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Bondage => BoundStories Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: Gromet on December 16, 2018, 11:27:02 pm
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/dungeonmuseum.html
Solo-F; castle; tour; dungeon; cell; shackles; collar; fantasy; caught; F/f; offer; tease; strip; naked; scolds-bridle; padlocks; mast; climax; stuck; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/dungeonmuseum2.html
F/f; castle; cells; naked; shackles; chain; collar; scolds-bridle; padlocks; captive; fantasy; tease; F+/f; tour; dungeon; stocks; bdsm; cane; torment; mast; climax; cons; X
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/dungeonmuseum3.html
F+/f; bond; castle; shackles; naked; pain; whip; chain; collar; scolds-bridle; padlocks; captive; fantasy; tease; climax; cons; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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Excellent start of a tale that is very promising indeed. I do hope Elif will help realize Liz' fantasies to the fullest extent, or even beyond? Looking forward to the next part!
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Really enjoyed this! Looking forward to a part 2-10 ;D
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Enjoyed the first of what i hope is a multi-part story of Liz's incarceration and punishments!
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Just an awesome story! Well written, I am hoping and praying for it to continue!
Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
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Great start. I'm too looking forward to more parts of this. I wonder if Liz, will be able to extent her stay, without it interfering with the school trip. Perhaps she will come back on vacation later...? ;)
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Great start
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I love this story! Please write more! Thank you!
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i can't wait for more!
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good start to the story
But I think I've read this story or a version of it before ??
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Delicious story so far, and all manner of places it can go next. I look forward to reading where you take it.
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I loved your story and hope you will publish part 2 soon. A wonderful story - watching someones curiosity get the better of them- chained naked - waiting - waiting (~:)
Thanks ;)
Weber
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Part 2 was great, I hope this is a long story given all the torture devices in the dungeon. As I wrote before this is a well written story with a great plot.
Thanks to an awesome author!
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Great part 2. I hope we will get part 3 soon.
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Great parts 1 and 2. Awesome story, instant favorite of mine. Want so see (at least one) grown man cry? Say there isn't any more of this story.
As I started part 2 and she was waiting to be a part of a "more interactive" display I was worried, what if some or all of her students and other teachers were coming down? With the scold's bridle in her mouth she has deniability but oh my goodness. The story went in another completely delightful direction though. Quite happy with the situation where it is and looking forward to more!
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Finally part 2 has arrived and it has been well worth the wait! Of course, now I'm looking forward to part 3 ...
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Enjoy both series of this can't wait for the continuing chapters on it
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Both parts are utterly delicious, worthy of several re-reads. Thank you!
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Very nice story! I hope it is not over yet!
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Added part 3 of this today to continue Lady Liz's delicious torment.
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part 3 is so wonderful! i had to go reread the other parts to remember why she has to be anywhere. i wish she could just stay under her Cellat's control forever. :D
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part 3 is so wonderful! i had to go reread the other parts to remember why she has to be anywhere. i wish she could just stay under her Cellat's control forever. :D
Let's face it, we're all just thinking that Mr Thompson can count to 24 on his own, and the teenagers can happily fend for themselves without her. Plus the only counting Liz will be capable of by 7.30 is going to be "how many whip marks can I feel every time I sit down?"
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Three chapters and this is by far the best story I've read in years!
Looking forward to more chapters and dark experiences for Liz.
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Very erotic, an interactive dungeon experience is a serious fantasy of mine, I can't wait to see what's next.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
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I have just finished re-reading and reliving the first 2 parts, in preparation for the newly posted part 3 ;D
I am not sure why, but the idea of a museum, and bringing the scenes and instruments it contains to life has always struck a strong cord with me, perhaps something about the appeal of having so many wonderfully, deliciously evil devices all conveniently placed together in one place, and inviting random people in, to be tempted by these wicked experiences...
The first two parts are every bit as good as I remember, so full of emotion, anticipation, need, desire, fear, dread and pleasure! It is so much about the emotions of the characters, pulling and driving us forward, the submissive teacher and the wickedly wicked Elif, who is so naughty, yet also so very aware of what she is doing. I feel safe watching her in charge of the evil, feeling that she knows exactly what she is doing, and just how to get the very best out of her prisoner and assistants...
I do hope that the author has plenty more to say and to write here, after all, the holiday still has days to run yet... *very evil smirk*
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Part 3 is amazing! So well written, so well done, so nicely balancing the different characters, needs and desires that are at work here.
Seeing the two assistants, one pushing for more pain, more punishment, the other all softness and concern for our captive, it really adds some extra dimension to all of this, while also allowing Elif to show and reassure us that she knows exactly what she is doing, and is doing all of this safely, yet properly severely and cruelly!
Surely, surely, surely, this amazing adventure cannot be allowed to end at the end of the day, when she needs to be back at her hotel? She is clearly not needed or required for the "safe running" of this school trip, and if watching wayward women being punished and forced to confess isn't cultural, honestly, what is modern education coming to these days?!
Jackie, at the risk of diverting this thread, a couple of stories this reminds me of that might interest you are:
https://grometsplaza.net/search.html?title=mental institution
also, "Seduction at the Old Gaol" and its sequel, "Seduction at Belinda's House", here:
https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1487383&page=submissions
I have often gone looking for more stories along these lines, but don't tend to find them very often, no matter how much I love a good one :)
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Great story! I've looked forward to the continuation of this tale for a long time and am glad to see my anticipation was well justified. The only downside is that now the wait for the next chapter has resumed.
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Excellent. I too have waited eagerly for part 3 and now for part 4. Excellent!
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Thank you Feline, I'm always on the hunt for a good story.
Jackie.
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I have to agree with all, that has been said so far. It's a great story and I'm anxiously waiting for the next part. I hope the author won't let us wait too long for it. It's a shame, she will have to go back to the hotel soon. But as I stated in an earlier reply, maybe she could come back on vacation after the school trip ends, Maybe the school holidays start right the next day. ;) :D
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This is one of my favorite stories here, great work Milowe! I'm looking forward to part 4.
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Omg!!!!
Normally read primarily F/m stories but this one really got my attention I've read all three stories and look forward to each new chapter. Description of the devices is amazing you obviously have a knowledge of the devices used in that time period. Can't wait for chapter 4 to come out keep up the great work
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A random thought or two occurred to me...
First the more normal approach here, what if our poor and delicate teacher was "taken ill", so could not continue helping to just count all of the children, so suddenly ended up with more spare days and spare time to return to the museum...
The more unlikely, but wickedly appealing thought, perhaps some rule gets broken, she is arrested, and ends up back at the museum, due to some strange technicality, while they wait to sort out her situation, and the school trip carries on without her...
Either way, I think we all really want to see more of this story, and the sooner the better [:)]
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Along with feline some random thoughts. No matter what I look forward to wherever the story goes....
What if she's bound up in the dungeon in some sort of mask (but otherwise naked) and the males from her trip, including some of the older male students, show up and are invited to play with/torture/have sex with her? Pass her off as a local girl who broke some law and chose this over prison time. And if one of the male teachers she's secretly hot for recognizes some sort of mark or something (we've already established no tattoos) and lets her know after all is said and done back at the hotel that he knows it was her....
The actual castle (it is a real place) per Wikipedia and it's site, was famous for a pit/pool where they would boil the captured nobility in oil or water (I can't remember which). Maybe that could be played with, lowering her into the vat, even if it's just lukewarm water with air bubbles coming up from the botTom.
Agreed with feline, more story please, the sooner the better!
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Milowe: Would you send me a PM so I can contact you? I'd like to ask your permission for something...
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Please have plans to continue this story, if permission is granted!!!
Also there is an email link on the story, passing through "gromet", so that might work if you haven't already tried.