Print Page - Sue & Ali by 64Fordman

Title: Sue & Ali by 64Fordman
Post by: Gromet on January 13, 2016, 09:00:24 AM

You can find the story posted here on the site:

http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machine/storiessz/sueandali.html

Storycodes: Machine/ff; collar; cages; conveyor; wash; process; storage; stuck; cons; X

Part 2: Sue & Ali 2: The Farm
http://www.grometsplaza.net/world/machine/storiessz/sueandali2.html

Storycodes: MM/ff; Machine/ff; bond; rope; gag; chairtie; tape; wrap; trunk; transport; collar; cages; conveyor; wash; process; shock; cons; X

Please leave your comments and feedback here.

Title: Re: Sue & Ali by 64Fordman
Post by: ElectroPainLover on August 25, 2016, 01:21:52 AM

Very cute stories Fordman. I really enjoyed them and got several laughs out of them. Great work.

Dana -- EPL

Title: Re: Sue & Ali by 64Fordman
Post by: 64Fordman on August 26, 2016, 03:27:16 AM

My first story, embarrassing to read now with all the mistakes. Thanks EPL, I'm glad you liked it.

Title: Re: Sue & Ali by 64Fordman
Post by: ElectroPainLover on August 26, 2016, 04:02:31 AM

Hey, I thought it read well and simply looked and read past what mistakes I found. We're not prefessionals here, nor do we have an editing and publishing firm kicking us to repair our oops'.

Great job for your first story!

Dana -- EPL

Plaza Forum

Other Worlds Section => Machine Stories => Topic started by: Gromet on January 13, 2016, 09:00:24 AM