You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://www.dollstories.net/storiessz/tackling_the_debt.html
M/f; F2doll; transform; sex; clones; prostitute; cons; X
https://www.dollstories.net/storiessz/tackling_the_debt2.html
F/f; F2doll; mind-control; hypno; scifi; leather; harness; cuffs; collar; gag; leash; climax; cons; X
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Thanks ;)
I love the story so far, can't wait for part two.
I'm really worried what happened to her real body.
Quote from: RefreshinglyIda on May 14, 2020, 01:33:14 PM
I love the story so far, can't wait for part two.
I'm really worried what happened to her real body.
In exchange for 1.3 million dollars, I could tell you. :D ... That would get Chloe out of trouble. I'm publishing the next chapter in about 2 weeks, so it will be on Gromet at the end of June I believe. The feedback I got from my test reader is that chapter 2 is better than the first one and I tend to agree.
Thanks so much for reading it. :)
TS
Very nice story. Very well written. I look forward to more coming out.
Just read both parts one and two, very well written, and a fun adventure. I look forward to what comes next, I especially like the sub story with Matt and Chloe's body, and the way you bounce back and forth between both stories. I also like the realism of the creators of the "C" model installing some verbal shortcuts into her, this a good parallel with gamers who seem to have a pleather of back door codes for the games they play, left there by the people that wrote the games.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
Quote from: oneupthextraman on July 07, 2020, 12:31:22 AM
Very nice story. Very well written. I look forward to more coming out.
I haven't started working on part 3 yet. But, yes, there will be posted here in a couple of months.
Quote from: jackierabbit1 on July 07, 2020, 10:32:10 AM
Just read both parts one and two, very well written, and a fun adventure. I look forward to what comes next, I especially like the sub story with Matt and Chloe's body, and the way you bounce back and forth between both stories. I also like the realism of the creators of the "C" model installing some verbal shortcuts into her, this a good parallel with gamers who seem to have a pleather of back door codes for the games they play, left there by the people that wrote the games.
Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
Thanks. It was a fun one to write. The vocal commands is something that came out of nowhere. I needed to find a credible way to force Chloe to follow Kate. When I wrote that scene, even me, I had no clue who Kate was. The built-in voice commands comes from the movie Serenity when River is fighting in the bar and her brother stopped her with a phrase. :)
Hello TS
Iguess "a couple of months " are really over and we are all waiting for part 3 - hope You didn't lost your concept and continue...
Reread both chapters now, waiting for the promised next - Joe ;)