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Title: Self Bondage Extreme by Feverdream
Post by: Gromet on August 19, 2016, 06:36:03 AM

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.selfbound.net/storiessz/selfbondageextreme.html
Sbf; naked; basement; rope; cord; breast; nipple; cuffs; gag; bfold; susp; toys; torment; pain; stuck; climax; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks ;)

Title: Re: Self Bondage Extreme by Feverdream
Post by: ElectroPainLover on August 19, 2016, 05:27:50 PM

Well detailed and an interesting story.

Dana -- EPL

Title: Re: Self Bondage Extreme by Feverdream
Post by: 64Fordman on August 20, 2016, 08:23:49 PM

Hi Feverdream,

I have a compliment and a critique. I like the story, and your words paint a very clear picture of what is happening, well done on that. But I found the ending disappointing. You place your character into a situation for which there is no resolution.

I definitely think you should keep writing. You have talent and a good imagination. Thank you for sharing your story.

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