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Title: If Found by A Pensive Pen
Post by: Gromet on May 23, 2016, 05:13:46 am

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.selfbound.net/storiesek/iffound.html
Sbf; naked; cuffs; gag; rope; discovery; M/f; bond; susp; nipple; toys; insert; chast; tease; torment; sybian; denial; sex; climax; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks   ;)

Title: Re: If Found by A Pensive Pen
Post by: feline on May 24, 2016, 02:03:23 am

I started this with mixed feelings, the initial situation, the risks, the recklessness, it is so crazy and unwise, I was not sure how happy I felt about this.

But this is handled well, carefully and sensibly, the roofer, when he finds her and starts to study the situation is very sensible, mature and careful, all of the things that are needed to balance out the crazy of the situation, while also being clear and firm in his pursuit of fun times.

I do enjoy how relentless and forceful he is, how wicked and creative.

I must say, I didn't see the ending coming, and I liked it, while seeing anew how long it has been since she was properly tied up and delighted made me sad, while I am also happy that things are starting to look up for her once more :)

Title: Re: If Found by A Pensive Pen
Post by: Zephyr on May 24, 2016, 02:44:54 am

Good story! Liked it a lot! I liked that he kept her going and while cared for, gradually got in deeper and deeper. I especially liked the attic sequence.

Title: Re: If Found by A Pensive Pen
Post by: loras pa6 on May 24, 2016, 03:34:35 am

Well done A Pensive Pen. A beautifully written story, I did not see that twist coming at the end.

Title: Re: If Found by A Pensive Pen
Post by: Miss Fortune on May 27, 2016, 04:57:40 am

I liked this story. It was wonderfully detailed. My favorite part was the clapper in the attic - diabolical! :)

Clever ending!

Title: Re: If Found by A Pensive Pen
Post by: MaxRoper on May 27, 2016, 08:29:10 pm

Well done! A long involved story with plenty of twists, all well written and edited.

And I agree with Miss Fortune: the Clapper is genius.

Title: Re: If Found by A Pensive Pen
Post by: Arkane on May 28, 2016, 01:00:09 pm

Another good story. Thanks...

Title: Re: If Found by A Pensive Pen
Post by: Jimdini on May 28, 2016, 01:55:48 pm

A well paced and captivating story.

Title: Re: If Found by A Pensive Pen
Post by: A Pensive Pen on May 30, 2016, 01:57:04 am

Thank you all for the warm sentiments!