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General Category => General Discussion => Topic started by: archkane on February 25, 2016, 03:41:53 am

Title: The Kajira Chronicles
Post by: archkane on February 25, 2016, 03:41:53 am

Just read "The Kajira Chronicles" on Amazon Kindle books.  Enough there that there is something for everyone. Thoughts?

Title: Re: The Kajira Chronicles
Post by: Zephyr on March 05, 2016, 08:35:28 am

Can you tell us more about it? I'm intrigued...

Title: Re: The Kajira Chronicles
Post by: 64Fordman on March 05, 2016, 11:01:43 pm

I was on Amazon placing an order and looked up The Kajira Chronicles out of curiosity. It is the 1st person narration of a woman named Christi and her voluntary journey into submission. I only read the first few pages of Vol. 1 & 2 but doubt I would make it very far into this 4 vol. tome. I found the writing clumsy and uninspired (full of clichés) with scenes lacking emotion. Normally I wouldn’t make comments like this about a story, but since you asked. . . With all due respect to the author, and if that’s you no hard feelings, if I am going to be asked to pay I would expect the quality to be at least as good as the very best writing available for free on this site. Of course this is just my opinion.