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Other Worlds Section => Machine Stories => Topic started by: Gromet on May 18, 2016, 03:04:14 pm

Title: A Most Fitting Ending by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Gromet on May 18, 2016, 03:04:14 pm

You can find the story posted here on the site:

http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machine/storiesad/amostfittingending.html
MF; M+/mf; mansion; robbery; force; strip; bond; gag; machine; scan; robot; program; trashbags; encased; disposal; dumpster; cons/nc; X

Please leave your comments and feedback here.

Title: Re: A Most Fitting Ending by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: blarg on May 20, 2016, 01:18:31 am

I love the set up for this story!

It was fun reading a long and trying to figure out just what the house was going to do to that couple, when it turned out to be trashing them, well, I was excited! I loved the ending.

Title: Re: A Most Fitting Ending by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Lobo De la Sombra on May 20, 2016, 02:40:58 am

Thanks, blarg.  That was a fun story to write, and I'm glad you enjoyed the way it turned out.

Title: Re: A Most Fitting Ending by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: jackierabbit1 on May 20, 2016, 10:47:09 am

Out with the other trash, I love it!

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

Title: Re: A Most Fitting Ending by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: 64Fordman on May 20, 2016, 03:30:31 pm

Great story Lobo, thanks for sharing. It reminded me of a saying I heard once, be nice to everyone you meet on your way up the ladder of success, you’re going to meet those same people on the way down.

Title: Re: A Most Fitting Ending by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Lobo De la Sombra on May 20, 2016, 06:11:40 pm

Thanks Fordman.  As to your quote, I've always liked sayings like that.  One of my favorites warns that you should always be careful how you treat people, because the toes you step on today could be connected to the ass you'll have to kiss tomorrow.

Title: Re: A Most Fitting Ending by Lobo De la Sombra
Post by: Lobo De la Sombra on May 22, 2016, 02:53:05 am

Thanks, Jackie, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Sorry for the slow reply, but I almost missed seeing your post.