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Title: Brought To My Knees by Daria Nikolaevna
Post by: teanndaorsa on August 29, 2025, 11:21:55 AM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://grometsplaza.net/eroticstories/storiesad/brought_to_my_knees.html
FM+/f; F/f+; FF; slave; naked; mast; oral; blackmail; cane; training; nc; reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Brought To My Knees by Daria Nikolaevna
Post by: jakbird on August 30, 2025, 10:28:54 AM
The story did convey the feel of a Siberian city, from the mysterious dacha in the taiga to a hint of the ever-present FSB.  There is a hint of the brute in how the men are characterized, but that only adds to the ambiance of the background common to a Russian novel.  All that's missing are the tame bear and empty vodka bottles scattered all over the floor...

I have a small interest in reading about nearby Buryatia, so the mention of the one-time closed city of Tomsk attracted my attention.  It's a part of the world with little exposure in the U.S.

Overall, the story is well-written.  The one jarring note was the use of feet instead of centimeters, but I grant the use of poetic license to satisfy American readers.  I hope to see more from a promising new author.
  Jack Peacock