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Selfbondage => Selfbound Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: Gromet on September 02, 2016, 03:32:30 am
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You can view the story here on the plaza:
http://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/cabdriversdreamcometrue.html
Solo-M; Sbf; stuck; discovery; naked; gag; bfold; rescued; reward; M/f; bond; cuffs; rope; tease; toys; oral; sex; anal; climax; cons; X
http://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/cabdriversdreamcometrue2.html
Solo-M; Sbf; naked; gag; bfold; rope; cuffs; collar; earplugs; M/f; video; bdsm; crop; tease; denial; oral; sex; climax; cons/reluct; X
http://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/cabdriversdreamcometrue3.html
Solo-M; Sbf; M/f; D/s; contract; 24/7; slave; tease; denial; sex; climax; video; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.
Thanks ;)
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Very good story. I enjoyed it.
Boundinchastity
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Quite enjoyable. Love how your kinky mind thinks. Do continue!
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Great Job Harry! Especially for being your first story. Very erotic and has a great pace. I look forward to reading more stories from you.
Dana - EPL
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What a great fantasy! Thank you Harry. Please continue.
Max
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Thank You all very much!
I really appreciate Your comments.
Looks like I have some more writing to do. :D
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Looks like I have some more writing to do. :D
I hope so Harry. I think you will be a great contributor to the sites!
Slave Dana -- EPL
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I hope so Harry. I think you will be a great contributor to the sites!
Slave Dana -- EPL
Thanks EPL. I hope so. Though it takes a lot of time, but I´ll try to find some.
I just finished the second part and sent it to Gromet.
This is also a great English exercise for me, since my native is Finnish.
Hope you´ll enjoy the next part.
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This is also a great English exercise for me, since my native is Finnish.
Harry,
I could just barely tell that your native language is not English. You do an Excellent Job with English and it will only get better with time! Again, there are only a few places that I could tell and they were very easy to understand what you meant. I could only wish to have command of a second language as you do.
It does take time to put out a story and I believe one of my problems is that I rush them. I hope you can find the time. I think you can spin a great story.
Dana -- EPL
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Hi, Good story, thanks for sharing that. I really like the discovery theme. Looking for ward to a continuation of this adventure.
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Thank You siobhann.
I´m looking forward to it too. I now know how the journey started, and I have pretty good idea how it´s going to end.
There are just some gaps to be filled, step-by-step you know ;)
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verry good sory hope to read part 2 verry soon
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Thank you Chris-switsh.
Part 2 is coming when Gromet publishes it. I´m glad you liked the first one.
I have finished the third, and also the last, part of the story too, and after final check it will be on its way to Gromet aswell.
Harry
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Now this is why a danish (now dead) writer exclaimed: "I should have been a taxidriver ....."
Looking forward to the continuations.
TeaSer
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Glad You liked it so far TeaSer.
First day driving taxi almost made me quit. I was driving a minibus (1+8 seater) and at third ride, customers started fighting inside car, and I had to break them up.
I thought that was something I didn´t want to do every night. But luckily its not always like that... ;)
Some good memories, some bad too... But if someone really wants to see all the kinds of people there is, then a cabdriver is a job for you.
Second part of the story is now out, hope You all enjoy how the story goes on.
http://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/cabdriversdreamcometrue2.html (http://www.selfbound.net/storiesad/cabdriversdreamcometrue2.html)
Harry
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Quite interesting second part.
Thanks
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Great work Harry, I am really enjoying this story. Thank you.
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Great story Harry. You are doing a great job with it. I hope you continue it and pen some other stories as well. I look forward to more from you.
Dana -- EPL
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Thanks :)
The last part of this story, Discoveries, is waiting for me to make the final check and send it to Gromet.
After first part, I thought I could keep this story rolling for several parts, and maybe I could extend it some more, but high hopes often come down with a crash.
At the end, I´m pretty satisfied for the outcome.I have to admit, that for a first story, I´d thought it would be much more difficult to get it out, but actually it was almost all fun.
And more will be coming. Other story, Fun at the Farm, is waiting to be published and I have couple new ideas too.
I just have to find some time to type them out...
Harry
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I can see how it would become difficult to continue the story for too many more chapters without it becoming monotonous and begin to turn into the same story being told with different words Harry. It is a great job on your first story! I have my rough spots and I'm writing in my native language. ;D
I think you are doing a great job and I hope it becomes more than just "almost fun" for you. The most important person you are writing for is yourself and your enjoyment of writing and the genre you have decided to write in. Here, it just happens to be a bit on the kinky side. You don't believe Stephen King, John Grisham, or Danielle Steele would go broke if they quite writing do you? They continue because they love writing and what they write about.
Dana -- EPL
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Thanks Dana
I bet they could manage somehow even without writing more. Maybe.
It´s not almost fun, I have enjoyed writing both stories. And just now I´m struggling to find enough time for Harrys next adventure...
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Now this is an interesting turn! I'm glad you relate to reality, Harry! And the way their relationship evolves is just right.
In my opinion the story stops here - of course you can decide to evolve further, but it's beautifully concluded at this point, with a hint of some exciting future, which I actually hope you're not going to enlighten for us.
I do like the way you set up the scenes. And while relating to other topics in the forum I will stress that the way you leak details about your characters is indeed an example to follow. Not too much, not too little. And at the time where I (the reader) needs the information. For me there are two intelligent main characters - both of them complex and very real.
Thanks for the story!
TeaSer
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Thanks again TeaSer :)
At first, I thought this tale might have many more parts to come, but after writing this part 2, it was pretty clear that part 3 would end this story.
I just sent it to Gromet, and I don´t want to give too much out, but I can say,
after your comment, that I think you might like how it finishes too. At least I hope so...
Harry
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Part 3 is now online, hope you enjoy how the story finishes...
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Tragic but excellent finish to this story. Great job Harry.
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Hi Harry,
I agree...quite a sad ending, but, a very excellent one at that! The penmanship was outstanding in writing Harry! I was kept quite enthralled by the writing as well as the story. The way you tied the story to an end was outstanding in my opinion.
Somewhat confused about the Storycodes though. But that is neither here nor there.
Again, Great Job Harry! Look forward to more of your stories.
Dana -- EPL
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Thank you both EPL and 64Fordman, for your compliments :)
I wasn´t sure how that kind of ending would be welcomed, but now I guess it goes just like any other kind... ;)
I can´t take credit for codings, but I will try to do that for my future stories.
Once again, thanks for your kind words :)
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Dear Harry
I wrote I didn't hope you would do a third part of your story as I really didn't want it to turn into some 'plain' bondage-story or Master/slave-story.
Reading the final chapter, however, kept me in a delicious suspence - with you focusing on the emotional part and the very surprising finale. I'm now glad you did the final chapter! The story has some real depth, gives us as readers a good impression of the rationale for the two characters and does never take the easy way just giving excuses for fucking.
Writing this I actually wonder if it could be made into a movie - as that would be a most welcome development to sexmovies, which usually contains a plot just changing the scenes for some fucking. Based on this story, I think the movies could advance a lot.
Now - don't become a one-hit-wonder! You go back to the keyboard and develop more pearls...... please :)
TeaSer
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I´m speechless. :o
Thank You TeaSer