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Packaged & Encasement => Packaged Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: Gromet on February 09, 2017, 01:05:38 pm

Title: Aoi Gets Cleaned Up by Superdude103194
Post by: Gromet on February 09, 2017, 01:05:38 pm

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.packagedstories.net/storiesad/aoigetscleanedup.html
http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machine/storiesad/aoigetscleanedup.html
Solo-F; machine/f; robot; clean; mess; lazy; caught; tape; bond; wrap; gag; package; boxed; trash; sealed; dumped; stuck; cons/nc; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks   ;)

Title: Re: Aoi Gets Cleaned Up by Superdude103194
Post by: ElectroPainLover on February 09, 2017, 03:48:45 pm

Great story Superdude! Cute as well. The impetuous daughter sure got what she deserved as far as I'm concerned. Great Job!

Dana

Title: Re: Aoi Gets Cleaned Up by Superdude103194
Post by: 64Fordman on February 10, 2017, 03:43:50 am

I enjoyed the story Superdude. Great job, thank you.

Title: Re: Aoi Gets Cleaned Up by Superdude103194
Post by: superdude103194 on February 11, 2017, 05:43:13 pm

Thank you for the feedback! I am hoping to deliver a sequel sometime.

Title: Re: Aoi Gets Cleaned Up by Superdude103194
Post by: ElectroPainLover on February 11, 2017, 06:45:37 pm

Great!...I'll be looking forward to it. Like to find out what happens after she's left outside and what mom thinks.

Dana