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Title: Jen's Predicament by The Storyteller
Post by: Gromet on July 17, 2017, 07:46:20 am

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/jenspredicament.html
Sbf; naked; basement; cuffs; toys; x-frame; predicament; program; voy; tease; torment; caught; mast; climax; cons/reluct; X

https://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/jenspredicament2.html
Sbf; fpov; insert; cuffs; X-frame; spreadeagle; basement; M/f; caught; top; video; dildo; vibe; climax; aftercare; nc/reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks   ;)

Title: Re: Jen's Predicament by The Storyteller
Post by: Zephyr on July 23, 2017, 08:59:48 am

Incredible story. Loved every last letter of it. Instant favorite of mine.

Title: Re: Jen's Predicament by The Storyteller
Post by: TheStoryteller on July 23, 2017, 07:22:22 pm

Quote from: Zephyr on July 23, 2017, 08:59:48 am

Incredible story. Loved every last letter of it. Instant favorite of mine.

Thanks so much! I had fun putting it together.

I'm thinking now of writing a followup to  'Janie'.

Title: Re: Jen's Predicament by The Storyteller
Post by: Zephyr on July 30, 2019, 06:13:17 am

Thank you! It was good to dive back into the story. I'm not sure about the beating-the-stuffings-out-of-him part but well, it did make sense given the situation. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I note that #2 has a nice, level ending -- you could go for further adventures or just let it be. Any thoughts on this?

Title: Re: Jen's Predicament by The Storyteller
Post by: TheStoryteller on July 30, 2019, 04:28:08 pm

Thanks for your comments. I like ending stories on a light note, everybody's OK, there's little tension left hanging. I saw the minor injury as a vehicle to get us quickly from "Angry about what you did" to "Can't stay mad at you."
For me this pair of stories has reached a comfortable spot, so I don't anticipate continuing them. The story "Janie" still has an unfinished feel, so maybe that's next.