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Other Worlds Section => Pet & PonyGirl Stories => Topic started by: teanndaorsa on February 08, 2021, 09:27:17 PM

Title: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: teanndaorsa on February 08, 2021, 09:27:17 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_lapdog1.html
F/f; petgirl; sold; slave; bond; cuffs; chain; collar; leash; hum; mittens; electro; tease; outdoors; reluct; XX

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_lapdog2.html
F/f; petgirl; bond; cuffs; costume; collar; prison; electro; oral; leash; toys; mittens; slave; reluct; nc; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_lapdog3.html
F/f; petgirl; hum; costume; slave; mittens; public; bond; cuffs; tease; permanent; reluct; nc; X

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_lapdog4.html
F/f; Solo-F; petgirl; bond; slave; training; hum; costume; oral; electro; collar; leash; toys; cage; reluct; XX

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_lapdog5.html
F/f; FM/f; petgirl; collar; leash; hum; public; mast; toys; bond; cage; electro; cons; reluct; XX

http://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/the_lapdog6.html
F/f; fpov; petgirl; chastity; leash; mast; hum; oral; public; cons; XX


Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 21, 2021, 08:35:13 PM
Chapter 2 up today
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: teanndaorsa on May 25, 2021, 08:53:49 PM
And Chapter 3, where Lisa has an uncomfortable realisation. ;D
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: sammy808 on May 27, 2021, 04:08:22 AM
i've been enjoying this series, and part three is the best yet.  the last few paragraphs, where Lisa realizes what she really wants?  unf.  that is exactly the kind of thing i love.
;D
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: John Bannergram on May 27, 2021, 10:43:28 AM
Quote from: sammy808 on May 27, 2021, 04:08:22 AM
i've been enjoying this series, and part three is the best yet.  the last few paragraphs, where Lisa realizes what she really wants?  unf.  that is exactly the kind of thing i love.
;D

Thank you so much! If you enjoyed Lisa's realization at the end, I think you'll like Chapter 4  :)
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: taurired on May 28, 2021, 07:42:47 AM
I hope chapter 4(5,6,7) will be soon
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: John Bannergram on May 28, 2021, 11:07:53 AM
Quote from: taurired on May 28, 2021, 07:42:47 AM
I hope chapter 4(5,6,7) will be soon

Thanks! It's going to be six chapters in all. I'm working on Chapter 4 now and it's coming along nicely, although it may be awhile before it's done. I'm kind of obsessive about editing and reediting these. And I don't think my boss would give me more time off so I can write porn ;)
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: kayla_ditzmoor on June 02, 2021, 08:45:26 PM
Absolutely love this story so far, some of the best forced petgirl fiction I've read. The slow descent into becoming a helpless pet is wonderfully done. I often fantasize about such a predicament happening to myself, but I also understand it would be a hopelessly inescapable prison - something you've really nailed with Lisa's initial resistance and then her slow acceptance of her new lot in life.

I look forward to the next chapters, and I hope you keep writing great stories like this!
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: John Bannergram on June 03, 2021, 01:34:06 PM
Quote from: kayla_ditzmoor on June 02, 2021, 08:45:26 PM
Absolutely love this story so far, some of the best forced petgirl fiction I've read.

Thank you so much! If you like reading about her thoughts and reactions to her descent, I think you'll enjoy the next chapter. :)
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: teanndaorsa on September 06, 2021, 09:11:50 PM
Part 4 up tonight.
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: sammy808 on September 07, 2021, 04:28:11 AM
Quote from: John Bannergram on May 27, 2021, 10:43:28 AM
Quote from: sammy808 on May 27, 2021, 04:08:22 AM
i've been enjoying this series, and part three is the best yet.  the last few paragraphs, where Lisa realizes what she really wants?  unf.  that is exactly the kind of thing i love.
;D

Thank you so much! If you enjoyed Lisa's realization at the end, I think you'll like Chapter 4  :)

i very much did.  thank you!
:D
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: kayla_ditzmoor on September 07, 2021, 03:18:32 PM
Great chapter! Excited for the conclusion!
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: John Bannergram on September 08, 2021, 11:34:17 AM
Thanks so much everyone! I enjoy writing it as much as you enjoy reading it. In fact, I have the next chapter (there are two more left in the story) open on my desktop right now :)
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: teanndaorsa on December 11, 2021, 10:17:55 PM
Said chapter now up, enjoy!
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: johnyburner on December 12, 2021, 11:05:39 PM
I love the slow psychological changes in Lisa and her inner struggles. And her slow dehumanization on her road to pet-hood has been a treat (HA!).

I'll wait patiently to see how the story ends!
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: LatexLover on December 13, 2021, 12:44:56 PM
I really loved this chapter and am not ashamed to say I checked regularly hoping there would be an update on the site.

I think this entire story is so beautiful and touching in a way. It's so expertly done and believable in a way that I find most stories aren't. Most don't give the conditioning time to breathe. Lisa's slow eroding of who she is as a person is magnificent and makes Ms Davenport seem all the more sinister but also I think that she actually cares about Lisa. Seeing that she has few friends leads me to believe that she wants and needs Lisa as much as the other way around.

I'm not sure if that was the final chapter or if there is one more to go. I hope there is more but if there isn't I eagerly await your next story John.
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: John Bannergram on December 13, 2021, 01:22:31 PM
Quote from: LatexLover on December 13, 2021, 12:44:56 PM
I really loved this chapter and am not ashamed to say I checked regularly hoping there would be an update on the site.

I think this entire story is so beautiful and touching in a way. It's so expertly done and believable in a way that I find most stories aren't. Most don't give the conditioning time to breathe. Lisa's slow eroding of who she is as a person is magnificent and makes Ms Davenport seem all the more sinister but also I think that she actually cares about Lisa. Seeing that she has few friends leads me to believe that she wants and needs Lisa as much as the other way around.

I'm not sure if that was the final chapter or if there is one more to go. I hope there is more but if there isn't I eagerly await your next story John.

Thanks so much! The story's not done yet. There's one more chapter to go, so stay tuned!
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: sammy808 on December 14, 2021, 01:59:59 AM
i really thought part 4 would be the end, but part 5 was even better, and i can't wait for the conclusion.  :)
such a wonderful story!
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 11, 2022, 11:00:48 PM
And... the end. :-)
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: kayla_ditzmoor on March 14, 2022, 01:25:33 AM
Excellent conclusion to an excellent story! Thank you, John Bannergram, for following through to the end. It's definitely something I'll be rereading.
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: John Bannergram on March 22, 2022, 05:03:55 PM
Quote from: kayla_ditzmoor on March 14, 2022, 01:25:33 AM
Excellent conclusion to an excellent story! Thank you, John Bannergram, for following through to the end. It's definitely something I'll be rereading.

Thanks so much Kayla, and everyone else who messaged me! I hope that everyone enjoyed reading the Lapdog as much as I enjoyed writing it. It's not going to be the next thing I do, but although the story is over, I think that eventually, the loveably psychotic Miss Davenport and her faithful lapdog will make another appearance. :)
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: sammy808 on April 19, 2022, 02:51:05 AM
a wonderful end!  i love the "confront someone from your previous life" thing in stories like this.   ;D
i hope you have a new story soon (i'm greedy)!
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: John Bannergram on April 19, 2022, 10:47:04 AM
Quote from: sammy808 on April 19, 2022, 02:51:05 AM
a wonderful end!  i love the "confront someone from your previous life" thing in stories like this.   ;D
i hope you have a new story soon (i'm greedy)!

Ah, thanks! I will be writing more stuff, although fair warning, it may be awhile since I'm ridiculously slow about it  :)
Title: Re: The Lapdog by John Bannergram
Post by: trash princess on January 31, 2024, 03:11:14 PM
I can't believe it took me this long to find this story. very well done. it encapsulates everything desirable about pet play, and honestly, i can't help but envy Lisa. Or rather "muffin" now~ lol.

10/10 have read it over and over again.