You can view the story here on the plaza:
https://grometsplaza.net/world/ponygirl/storieslr/laura_and_the_vr_experience.html
Sbf; fpov; ponygirl; training; machine; vr; cuffs; collar; oral; mast; chastity; toys; tease; denial; buttplug; reluct; X
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Oh wow! This was easily one of the best I've read in a while, really makes me want a chapter 2 asap!
Excellent story. I hope there is more to come. Thank you.
Thank you for sharing.
The idea of a game like this existing is chilling, especially seeing how easily Laura, a driven and intelligent woman, fell into its trap and became a "ponygirl." It's a stark and unsettling exploration of the dark side of immersion and control.
I do enjoy the sexy challenges your heroines take up. I'd love to know what happens to them next. Does Nina take up the 24h challenge ? Does Laura's life change ? Does she join the online version of the pony game or park it and perhaps as a successful lawyer decides there are certain parts of her life still unfulfilled ?
I hope she gets curious about the "actual" last lvl and gets tricked into a secret nightmare lvl where round one is a combo of round 1 and 3, where she has to do like 200 high steps while being slowly fucked by the dildo and it resets if she fails a high step or cums. And round 2 is a combo of round 2 and 4, where she has to do 200 deepthroats and every other deepthroat her buttplug inflates a bit. And for the 3rd and final round she is then told she has to accomplish rounds 1 and 2 without mistakes or fails for 7 days before she is allowed to do the final round. Once she finally finishes that, she gets another package with some upgrades (bigger plugs, pony boots, corset for example) and she is t participate in a fetish parade to finish the game.
Now this is what i would like, but im not a writer so even if i wanted to make this an unofficial ending, it would probs be total garbage.
I really liked this story.
The only thing that felt wrong was that the story ended just after she created her tail.
She completed the game and... nothing.
I have no idea I author has plans for chapter 2. I was so eager for a closure that I have written my own fan alternative ending. It accidentally got chapter long.
Now I wonder if I could post it on the site?