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Title: The Old House by HappyCamper
Post by: Gromet on March 01, 2017, 09:30:23 am

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.selfbound.net/storieslr/oldhouse.html
Solo-F; other/f; housesit; discovery; ghosts; dreams; bond; naked; tease; corset; dress; peircing; roleplay; latex; bodysuit; collar; petgirl; cage; nipple; toys; insert; oral; anal; sex; climax; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks   ;)

Title: Re: The Old House by HappyCamper
Post by: ElectroPainLover on March 02, 2017, 08:42:54 pm

Not a bad story though not really my forte. Well written and developed. Could use more editing as words were used out of context but would slip by a spell check. Good work HappyCamper.

Dana

Title: Re: The Old House by HappyCamper
Post by: loras pa6 on March 03, 2017, 02:57:15 am

Like what I see so far. While not necessarily a new story concept, you are definitely delivering your take on the ethereal bondage story well (less the editing issue previously mentioned by EPL)

Keep up the good work, hope to see more soon.

Title: Re: The Old House by HappyCamper
Post by: happycamper on March 03, 2017, 09:22:49 pm

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated  :)

Title: Re: The Old House by HappyCamper
Post by: Ghost on March 04, 2017, 10:00:00 pm

Ghost 'self'bondage..., My favorite subject.

Hope to see a part 2, part 3,.... and please keep the piercings in it

Thanks for writing the story  :D

Title: Re: The Old House by HappyCamper
Post by: jackierabbit1 on March 05, 2017, 10:35:30 am

A fun adventure, and thank you for sharing.
Jackie.

Title: Re: The Old House by HappyCamper
Post by: boundinchastity on March 22, 2017, 12:47:05 am

Looking good so far. Keep it up.

Title: Re: The Old House by HappyCamper
Post by: Maaz258. on January 01, 2024, 11:07:53 am

i liked your story very much i want to read next parts but as i can see you have abandoned this story. can someone please suggest more stories like this?

Title: Re: The Old House by HappyCamper
Post by: pieclown on March 19, 2024, 10:40:16 pm

A very enjoyable read.  I do hope we will see more of this story.

Thank you