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Bondage => BoundStories Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: Gromet on June 10, 2016, 11:07:21 am

Title: Ruby's Demise: Happy Birthday by Phantompower
Post by: Gromet on June 10, 2016, 11:07:21 am

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.boundstories.net/storieslr/rubysdemise.html
F/f; D/s; car; trunk; captive; bond; cuffs; irons; bfold; factory; vat; machine; conveyor; coatings; batter; oven; tease; toys; insert; climax; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks  ;)

Title: Re: Ruby's Demise: Happy Birthday by Phantompower
Post by: 64Fordman on June 13, 2016, 07:10:00 pm

Very nice story Phantompower, thank you for posting. I hope Mistress has more ideas for Ruby.

Title: Re: Ruby's Demise: Happy Birthday by Phantompower
Post by: slider142 on June 15, 2016, 12:18:36 am

That was a great story, Phantompower! Thanks for sharing it with us. :-)

Title: Re: Ruby's Demise: Happy Birthday by Phantompower
Post by: PhantomPower on June 19, 2016, 10:25:13 pm

Thank you for taking the time to give me your feedback. I do have another story Ill send to Gromet soon.

PP

Title: Re: Ruby's Demise: Happy Birthday by Phantompower
Post by: feathersntar on June 21, 2016, 11:43:13 am

I loved this story (I do enjoy factory stories and have written a few myself). I loved the build up and the ending... Very hot (literally!)

Thank you

Rich