
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More Carribean antics up tonight in part 3 of chapter 12
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LOL I saw where that final scene was going right off the bat, but it was still very funny!
Another great chapter
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LOL I saw where that final scene was going right off the bat, but it was still very funny!
Another great chapter
It was written in the sky! ;)
It was a long chapter 12, but it was not that well-received because it was light on kinks. Chapter 13 will be so much more rubbery to please the fans. It was nice to walk away from the extremes for a while. Maybe I should start writing more non-erotica stories. I'm always struggling to add sex to my series.
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Maybe I should start writing more non-erotica stories. I'm always struggling to add sex to my series.
I too have been having the same problems in two of my continuing stories I am writing (Stone Basin Coven and Slaviversary)
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LOL I saw where that final scene was going right off the bat, but it was still very funny!
Another great chapter
It was written in the sky! ;)
It was a long chapter 12, but it was not that well-received because it was light on kinks. Chapter 13 will be so much more rubbery to please the fans. It was nice to walk away from the extremes for a while. Maybe I should start writing more non-erotica stories. I'm always struggling to add sex to my series.
hey, i'm an ace kink gearhead. Don't mind the sex so much, but love the gear!
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It was a long chapter 12, but it was not that well-received because it was light on kinks. Chapter 13 will be so much more rubbery to please the fans. It was nice to walk away from the extremes for a while. Maybe I should start writing more non-erotica stories. I'm always struggling to add sex to my series.
I think you have the right approach with sometimes having sex and sometimes not. I mean, kink and sex is great, but you want it to fit into the plot, that way when it does happen it's something the reader cares about. Your story is very much longform, so it makes since that you wouldn't have an equal amount of sex in every chapter.
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It was a long chapter 12, but it was not that well-received because it was light on kinks. Chapter 13 will be so much more rubbery to please the fans. It was nice to walk away from the extremes for a while. Maybe I should start writing more non-erotica stories. I'm always struggling to add sex to my series.
I think you have the right approach with sometimes having sex and sometimes not. I mean, kink and sex is great, but you want it to fit into the plot, that way when it does happen it's something the reader cares about. Your story is very much longform, so it makes since that you wouldn't have an equal amount of sex in every chapter.
I just want to write and let things happen as they occur. That said, when I'm submitting stories on the erotica website, it would not fly well if there is nothing erotic. Gromet best place to post imo, but if I post something on Literotica that has no sex in it, the story will be violently downvoted, which is not good when you try to attract new patrons.
But I have to learn to relax more about this. My followers are way smarter than the average internet troll. People following and supporting me do so because they like what I do, and if a chapter is low on kink, they won't start hurling insults at me. They will just wait for the next hot chapter. :)
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but if I post something on Literotica that has no sex in it, the story will be violently downvoted
That's more about Literotica than you though. I mean, I've just started posting there, and I've already noticed that the readers there aren't nearly as supportive as they are on Gromet.
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but if I post something on Literotica that has no sex in it, the story will be violently downvoted
That's more about Literotica than you though. I mean, I've just started posting there, and I've already noticed that the readers there aren't nearly as supportive as they are on Gromet.
One thing I noticed is that it's not just the readers. What I'm suspecting is that some authors don't like what they see as a competition. Many of them want their stories to be in the top ten and a good way to achieve that is to downvote other stories. There is a cash prize competition as well that encourages downvoting competitors. It's a bit ridiculous. I'm seriously thinking of removing the voting from my stories over there.
By far, I prefer posting on Gromets. There is none of this crap going on here. If it were not for promoting my Patreon, it would be the only place I would post.
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but if I post something on Literotica that has no sex in it, the story will be violently downvoted
That's more about Literotica than you though. I mean, I've just started posting there, and I've already noticed that the readers there aren't nearly as supportive as they are on Gromet.
One thing I noticed is that it's not just the readers. What I'm suspecting is that some authors don't like what they see as a competition.
Huh, it never occurred to me that it was other authors. I'm just doing this for fun, I didn't realize people were that serious about the whole competition thing.
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but if I post something on Literotica that has no sex in it, the story will be violently downvoted
That's more about Literotica than you though. I mean, I've just started posting there, and I've already noticed that the readers there aren't nearly as supportive as they are on Gromet.
One thing I noticed is that it's not just the readers. What I'm suspecting is that some authors don't like what they see as a competition.
Huh, it never occurred to me that it was other authors. I'm just doing this for fun, I didn't realize people were that serious about the whole competition thing.
Some people write crap... so they feel bad when there is a "hot" story right next to theirs I guess. Haha. ;) ... I got a 4.92/5 on all my "the sun I can't see" ... then when i published chapter three, right away it was voter like 2/5... and then gradually went back to 4.9/5 ... So there are definitely people not reading and going to the rating page only to hit the 1 star button. We will never know the real reason. Even the readers were like "wtf".
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Part 13 up today, enjoy...
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And now we are caught up to the last chapter of Animal Cafe. Kitty is definitely one of a kind
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And now we are caught up to the last chapter of Animal Cafe. Kitty is definitely one of a kind
Feliformia 14 is actually a crossover between Feliformia and Animal Café. It's a huuuuuuge chapter that will make Teann super happy because she will have to format it for her site. ;) (only 23000 words). It's going to be here in a few months.
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Not so painful to edit really. And a bit of emotional growth for Kitty! Enjoy.
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And now we are caught up to the last chapter of Animal Cafe. Kitty is definitely one of a kind
Feliformia 14 is actually a crossover between Feliformia and Animal Café. It's a huuuuuuge chapter that will make Teann super happy because she will have to format it for her site. ;)
Great chapter! I love the manga-like feel of the characters. I submitted a long chapter for my story too, so between the two of us we're deluging Teann in petgirl editing :)
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And now we are caught up to the last chapter of Animal Cafe. Kitty is definitely one of a kind
Feliformia 14 is actually a crossover between Feliformia and Animal Café. It's a huuuuuuge chapter that will make Teann super happy because she will have to format it for her site. ;)
Great chapter! I love the manga-like feel of the characters. I submitted a long chapter for my story too, so between the two of us we're deluging Teann in petgirl editing :)
It's worth taking some extra time to ensure our text is clean before submitting it to her. I always try to write my stuff with the objective to give her a good reading experience instead of giving her more work. ;)
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It's worth taking some extra time to ensure our text is clean before submitting it to her. I always try to write my stuff with the objective to give her a good reading experience instead of giving her more work. ;)
Yep, yep. It's the least we can do considering how much work she puts in. Hopefully she enjoys reading it all as much as we enjoy writing it!
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I really enjoyed this new installment. On the formatting front, I did notice that part 1 of the chapter has both part 1 and 2 squished together.
I will admit I’m a little bit disappointed that Kitty isn’t going to stay as Apricot after all the talk about how similar Kitty is to the previous Apricot. Part of that though is I really found the thought of Kitty as a puppy cute, and I feel like Kitty would really enjoy messing with Mark and Ericka since neither would ever think that Kitty would be the dog.
Still, I really enjoyed the chapter. One of the best things about your stories is that they don’t neglect the characters and plot to focus entirely on the smut.
Edit: I also feel like becoming Apricot would fit with her character arc. Going from a lazy and (in her mind) selfish cat, to a hardworking dog (when she’s on the job, at least).
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Finally got around to reading these last couple of chapters of both stories due to outside circumstances. Well worth the wait
Lucy must be some psychoanalyst savant! LOL She read through Kitty, knew what and why but needed Kitty to understand it first.
But now will Kitty move into the Pethouse... doubtful because she is after all the cornerstone of Felifornia. It will be interesting to see how you merge but yet maintain separation between these two dynamics moving forward
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I really enjoyed this new installment. On the formatting front, I did notice that part 1 of the chapter has both part 1 and 2 squished together.
I will admit I’m a little bit disappointed that Kitty isn’t going to stay as Apricot after all the talk about how similar Kitty is to the previous Apricot. Part of that though is I really found the thought of Kitty as a puppy cute, and I feel like Kitty would really enjoy messing with Mark and Ericka since neither would ever think that Kitty would be the dog.
Still, I really enjoyed the chapter. One of the best things about your stories is that they don’t neglect the characters and plot to focus entirely on the smut.
Edit: I also feel like becoming Apricot would fit with her character arc. Going from a lazy and (in her mind) selfish cat, to a hardworking dog (when she’s on the job, at least).
Glad you liked it. Nah, Kitty is better as a cat. :) It's not going to be hard to separate the two series. When Kitty is at work she is at work, when home, she is home. That's two different lives that most of us experience daily. :)
I let Teann know about the problem with part 1. Thanks for letting us know.
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Finally got around to reading these last couple of chapters of both stories due to outside circumstances. Well worth the wait
Lucy must be some psychoanalyst savant! LOL She read through Kitty, knew what and why but needed Kitty to understand it first.
But now will Kitty move into the Pethouse... doubtful because she is after all the cornerstone of Felifornia. It will be interesting to see how you merge but yet maintain separation between these two dynamics moving forward
It was nice to see Lucy in action in this one. She is pushing the new pet's around to make sure they have what it takes to become one. She put them in a situation so the question themselves and decide what is important to them.
As I said in my previous comment, I don't think it will be hard to keep the two series separated.
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On the formatting front, I did notice that part 1 of the chapter has both part 1 and 2 squished together.
Whoops, thanks for pointing this out, fixed now.
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Hi! Big fan of your stories! But I was just wondering if there were any plans on continuing Feliformia? I absolutely love the series but I haven't been able to find any confirmation on whether or not chapter 14 is the final chapter in the series, unlike Animal Café (which is my absolute favorite series) where it was clear that chapter 33 was the final chapter. Many thanks for your stories, I absolutely adore them!