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Title: Forgotten Lessons by ElectroPainLover
Post by: Gromet on November 11, 2016, 05:22:02 AM
You may view this story here on the Plaza:

http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/forgottenlessons.html
Sbm; F/m; D/s; caught; cuffs; straps; machine; cbt; denial; cuckold; naked; spank; pierce; nipple; torture; mast; sex; drug; gag; cons/nc; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks.   ;)
Title: Re: Forgotten Lessons by ElectroPainLover
Post by: 64Fordman on November 12, 2016, 05:20:22 AM
Well that SB session certainly went south, can’t wait to see what you have for the contest.
Title: Re: Forgotten Lessons by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on November 12, 2016, 12:38:42 PM
Thanks Fordman. Yeah...Paul pushed his luck one too many times and came back to bite him. I doubt he'll be pressing his luck with Mistress Lisa anytime soon.

Dana
Title: Re: Forgotten Lessons by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on November 13, 2016, 12:33:15 AM
...can’t wait to see what you have for the contest.

I would've like to use this one for the contest Fordman...but I couldn't see where I could pull 2,000 words out of it to get it under the 6,000 word limit for contests.

Dana
Title: Re: Forgotten Lessons by ElectroPainLover
Post by: loras pa6 on November 13, 2016, 02:29:38 PM
Great story Dana, I was surprised she didn't torment him right up to her sister's return
Title: Re: Forgotten Lessons by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on November 13, 2016, 02:47:52 PM
Thanks Lora's Pa.

I kind of wanted to but, unfortunately, I came upon my somewhat self-imposed ~8,000 word limit too soon. I had originally started the story for the Fall Story Contest but, as contests have a 6,000 word limit, I couldn't widdle it down enough to qualify. I had intended to hold back on the antidote until at least the next day but I was too wordy at the beginning...one of my writing quirks.

Thanks again for the compliment buddy. Mistress Laura my return someday in a multi-part story should Paul forget his previous lesson, or maybe, one of her own new slaves.

Dana
Title: Re: Forgotten Lessons by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on February 12, 2017, 03:23:45 AM
Just an interesting tidbit...

I watched a movie on Netflix not long ago --"The Tortured (2010)" -- in which the leading male character was a doctor and he used the same three shots on his victim that I had 'conjured' up for Mistress Laura to use on Kyle. No...I had never seen the movie before.

Dana