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Title: Marie's Commitment by Mystified_Switch
Post by: Gromet on June 09, 2019, 09:17:09 AM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storieslr/mariescommitment.html
Solo-F; F/mf+; MF+/f; hospital; psych; assault; restraints; straps; ballgag; drug; force; diaper; insert; dildo; intubate; cell; prepare; bond; susp; corset; wheelchair; latex; suit;  stuck; cons/nc; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Marie's Commitment by Mystified_Switch
Post by: paulopost on June 21, 2019, 07:26:22 PM
This story is very intriguing!
I  particularly like the mix of severe corsets and medical restraints; I guess that in the next chapters Marie will  have a complete reshaping in body and mind!
I'm eager to know how they look the other patients that began the therapy just before Marie.

Please keep on!

Title: Re: Marie's Commitment by Mystified_Switch
Post by: pinkbodycast on December 27, 2020, 11:12:58 PM
Great story! It was interesting. I liked how it was clinical and it had medical restraints and not erotica. The balls on the hands and feet were intriguing for her bedtime routine.
Title: Re: Marie's Commitment by Mystified_Switch
Post by: Eido on December 28, 2020, 03:07:54 PM
Horrifyingly compelling read. Made more intense by my personal aversion to all things medical. The normalization of Marie's torture made it more surreal, and the details and realism of her predicaments fascinated me.

I know it's a bdsm story on a kinky website, but I was pulling for Marie's escape attempt and hope to see her dish out a few more epic ass beatings, in detail, especially to those bitchy Saturday staffers.

On a technical side, I was thrown off by some of the dialog switching within paragraphs, and the story could benefit from another proofreading pass.

Look forward, with dreadful anticipation, to the next chapters.

Eido
Title: Re: Marie's Commitment by Mystified_Switch
Post by: pinkbodycast on December 29, 2020, 07:39:28 AM
I really wanted her to escape as well, I was so disappointed that she didn't.