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Title: Lonely Together by Teann Daorsa
Post by: teanndaorsa on February 07, 2020, 12:33:40 AM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.selfbound.net/storieslr/lonely_together.html
Sbf; M/f; caught; rope; gag; foot; rom; teen; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)

This one sprang from a dream I had, about the willowy, elfin teacher with long dark hair, wandering deliriously around a classroom. There was nothing so coherent as the first part of the story in the dream, but I liked the character. She seemed sad, and I didn't know why. You might, on first reading, think the story is all about the boy, but I think at its core really it's about her. Or perhaps it's about both of them, and the loneliness they have in common. I wanted to put these two slightly broken, empathetic people together, and let them try to help each other. Wonderfully passionate, kinky sex doesn't fix all problems, but I think it can certainly help.
Title: Re: Lonely Together by Teann Daorsa
Post by: mari0 on February 07, 2020, 10:14:07 PM
Such a delightful story. It isn't the wildest and the amount of sex is limited but to me thats not what this story is truly about. It about intimacy, human connection and the lovely things one can find in that journey. And in addition to that its also well written.

Thank you for taking the trouble to flesh out your dream
Title: Re: Lonely Together by Teann Daorsa
Post by: Zephyr on February 08, 2020, 07:41:27 AM
Nice! A beautiful love story!
Title: Re: Lonely Together by Teann Daorsa
Post by: absolutist on February 08, 2020, 11:50:20 AM
A very fine tale indeed! Thanks for sharing it!
Title: Re: Lonely Together by Teann Daorsa
Post by: Tigerstretch on February 08, 2020, 07:17:10 PM
I read and enjoyed. This is almost poetry. I had to take my time to carefully read everything.

And yes ... those damn glass bridges. ;)
Title: Re: Lonely Together by Teann Daorsa
Post by: MaxRoper on February 08, 2020, 08:56:48 PM
A lovely, delightful story. This definitely qualifies as literature rather than porn. The characters are quite real. The sex is of course hot and everything it should be, but the story's the thing and you've done it beautifully. I like these people.

Thank you!