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Title: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: Gromet on July 31, 2016, 12:36:05 pm
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/jessicastorment.html
Sbf; naked; cuffs; bond; spreader; collar; belts; first; toys; insert; stuck; torment; climax; cons/reluct; X

Part 2: http://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/jessicastorment2.html
Sbf; workshop; naked; cuffs; bond; spreader; collar; belts; toys; insert; torment; nipples; electro; caught; climax; cons; X

Part 3: http://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/jessicastorment3.html
Sbf; workshop; naked; cuffs; bond; spreader; collar; belts; nearly-caught; bed; chains; spreadeagle; toys; insert; electro; torment; nipples; timer; climax; cons; X

Part 4: http://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/jessicastorment4.html
Sbf; FF; workshop; chast; cuffs; bond; spreader; collar; electroplay; spreadeagle; toys; insert; device; spank; torment; nipples; timer; hogtie; climax; cons; X

Part 5: http://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/jessicastorment5.html
Sbff; cuffs; fetters; bond; machine; spank; nipple; electroplay; toys; caught; blackmail; M/ff; sex; vag; anal; oral; pain; torture; facial; susp; cons/reluct; XX

Part 6: http://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/jessicastorment6.html
Sbff; M/ff; torture; toys; electroplay; cuffs; fetters; hogtie; chain; susp; gag; blindfold; nipples; clamps; vag; anal; force; sd; sex; spank; pain; bdsm; transported; captive; blackmail; cons/nc; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks   ;)
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: picofarad on July 31, 2016, 03:16:47 pm
Just an awesome story.  I love the attention to detail and its pace.  I look forward to the continuation of this adventure.

Thanks!
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on July 31, 2016, 11:21:12 pm
Just an awesome story.  I love the attention to detail and its pace.  I look forward to the continuation of this adventure.

Thanks!

I am very happy you enjoyed the story and my writing style. Thank you. I am currently writing Part 2 about Jessica and her plight of her innocent entry into self-bondage and BDSM. I do hope you find it as interesting as the opener.

Again, thank you for your positive review. I hope to have Part 2 completed in a week or so and will get it to Gromet as soon as I finish, review, and edit it.

Thank You,
ElectroPainLover
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: pilloryslave on August 01, 2016, 05:35:15 pm
Wow.... that was wonderful.  The detail amazing and I felt as if I was one with her in her predicament.  Looking ford to the next part
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on August 01, 2016, 06:34:59 pm
Wow.... that was wonderful.  The detail amazing and I felt as if I was one with her in her predicament.  Looking ford to the next part

Thank you for the compliments pilloryslave. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. I am working on it's sequel(s). I believe there should be about 5 or 6 adventures for Jessica to find herself exploring. Part 2 is well in the works. I only hope you find it, and them, as interesting and exciting.

Thank you very much.

EPL
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: absolutist on August 28, 2016, 02:38:02 pm
After the other intriguing stories you've posted here recently, I want to show this one some love too, not that the eagerly awaited second part becomes forgotten...
Cheers
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on August 28, 2016, 03:59:29 pm
After the other intriguing stories you've posted here recently, I want to show this one some love too, not that the eagerly awaited second part becomes forgotten...
Cheers

Thank you Absolutist for the kind words and your interest in the upcoming parts.
I have sent Gromet parts 2 & 3 of Jessica's Torment, but, had to ask him to hold off on posting them until I reworked them a little due to errors I made. The reworks have also been resubmitted and when Gromet gets completely over his nasty flu bug and Self-bondage stories are are in the loop to be posted, I am sure he will get them up and you can enjoy the next couple chapters of Jessica.
Part 4 will be being started shortly. I have been working on some other stories as well and hopefully, they too will be posted.

Thank you again for your post.

Dana -- EPL
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: Mikel on September 03, 2016, 04:05:58 pm
Great Story EPL,
I just read part 2 could not find it on the forum yet so I thought id post here, please keep writing I enjoy your train of thought.
Mikel
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on September 03, 2016, 04:25:38 pm
Thank you Mikel. I think Gromet posts all sequels to the original story's feedback post.

I am pleased you liked it. I have sent part 3 in to Gromet and I am sure he will post it sometime in the near future. I believe there should be about seven parts or so. I have to see where I am going to take Jessica in part 4. I have yet to start it as I have written a few other stories that hopefully will be posted soon too.

Thanks again Mikel. I enjoy your stories as well and look forward to reading some more.

Dana -- EPL
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: Harry on September 06, 2016, 10:20:05 am
Thanks EPL for this great story. Or the beginning of it...
Excited to see where this adventure takes Jessica.
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on September 06, 2016, 01:49:15 pm
Thank you Harry. I have submitted part 3. Part 4 will be in the works shortly. I have to think of what kind of problems Jessica is going to run into as of yet, but I hope to make the next several parts find Jessica in some very uncomfortable situations, both physically and mentally.

Thanks again Harry. And I look forward to reading some more of your work in the future.

Slave Dana -- EPL
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: Harry on September 08, 2016, 09:15:31 pm
Thanks again Harry. And I look forward to reading some more of your work in the future.

Slave Dana -- EPL

Well, first half of 2nd part is now ready, starting the second maybe tomorrow.
So many possibilities, but finally got the idea how far this story can hold.
I think I will be having a lot fun moments in the future...
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on September 08, 2016, 10:15:53 pm
I'm glad you hear your are working on it Harry.

Writing can be quite fun because it allows you to live your fantasies or desires through your characters. And again, you have a talent for writing that will only improve the more you do it.

I look forward to seeing more of your stories posted and enjoying them.

Thanks Harry,

Dana -- EPL
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: 64Fordman on October 23, 2016, 08:17:43 am
Really enjoyed part 3, thanks Dana. Congrats on your promotion.
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on October 23, 2016, 04:13:06 pm
Thank you on both accounts Fordman. And you are welcome. I will begin to revisit Jessica and take a short break from my other stories and let them simmer as I have with Jessi. I believe she will begin to find herself getting a little deeper than she really wants. We'll see where the story leads.

I can only hope to add to the already excellent Moderators Gromet has chosen for his team. Thanks again Fordman.

Dana -- EPL
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on December 18, 2016, 07:59:58 pm
***UPDATE***

Jessica's Torment Parts 4, 5, and 6 have been submitted to Gromet to post when he gets to them and he finds them acceptable. The story, for now at least, concludes in Part 6.

Thank you for your patients and interest in Jessica.

Dana -- EPL
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on July 17, 2017, 08:24:00 am
***Update***

Jessica's Torment Part 4 has been posted and is now available. Sorry for the delay on getting this out to those who are enjoying reading about Jessi. Sometimes other writings and life takes precedence. Thank you for your patience.

Dana
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: Mikel on July 18, 2017, 02:16:29 am
It took me awhile but I finally got caught up, Thanks for taking the time to write I really like the story keep it up.
Mikel
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on July 18, 2017, 07:58:22 pm
Thank you and you're welcome Mikel. There are two more chapters to Jessica's Torment and should be showing up in the near future. I hope you continue to find the next parts as interesting and entertaining.

Thanks again, Dana
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: drulema on July 29, 2017, 08:20:11 pm
I am hoping that the girls will find relief that Carl's tormenting did not break them and that they will be able to continue their story and that you will find the energy and time to put it all in writing. All 6 chapters were fabulously written and were visually clear as to what Jess had enjoyed on her own and together with Angie.
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on July 29, 2017, 08:56:26 pm
Thank you drulema...I'm happy you enjoyed Jessica's and, eventually, Angie's stories.

Yes, they did survive it mentally and are doing well. Eventually they may share some of their adventures with us once again as Jessi's Toys grows and the two of them start trying out new products and feel as if they would like to share their experiences.

Thanks for the kind words on the writing...as Jessica's Torment was my first story published on Gromet's and the first couple chapters (after re-reading them) are a bit rough around the edges. I'm happy to finally get all the chapters out and up for readers to enjoy.

I have several stories in the works, and, plan to start writing on a "normal" non-fetish book I've had in the works for a few years now. I've been using my fetish stories to help hone some writing skills to help advance upon properly writing a (hopefully) publishable for-profit tome. Again...hopefully.

In other words, I'm not sure how long it will be before we revisit Jessi's world, but, I don't plan to quit writing and submitting stories to Gromet even if I do get a story or two on the bookshelves.

Thanks,

Dana -- ElectroPainLover
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: yourbdtop2 on August 04, 2017, 03:04:52 am
Love the entire story.  Carl is/was one sadistic asshole.  Glad he is gone.  However the girls, their story is not over.  Not yet at least. 

What about the video on his computer?

I think the girls are in for a long haul.
Title: Re: Jessica's Torment: The Beginning by ElectroPainLover
Post by: ElectroPainLover on August 04, 2017, 03:54:59 am
I'm happy you enjoyed Jessica and her follies. No, Jessi and Angie are not done...they are still around and playing. They just wanted to take a break from talking about their lives for a bit so they can recoup from what Carl put them through. Yes, Carl was an asshole. Remember, Jessi never felt real comfortable about him, but, skilled fabricators aren't a dime-a-dozen. So, she kept him on. I believe the women will be a little more careful on their playing as to not get back into a situation such as what Carl did. As for Carl's 'blackmail' video, we'll just have to see what happens when his stuff is gone through and what kind of fall out, if any, is yet to come.

Thank you for your comments yourbdtop2...and, Jessi and Angie will chat with me again sometime in the future.

Dana