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Dollification => Dollstories.net stories feedback => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on March 11, 2023, 04:08:04 PM

Title: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 11, 2023, 04:08:04 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.dollstories.net/storieslr/the_reluctant_toy.html
F/m; FM+/m; M2doll; doll; cd; latex; catsuit; hood; bond; buttplug; chair; gag; collar; kidnap; breathplay; conditioning; mast; anal; oral; reluct; XX

https://www.dollstories.net/storieslr/the_reluctant_toy2.html
F/m; MF+/m; F/mf; group; M2doll; doll; mpov; latex; bagged; sleepsack; catsuit; urine; buttplug; gag; chair; straps; hood; breathplay; conditioning; collar; leash; oral; anal; mast; armbinder; cuffs; display; inflatable; objectify; reluct; XX

https://www.dollstories.net/storieslr/the_reluctant_toy3.html
F/mf; M/m; F/m; doll; M2doll; latex; strip; catsuit; hood; maid; costume; catheter; gag; enclosed; transported; buttplug; urine; sleepsack; anal; cum-eating; pillory; straps; breathplay; reluct; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: Tightandshiny on March 14, 2023, 01:50:01 PM
I am currently brainstorming a continuation to this story. If you enjoyed it, I'd be interested in hearing where you would like to see it go. I already have a few fun ideas 😉.
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: Griffinmills on March 15, 2023, 12:06:43 PM
Pretty good story! 

Enjoyed the denial aspect, although it was not tagged as such, a welcome surprise.  It was lucky the mistress was pleased and the gimp good in the end eh?

I liked the pseudo reluctance angle but the obvious enjoyment.  The part where the doll saw the two sheathes and had a feeling of apprehension where one was going was a good touch.
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: Tightandshiny on March 15, 2023, 09:44:34 PM
Thank you! Would you believe it's my first time writing like this? I'm finding that it is a great outlet to explore some fantasies that I can't (or am too shy to) for real. The positive feedback has inspired me a bit and I'm already two chapters into part two :D
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: Griffinmills on March 20, 2023, 12:45:21 PM
That's great! Looking forward to your follow up.
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: Tightandshiny on March 20, 2023, 04:30:11 PM
I just submitted part 2 for approval over the weekend so it should hopefully be up soon! It's a bit longer and things get a lot crazier.
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: rbbrlvr on March 21, 2023, 10:26:52 AM
This story was great, can't wait for Part 2 :-)
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: Rubberh on May 05, 2023, 05:50:20 PM
I've been waiting to see part 2. Is it maybe too wild? Sometimes we need to edit, I've had my share of that.
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: teanndaorsa on May 06, 2023, 09:20:02 PM
Not an editing problem, just a volume of stories thing, there's a half dozen or so other stories up in the queue before the second part of this; hang in there it'll see the site in a week or two.
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: teanndaorsa on May 14, 2023, 04:18:51 PM
Up now!
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: teanndaorsa on February 04, 2024, 07:54:31 PM
And part 3 up tonight, enjoy
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: Tightandshiny on February 05, 2024, 03:25:22 AM
Hope you guys enjoy part 3. It will be the final part of this series as I've gotten most of the fun ideas I've had written out finally.
Title: Re: The Reluctant Toy by Tightandshiny
Post by: nobod4u on February 26, 2024, 04:30:33 PM
So sorry, just as it got's interesting  :-\ - would have liked to read more of his "all day" life, could have been some interesting aspects to manage his further life....  ::) - JtL