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Bondage => BoundStories Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: Gromet on October 02, 2016, 06:25:13 am
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
Part 1: Discovery
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/girltime.html
Solo-F; FF/f; follow; house; wardrobe; discovery; taser; shock; strip; naked; bond; wrap; chairtie; gag; lesb; cons/reluct; X
Part 2: Demonstration
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/girltime2.html
Solo-F; FF/f; caught; naked; saranwarp; chairtie; taser; shock; strip; bond; rope; spreadeagle; gag; lesb; tease; mast; oral; denial; climax; cons/reluct; X
Part 3: Decisions
http://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/girltime3.html
F/ff; FF/f; hogtie; wrap; saranwrap; gag; naked; escape; punish; D/s; slave; chast; reluct/cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.
Thanks ;)
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A great start to your story! ;)
Is going to hold a "thriller" aspect to it? Hope so!
Thank you for posting.......and can't wait for the next chapter! :)
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Thanks, crazy6, I'm glad you've enjoyed the adventures of Carol and her kinky friends so far. I don't know about thriller, but there are a couple of definite twists ahead.
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Hmpfh... Again another one which I have to follow for updates...
Thanks Lobo, like I didn´t have too many already waiting. :D
I wonder what Carol has coming...
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My most sincere apologies, Harry, I'll try to write less interesting stories in the future. ;) Honestly, though, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the story enough to watch for the next chapter. One quick teaser; chapter one was called Discovery, chapter two will be Demonstration. Hope knowing that gets your imagination working. ;D
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I´m not sure I needed to know that ::)
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Definitely looking forward to the Demonstration. Does Gromet have it yet, or do we have months to wait?
Max
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Thanks Max. No, Gromet doesn't have chapter 2 yet. I'll try to get it ready and sent in this week. After that, it all depends on how many stories are ahead of it in line.
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Great story Lobo. I too am looking forward to the next installment. Seems like there just might be a bit of exploration going on.
Dana -- EPL
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Great start. I'm looking forward to the next parts.
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Thanks, Dana, glad you enjoyed it so far. And, considering where we left the three women, I'd say it's a safe bet that something (someone) is going to get explored. ;D
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Thanks, icy, I'm glad you like things so far. Here's hoping what comes next doesn't disappoint.
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I do like this, clearly drawn characters off to an interesting start. There are plenty of complexities opening up before us, with this triangle of women, with the history of friendship and connection, combined with the love, strong feelings, and very clearly shown tendency to get rather carried away once started on a course of action :)
I am looking forward to seeing how this develops, and goes from here, since I am left with the feeling that we have 3 strong willed women here, so one of them is likely to just lay down passively and cooperate, unless they really want to :)
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Thanks feline, I've missed your comments. I'm glad you like the story thus far, and I'm hoping you'll like the next part just as much.
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Great opening Lobo, looking forward to seeing where this goes. And I’m always a sucker for women with excellent taste in automobiles.
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Thanks, Fordman, I'm glad you're enjoying things so far. Chapter 2 has been sent in. It's a bit shorter than Chapter 1, but it has enough packed into it to provide the next step in the story progression. As to the car, that one has special meaning for me. I got my license driving a '73 Dodge pickup with a 318 and 3-speed, but the car I drove to really get good with a clutch was my best friend's car. It was a '69 Road Runner with a 440 Magnum Police Interceptor engine, bored, stroked and blueprinted. Dual Holly quads, 11" competition clutch, Hurst shift kit, and 3:11 Posi Trac. And it also had the original Road Runner horn. Stomp on it and it could put your head in the trunk. I miss that car.
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Great continuation Lobo! Sounds like Carol is not only getting a demonstration but, is going to find some action in her future as well. I'm enjoying the pace of the story and how Myra is taking control of her normally dominant partner. Hopefully we will have more about the trio.
Dana
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Hey Dana, glad you enjoyed part two. And yes, there is a part three in the works to finish the story out.
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Cool Lobo...I'll be looking forward to it.
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A large helping of hotness here. As always, a highly enjoyable read from the amazing and prolific Lobo. This one could easily run several more chapters. Please continue!
Max
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Thanks, Max, I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for more chapters, you've read enough of my work to know how much I love trilogies. Chapter three will bring this one to a close, at least for now. Then again, considering the stories I thought finished, but wound up revisiting, you just never can tell.
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A great part two. Always enjoyable, always easy to read, and always something I can study to improve my own writing. Thank you!
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Thanks, Zephyr, I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far. Chapter 3 is pretty much done, so it should be on its way to Gromet soon.
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Missed this story somehow. Having just read parts 1 and 2, is there going to be a part 3 or even 4 ??
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Thanks, Dianag, I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. And yes, there is a part 3, which Gromet will have soon.