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Bondage => BoundStories Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: Gromet on April 12, 2018, 11:35:14 am
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
Prologue -read first
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom.html
Prologue; Solo-F; MFF; FF; renaissance-faire; sisters; fight; legal; buyer; new-management; rumours; meeting; cons; X
Chapter 1
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom1.html
Solo-F; M+/F; castle; meeting; renaissance-faire; security; computer; discovery; undercover; F/f; hotel; drug; unconscious; bed; cons/nc; X
Chapter 2
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom2.html
Solo-F; naked; outdoors; armbinder; hood; ring-gag; chastity; toys insert; shock; electro; M+/f+; F/f; hunt; capture; collar; leash; dildo; release; enslave; game; fight; cons/nc; XX
Chapter 3
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom3.html
MF+/ff; captives; slaves; armbinder; ring-gag; cage; dildoes; insert; packaged; transport; subway; carriage; discovery; cons/nc; X
Chapter 4
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom4.html
MF+/f+; transport; subway; station; captives; slaves; cages; stacked; torment; electro; discovery; underground; foyer; kiosk; info; expo; castle; cons; X
Chapter 5
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom5.html
Solo-F; MF+/f+; hotel; suite; maid; discovery; public; captives; slaves; bond; latex; gags; display; kennel; F/f; torment; electro; shock; vibe; insert; cons/nc; XX
Chapter 6
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom6.html
Solo-F; MF+/f+; restaurant; waitress; captives; slaves; bond; discovery; public; display; M/f; torment; tease; chairtie; demonstration; fucking-machine; vibe; dildo; insert; denial; cons/nc; X
Chapter 7
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom7.html
Solo-F; MF+/f+; hotel; suite; slaves; bond; kennel; latex; hood; gag; armbinder; cuffs; F/f; free; betrayal; turnabout; capture; collar; electro; shock; ropes; spreadeagle; cons/nc; X
Chapter 8
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom8.html
F/f; MF+/f+; hotel; suite; bond; naked; spreadeagle; hood; maid; discovery; chairtie; security; public; captives; hum; gags; kennel; cart; vibe; torment; stuck; cons/nc; XX
Chapter 9
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom9.html
Solo-F; MF+/f+; faire; hotel; suite; naked; collar; security; public; captives; hum; stage; presentation; slave; auction; trick; cons/nc; X
Chapter 10
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom10.html
Solo-F; MF+/f+; faire; suite; deal; mistake; discovery; cage; collar; shock; security; captives; slave; clinic; F/f; attack; restrain; cons/nc; X
Chapter 11
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom11.html
Solo-F; M+/f; bond; naked; hood; armbinder; collar; ring-gag; outdoors; capture; used; buttplug; electro; shock; hum; torment; training; sybian; multi-orgasm; test; undercover; cons/reluct; XX
Chapter 12
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom12.html
Solo-F; FF; naked; hood; inflate; collar; catsuit; undercover; cons/reluct; X
Chapter 13
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom13.html
Storycodes: F/f; M/f; bond; hum; blackmail; toys; electro; force; latex; gag; public; exhib; reluct; XX
Chapter 14
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom14.html
M/f; latex; catsuit; toys; bond; machine; oral; anal; hum; nc; X
Chapter 15
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom15.html
F/f; M/f; fpov; anal; oral; denial; insert; bitgag; collar; edgeplay; strappado; captive; climax; discipline; electro; iso; pain; torture; nc; XXX
https://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/kingdom16.html
MF/f+; bond; latex; straitjacket; prison; gag; electro; collar; mittens; machine; dildo; buttplug; spank; punish; predicament; nc; XX
Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.
Thanks ;)
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this is a fantastically well written piece! i look forward to the next installments
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Interesting story (even if I saw 'slave-turned-hunter' idea before on utopiastories). I will be looking for more.
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Enjoying the story. The Kingdom sounds to be make all the adventure parks I know seem a tad boring!
The plot has already thrown in several surprises, not least being how dumb Jodie can be to trust other contestants who have shown they want to be dominant over her!
Looking forward to the next episodes!
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Any Way to Give 6 STARS !!!! have enjoyed all the chapters so far and am looking forward to the continuing story!!!
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Any updates on when chapter 9 will be available?
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Chapter 9 was just submitted. Stay tuned :)
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Chapter 9 was just submitted. Stay tuned :)
Great Southrook!
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more, More, MORE!!!!!! This is a fantastic universe you’ve built here! I check every day to see if there’s been any update or new installments. Please give us more as soon as you can. Your loyal fan awaits!
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Thank you for the feedback! Chapter 12 has been submitted. Stay tuned :)
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And published now.
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I'm so in agreement with Mokuba31, this story is getting really exciting.
Please, please, publish the rest of the story! :)
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New chapter up today
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Thanks for the feedback! The next chapter should be finished in a day or two ;) (It’s a big one)
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Another chapter. Oh the twists and turns! :-P
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Chapter 15 up today
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Registered just for this here ^^
Waiting for Chapter 15 was torture... and after reading it, it felt far to short... because I want to know so many things about so many people. Naturally I do not like everything but it is THE story I am constantly looking out for new chapters here. So far no other long multi-chapter-story here managed to get me like that.
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Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad people haven't completely lost interest in this story, given how long it can take me to find time to write. That being said, I've submitted Chapter 16, so hopefully it shouldn't be too long before you can give it a read. Take care!
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The promised Chapter 16, enjoy...
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yay for not receiving notifictions but that is a very general issue I have all over the place
I am sure I will enjoy chapter 16 too.
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Finished chapter 16... the workout wasn't much my thing, it did remind me of a story (well part of a long story) with a somewaht similar bit. Though that one was overall darker in tone for a long stretch it did start with something similar.
But, the outcome here was brighter much more quickly and I am happy to finally get some more Tasha. I really liked her from the beginning.
And i do like Annabelle to a big extend, having me wondering if she really is as evil as she seems... and if, how she will be punished for all this. Wouldn't mind seeing her tasting bit of her own medicine (not mad, likely overboarding, revenge but disciplining her, teaching her her place in some way)
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I had stumbled across your stories from time to time over the last few years, but recently I started back from the beginning and binge read the series.
I'm now in withdrawals, sweating and shaking badly - only another chapter will cure me. Please hurry Dr. Southrook :-).
I love the way you combine a good mystery / action adventure story with some amazingly inventive bondage devices and predicaments. That's a combination that is rare in BDSM writing and you have mastered it. Your character development is also quite good - I feel as if I know these people.
I am a little surprised the guards don't 'take advantage' more often, they seem almost inhuman in their ability to stay professional.
You may have the entire story arch already in your head, but if you're looking for some ideas - I love a good public crucifixion. Victim should be tied to the cross (not nailed of course) with a slanted foot support that puts her knees at 45 degrees. Then the focus is on "the dance" as she alternates between hanging from her wrists and not being able to breathe and pushing up with her legs (which she can't quite lock) until her leg muscles quiver.
Other devious ideas include:
The Chinese water torture (drops of water slowly dripping on the forehead, hitting the same spot again and again). Insex did this years ago and the model got such a headache from it after just a few minutes that they had to stop the live shoot! This sounds like something Brandy would HATE.
More forced exercise or work - I LOVED the Armstrong device. I also love the idea of women having to do completely useless but agonizingly hard work, like moving 40-50 lb stones from one pile to another pile across a large room or field, just to have to move them back again. Perhaps the women are attached to an overhead cable and there is a large truck scale under each pile that knows when they have moved a rock and punishes them if they don't keep up the pace. Many industrial loading docks have such scales under where the trucks back into the dock. Perhaps The Kingdom has a set of loading docks that could be used for this?
Anyway - keep up the good work and keep writing, there are people out here waiting for your most excellent writing!
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I had stumbled across your stories from time to time over the last few years, but recently I started back from the beginning and binge read the series.
I'm now in withdrawals, sweating and shaking badly - only another chapter will cure me. Please hurry Dr. Southrook :-).
That is how I feel all the time... need more...