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Sbf; majick; fantasy; straps; harness; mittens; rope; reluct; X
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She doesn't really seem all that concerned for the fates of her fellow party members, then again, we don't know much about her as a person, and some of what we have seen show her fellow party members to be less than ideal companions.
Still, seeing her equip something without understanding it... I am left wondering what she thought was going to happen, and on reflection, wondering how much experience she really has with being an explorer and dungeon diver :)
The bondage was fun and I enjoyed the ending. I found myself wanting to know why she liked being tied up. Presumably there was some background here.
She was probably well rid of her party members although I couldn't really see why their disappearance was relevant to the story other than so leave her on her own. Was it to make us think she was callous and got what she deserved ? There was a hint that she was a bit arrogant but at the same time you seemed to be sympathetic towards her.
I felt you could have ditched the build up and spent time writing about what happened when somebody found her.
This was an amazing story to read. One of the first in a long while to really grab my attention. The lead up to the bondage definitely made me think of several d&d parties I've known, including her equipping something she doesn't fully understand yet only to partially regret it later. Will there be a sequel to this one? I'm eager to see what happens next to this mage.
That was an interesting journey! I particularly enjoyed the detailed breakdown of how Allannia disarmed the door trap. The description of the enchanted garment taking over was something else. Very vivid imagery there at the end. Thank you for sharing!