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Title: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: Gromet on December 20, 2018, 01:25:27 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/trappingrats.html
Solo-F; FF; landlady; apartment; offer; basement; tasks; discovery; door; suit; latex; susp; chain; arousal; desire; explore; toys; insert; straps; bond; intubate; encase; stuck; torment; denial; enema; climax; cons; X

https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/trappingrats2.html
Sbf; F/f; latex; wetsuit; catsuit; buttplug; toys; hood; mask; straps; feeding-tube; cons; nc; XX

https://www.latexstories.net/storiessz/trappingrats3.html
F/f+; latex; bond; objectify; machine; buttplug; enema; chain; toys; tease; hood; gag; mast; climax; force-feed; permanent; reluct; nc; XXX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: picofarad on December 21, 2018, 03:45:48 AM
That set of drawings by Tozum is one if not the best I have ever seen.  This story really builds on it and gives it even further depth without losing the power of Tozum's drawings.

I am so happy you wrote this!

Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: Rubberh on December 24, 2018, 06:48:00 PM
A great story and the drawings were excellent.
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: M88 on December 24, 2018, 10:04:37 PM
Overall an amazing story. Bring the art to life :) great stuff
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: sammy808 on January 14, 2019, 04:52:01 AM
i wasn't sure because i like the original art series so much, but this did an excellent job of retelling the story with a few added details.

;D
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 16, 2025, 09:10:07 PM
Rbrbill has returned to this story tonight, and another part is in the queue <drumroll for tension>
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: marp on March 17, 2025, 07:07:32 AM
While the current tags are all correct, the second part absolutely does need an additional NC tag.

Too bad, I really enjoyed the first part - but the malice and despair in the second part is not for me.
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 17, 2025, 11:29:54 PM
I think that's fair, so upgraded the reluct tag to nc. My original thinking was that the protagonist does get into the suit voluntarily, even if there's a little hint of mind-control in there, and although the landlady clearly has sinister motives it's only really in the last little section that Amanda really shows any resistance to her fate. Chapters 1 and 2 have her quite enjoying herself, so overall I felt like the tone was more reluctant than non-consensual. But yeah, it goes a bit harder at the end, so 'nc' is probably more representative.
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: picofarad on March 17, 2025, 11:49:17 PM
Great follow-on story.  I really miss Tozum but this story helps greatly to fill in for the lack of new Tozum drawings.
Thanks for taking the time to write this new chapter.
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: Observer on March 21, 2025, 04:22:21 AM
It certainly was a well written, sexy story.

As far as Marp's objection... it's something I've been thinking about a lot for some time.  I sometimes feel that some authors believe that coercion of some kind is needed. It's almost like if it was harder to imagine, to create a scenario where someone (usually a woman) would just... discover and like latex, vs one that was forced into it.

In this case, it felt entirely superfluous - both "victims" were initially quite willing!  Why not have Sim Lee and her two tenants form some kind of "alliance" and have them all enjoy the latex bondage?   

Heck, I could write a 2 page alternate ending story... but that feels a bit rude of me :/
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: teanndaorsa on March 23, 2025, 09:11:38 PM
And another part up tonight, enjoy!
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: Observer on March 24, 2025, 04:53:41 AM
Oh boy, perhaps I spoke too soon!
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: Observer on March 24, 2025, 02:32:57 PM
Is this the conclusion, or should I wait further? :)
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: AnaSeints on March 25, 2025, 01:02:03 PM
Omg you should do a book of this
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: AnaSeints on March 26, 2025, 12:12:44 AM
So what is in the thrird door
Title: Re: Trapping Rats by RbrBill
Post by: Rubberh on March 26, 2025, 08:41:16 PM
Three rats trapped by their own curiosity and eventually resigned to their lives forever being controlled by an outside force.