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https://www.packagedstories.net/storiessz/scanned_shipped_printed.html
F+/m; F/f; enclosed; sendep; sarcophagus; transported; sex; straps; tease; mast; buttplug; enema; toys; milking; stuck; cons; XX

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiessz/scanned_shipped_printed2.html
F+/m; Sbm; sarcophagus; enclosed; mast; sex; group; sendep; remote; tease; denial; buttplug; enema; milking; transported; cons; XX

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiessz/scanned_shipped_printed3.html
F+/m; enclosed; sarcophagus; buttplug; gag; enema; electro; milk; remote; mast; climax; tease; public; cons; XX


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Well, that was one hell of a read!  A great deal of fun!

I am tempted to say that we are just dropped into the middle of things, but since our man, Phil, doesn't know what is going on either, we get to learn the details along side him, so everything gets explained in due course, and we know what is happening, and why.

Seeing the casket he is secured inside of at first is very vivid, especially the massive number of locks, all the steps, and all of the securing bolts.  The security really does seem massively overkill, so it is both interesting, and reassuring to learn that it isn't so bad as he was told.  Not that anyone is going to be opening that puzzle box without the solution, even if the order of the steps doesn't actually matter.

But then to have him up and transported, without warning!  Wow, that was a shock and a surprise, but actually fits with the packaged classification of the story perfectly.  After all, if you don't consider transporting the package, then it is just stationary, but solid, bondage.

But the sheer sexy delight the two women show as the level of bondage just keeps on going up, as the box is packed for shipping, making it so much more secure and "safe", really delightful and a lot of fun to read.

The jump in complexity from version 1 to version 2 is quite considerable, but given the level of fun everyone is having with the box, its no wonder they suddenly decided that they needed to make it suitable for longer term storage!

This does a very good job of showing the benefits, I know, only in stories, but still, of 3D printing!  Making the point about how this was very cutting edge, and the company had approved, "unofficially" of all of these naughty experiments, does a good job of explaining how and why all of this is allowed to happen.

The trust Phil is showing in his two friends is very telling, very great trust indeed.  Then again, seeing him "messing about" and locking himself back in, without anyone around, and no agreements on how long he will be inside, does a good job of telling us which head he is thinking with...  which reminds me, the 1% smaller channel for his erection in the first version is simply wicked, and very effective, and well described :)

Watching the two women playing together, and enjoying their combined teasing of Phil, along with the planning for what will happen next, and how to improve things, does add a lot of content and motion to the story.  Otherwise it would risk being repetitive, since there is only so much to be said about a man secured inside a box, not able to see or move...

So it is interesting to see how much more life just the first set of changes between version 1 and version 2 bring to the experience and the story!

I don't know if the author has any plans to continue this story, but if they do, I would be very interested in reading the results.  I mean, leaving us, at the very end, teased with the fact that there are several ideas already in hand for version 3, above and beyond the video screen, without telling us what they might be is a wicked tease!

In case there is any interest, to my mind, one obvious direction to go in, to add to things, would be further ways of stimulating / teasing / tormenting the person locked inside.  Tens pads for electricity, hot and cold spots to raise or lower the temperature.  I am sure something could be done to add some form of anal stimulation if they tried, above and beyond what is already happening with the enemas.  The cock milker seems quite accomplished, but adding more audio and video teasing that is in sync with the other devices is a good way to really add to the experience going forwards.

One thing that I did feel while reading the story was that the two women almost seemed to rush into things, without really stopping and thinking everything through.  At first I just thought it was my perspective, but then seeing them print the final layer in the wrong, and vastly stronger and heavier material, it turned out that this was a deliberate story element.

I did worry for a moment there that the story, that had been so "romantic" and happy, was about to take a terribly dark turn, but thankfully it didn't.  That would have spoiled a lovely read for me.

I don't think Phil has realised yet, but since his clothes didn't travel with him, he needs to go back into his "happy place" to get sent home *wicked smirk* but will they find time for any extra enhancements before then?

Another longer term thought, is it just Phil who is going to enjoy this sort of experience?  I don't see the dominant Maggie going for it in a million years, but what about Paula?  I can see Maggie absolutely loving having both of them secured away, under her complete control...  but should they be in separate containers, or somehow placed together into the same one?

Another outing (or in-ing, really) for Phil tonight, enjoy!

Yay and happiness for part 2 of this very fun story!  This follows on seamlessly from part 1, which is nice to see, since we still had unanswered questions about how he was supposed to get home.  Well, only unanswered for him, for the rest of us it was quite obvious what was going to be happening :)

Hearing his thoughts and reactions to this, to what was the most emotionally powerful, both scary and sexy moment, is a good start, pulling us right back into the flow.  The fact that the scariest and the sexiest is the same thing really makes me smile, and says a lot about his nature, and how well suited to this testing / abuse / packaging he is :)

Adding the tablet, so there is the option for more feedback with their captive, especially since this is going to be used to add more teasing, is an obvious, in hindsight, step, and works very well.  This is starting to grow into a "add anything and everything" project *wicked smirk*

The next morning, of course he locks himself back into the first casket, he really is very easily led into temptation...  this just proves the need for the longer term idea of adding a button so that it closes and locks someone inside of it.

I am not quite sure I get the thinking behind making the outer shell a big featureless cube, but it would partly depend on the setting it was placed into I think.  The extra space for supplies, locks, and lots of wicked equipment for teasing and tormenting the captive is certainly appealing, but there doesn't seem to be any shortage of required space at the moment in the current design.  So I think this is one of those ideas I would need to see more fully fleshed out before it really makes proper sense to me.

But the sheen to version 3, I really like the practical issues being considered here.  After the accidental metallic printing, that is quite a lot of material, so it makes sense that it all gets mixed up when being shredded.  But yes, it is no longer one material or the other, so this is a good use of it.  Again though, the mental aspect, explaining how this makes the encasement SO much more secure, since the material isn't going to react well to any attempts to cut him out...  really piling on the mental pressure here!  Very wicked, yet also sexy and naughty.

Having the video showing him being packed up by strange men, ready for shipping, that is very mean!  Clearly the women know exactly what they are doing, so carefully staying out of camera view, just to really torment and mess with their captive...  talk about obviously enjoying and getting off on this wicked treatment!  It really is fun and enjoyable to see the pleasure all of this confining, plotting and tormenting is for the two women, it adds a much needed outside perspective, and shows the thoughts and drives of the ones doing the packing.

As for the ending, I REALLY do hope that this means the author is planning to continue this most excellent story!  I mean, there is so much wicked delight to be had here, plus I would love to see what other sorts of things they can do with this technology.  I mean, instead of going bigger, how small and thin could the devices be made?  What about a very thin shell that would transform someone into a helpless mannequin?  Is there some fun to be had with that?  If you consider small and carefully placed openings...  Plenty of ideas to explore and look into here, so please to keep on writing, thinking and exploring :)

I am very happy you are enjoying my little story so far.

I hope you'll be happy to know I've already written and sent in parts 3 and 4 and am currently working on part 5.

While I am still exploring all of the ways to torment Phil using the current configuration, I will admit to being intrigued by your idea of going "thinner and smaller" so to speak. Food for thought and a potential story line.

I really did appreciate your feedback, thank you for the kind words.

I hope you continue to enjoy reading the Adventures Of Phil.

Now this is excellent news!  I think there is a wonderful potential here, especially combining the clear wicked imagination of the two women, with the very eager and willing nature of Phil.  I really enjoy the internal logic of all of this, the outlines feel well thought out and sensible.  It makes sense to use the printer like this, it makes sense that it is enabling things that otherwise just would not work well, or be easy, and putting them to very good use.

The ability to take ideas and act on them quickly is one of the most interesting aspects here.  Changing and evolving the bondage device, and making it so much more interesting in just a few hours...  rather than weeks or months that would otherwise be required.

I have come across a couple of stories exploring the idea of a very thin "body shell" before, but this 4 part story is an excellent study of the idea, this time with a female on the inside.  If you are interested, have a look, and you can see a very wicked idea for how the resulting "body" is then put to use:

https://www.literotica.com/s/mtv-awards-pt-01

there really is something so delightful about only a couple of people knowing what is going on, and everyone else just interacting with the objects as if they are simple objects, without any knowledge, or even the slightest inkling, that something wicked is going on here!

Knowing you are interested in my thoughts, I might get a bit more carried away commenting in future :)  These stories are really capturing my interest, as you can tell, and it is good to know that the author cares and is interested in seeing the story through at least one readers eyes :)

Going back to what you have already posted, the end of part 2 really makes me smile, since the very idea that Phil would somehow be reluctant, or require encouragement, to place himself back into one of these devices is just silly.  It is quite clear he isn't going to be able to resist, even though he isn't going to know in advance what changes and improvements have been made to the next version, preferably versions!

I am looking forward to seeing more of the "interaction" between Phil locked inside and the women outside, through what ever extra toys and devices they add.  If you haven't already considered it, they need to add more devices / items to monitor him and his reactions.  Getting some form of real-time feedback on how he is responding will tell them something, and when they can finally talk to him afterwards, they will learn what to make of these reactions as well.  As it is, simply being able to monitor how often, and how much he has orgasmed is something, but there is scope for more, especially since they are starting to really explore what can be done to tease and torment him by controlling what he see's and hears!

This does remind me a bit of the ideas you explored in your Jabba's Palace Party story, but as I found when I looked up my feedback, I was more interested in the AI than the person being teased and programmed, which felt like a missed opportunity to me.  Still, the idea of making sure that each experience with one of these devices drives Phil to a whole new sexual peak is a very good way of making sure he stays eagerly engaged in all of the testing.

A second thought on all of this, given the large capacity of the liquid storage tanks, it seems a shame not to keep him locked inside for at least 24 hours at a time, if not longer.  Of course, this would then leave the women with far to much time to kill, time to plot and devise even more wicked torments, and time to make sure that Phil gets into even more trouble :)

Eagerly awaiting the next parts of this wonderful story and experience :)

I read the "MTV awards" story and it was an interesting concept. I may have to subject Phil to a similar fate.

I am happy to hear your thoughts and welcome the feedback. It's interesting to hear someone else's perspective and if my ideas are being expressed in a way that is understandable to the audience.

Yes Phil is easily lead into temptation, but we will see if he is as eager a few versions later on.

When you read the next few "episodes" you'll see I anticipated the need for more interaction. I hope you like the choices I made.

As you have noted I explored some of these ideas in the Halloween story "Jabba's Palace". In that story I was going for more of a "Black Mirror" vibe. The dangers of allowing AI to control our bodies and minds. Also I felt constrained to keep the story relatively short for the Halloween format.

Those storage tanks are large for a reason, as you'll read soon. ;)

I look forward to hearing your feedback on parts 3, 4 and 5.

Now I am all curious and eager!  To be fair, I did wonder about the size of the storage tanks, since they do seem over sized, given the current length of time that Phil is staying inside the device.  I am all for planning ahead, and making sure there is a good safety margin, but still...  so it is very nice to read that you are thinking about this :)

Another perspective on the thin shell idea, the company that owns the printers is looking for products.  There is a market for massive, and thus expensive devices, but it is reasonable to expect a larger market for smaller devices.  But, more than this...  *evil smirk* consider how quickly and easily a thin shell can be printed up.  Now, once a shell, assuming it comes in multiple parts, has been applied, what if Phil was to discover his lovely tormentors wanted to change the experience...  by for example replacing just the panel over his bottom, or chest, or...  if only one part is taken off, and replaced with a new, updated piece, the entire shell can be replaced and updated over time, one bit at a time, but never allowing him any actual freedom of motion, any sense of freedom or release...

Its a very different approach to moving him from one massive and domineering sarcophagus to another, so it caries with it a completely different set of feelings and emotions...  plus the discovery that so much can change about his bondage, and what is being done to him, but he never gets any sense of freedom during the changes is a very interesting approach.  Plus, it ties in with the story logic of the company exploring products and what works.

Now, if you are looking for a different approach in all of this, what about small "pieces", I am thinking a bit like corsets, that are printed to order, locked on, and then left on, to be worn for a few days a time, under your normal clothes.  Very different to what is happening with and to Phil here, but does he need to be the only one helping with the experiments?  Or, instead, do the women want to use these as a form of "insurance" policy, Phil has to return to them to get the under clothes item removed, but he has to cooperate with their next experiment first *smirk*

Apparently I am quite caught up in this idea...  I just hope I don't have to wait to long before the next part appears!

I've reached a reasonable stopping point for the current Phil storyline and have decided to visit your thinner and smaller concept. I am polishing the first part of the new storyline and will submit it to the site, possibly as soon as this weekend.

Although to be honest you seem to be inspired enough to write your own story. :)

I don't know what the release schedule is, but the webmaster has parts 3, 4 and 5 of the current Phil story lined up in the queue. So hopefully you won't have a long wait. Not like poor Phil. ;)

I hope you continue to read, enjoy, and provide feedback to my stories.

-baronlaw

*finds beating stick* so who do I beat to speed things up around here? ;)

I do dabble in writing, but I struggle to pull everything together properly into a finished product, so end up focussing much more on the underserved "support and encourage authors" front.  I still remember the frustration of pouring a lot of time and energy into writing, but never really getting any form of feedback back.  So when I have something worth saying, I say it :)

Lol, I'm sure quite a few people on the forums would say "yes please". So I'm not sure it would speed up the process.

Writing is not for everyone, so let me just say thanks for the well thought out feedback and your obvious enjoyment of other people's writing.

I recall my first few attempts at posting stories received no feedback and I was worried my kinks were just too much or not enough to anyone's liking.

So thanks for the encouragement, and I know patience is not everyone's virtue but there are several more Phil episodes headed your way.

As Maggie has said to Phil on more than one occasion....eventually.

Sometimes I consider that there seems to be a good number of authors out there, but a terrible lack of good commenters.  So I do something to help redress the balance, and I hope, thank and encourage the authors who move me to comment :)

As for motivation, sometimes the threat of the stick, or even the absence of the stick, are more effective than the application of the stick...  Perhaps we are just going to have to run some tests to see what results we can achieve...

As for further adventures, if you haven't seen and read it yet, you may well really enjoy "Just Another Box", currently up to 3 parts, finally.  The forum feedback is worth a look to, if you enjoy the story:

https://www.packagedstories.net/storiesek/justanotherbox.html

good packaged stories feel quite rare, so its really nice to see something else posted that fits, and is so well written, with such fun characters that I am actually interested in.

Re: Motivation

You might know the old joke: "How did the sadist punish the masochist?" "By not beating him."

Let me know if applying the stick or not applying the stick was more effective. :)

I read the part 1 you linked to and it's interesting, but I am a little leery of reading other packaged stories at the moment as I don't want to influence my own storyline with their ideas.

There's probably enough overlap in these types of stories as is and quite a few that go places I wouldn't want to go. I mean I wouldn't want Phil to go. Yes, Maggie is dominant but she's not into causing Phil lots of pain or leaving him entombed forever. Eventually she wants to enjoy his company directly.

Again I appreciate your feedback and commentary, hope you enjoy the next installment.

-Baronlaw

We have ways of motivating you...  it's just a matter of finding the ones that work!  *quietly plots and mutters away*

That is a very good point there.  I have come across quite a lot of stories that go to rather dark places, that personally I don't want to follow.  But also, you want to pursue your own thoughts and ideas, and that is good!

If you wanted to come back to this story at a latter date, part 2 is happy and fun, and takes things in a different direction.  Bloody irritating cliff hanger ending though, but thankfully we do now have a part 3, which also has an abrupt ending.

I LIKE that Phil is being looked after, even if not always in the way he wants in the moment :)

I am perhaps slightly over eagerly awaiting the next instalment being posted, and when it is, we will see how many thoughts I have to share on it.  But be warned, it could be quite a few ;)

"We have ways of motivating you..."

Eeek! I'm writing as fast as I can!

I might come back and read parts 2 and 3 after I'm done tormenting Phil.

But in the meantime, Phil will continue to be kept safe. Helplessly, inescapably stuck, but safe.

I'm glad to hear you are eager to read the next part. I'm looking forward to reading your many thoughts.

-Baronlaw

Part 3 up tonight, enjoy!

OK, quite a few thoughts, pulled together as I was reading part 3.

We are starting right where I remember part 2 finishing. I expected a different start point, rather than feeling that we are continuing the conversation the last part ended on, so let's see what we are doing here.

Now that is interesting, and thoughtful and makes sense. It's not as simple as a blank check to have fun, the company wants data and interviews. Well they are going to want something from this investment!

As for data collection though, brain waves is an interesting and unexpected item on the list. Still it speaks to real interest in all of this, learning more about what is going on and really pushing the research and experimentation, which suggests fun times ahead! Well fun in some sense of the words at least, *smirk*

Well I have to agree, 'the container' isn't really a sexy term. But then again Paula's thinking is starting to turn experimental in nature, at least for her. And yes, interviews need to happen while the experience is quite fresh. This is also a nice opportunity to see this again from Phil's point of view.

OK, skipping over the questions, but to be fair we already saw his thoughts, but needed to cover this to move the plot along properly. The fact that his detailed answers are going to be used to design the next experience is very exciting, it does promise very wicked things :)

Test fittings, now that is really interesting. Thinking about it though, even though we have a proper and complete 3D scan of his body that doesn't properly account for how his body will deform when squished... *evil smirk*

The women agree to plot, while Phil, well he gets off on surprises! LOL yet this actually makes sense, it fits very well with the story so far, and it also helps to build some tension and keeps us in the dark for now, so yes, this works very well indeed.

So how long away is next month? It suggests at least a couple of weeks, which is one hell of a lot of design and printing time, given what we have always seen... all eager to see where the is going!

I know this will hardly be her only job for all this time, but still, the general point stands!

How seriously should we take Phil's request not to be sealed away for an entire weekend... I mean, he has to know these two women are seriously considering going straight there, even before he says this and puts the idea in their heads!

Plus we have the conversation here on the forum where the size of the fluid storage tanks has come up, which clearly speaks to a longer encasement time looming!

A test fitting but make sure the weekend is clear and you don't bring your car... OK, I expect Phil to get locked up for quite a while again *smirk*

Plus, thinking about it, it's not a proper surprise if Phil is actually expecting to be locked up for longer when he goes in.

Have you cleared your weekend for this? Yes, you can keep me locked away until Tuesday morning... I can hear a voice in the distance...  let us listen closely...  we can just make out... "Danger Will Robinson, Danger!" ROFL

A golden item, that's metallic isn't it, so extra secure! I wonder if the black floor is functional or just decorative. We will find out I am sure.

Well at least this time Phil's clothes are in the office with him. Small mercies and all that.

Lots of sensors, and I agree, the gold and silver together does sound lovely.

I really didn't expect the first time they closed the lid for it to only be for a few seconds. Looks like I am being a bit cynical here.

OK, I am confused by fish tank as a title, so let's see if it makes sense in a minute.

OK, now I am curious and unsure. We are told apparently random shocks, so was that random or not, since the timing so that he doesn't hear what they are doing is amazingly "lucky" if it is random.

Nice we didn't have to wait too long for an answer, a deliberate shock! It did seem to well timed to be random, but not impossible. It is good they have such good visibility into the effects they are having on Phil in there though! Some really interesting possibilities with all of this :)

OK... and what the hell. Still don't get the fish tank title, and what is this about a public feed and advertised event??!! I know, I will learn later. Still, one hell of a tease.

Love the teasing and the orgasm on camera, that is some solid and very sexy dirty talk and tormenting teasing!

Seriously Phil, being locked in for the weekend really should not come as a surprise, *rolls eyes*

Ah... now we know about the shell over the outside and going on display. I also love the logic of the plates inside the sarcophagus, since this makes this into a viable product idea. Talk about a major mind fuck for poor Phil, with still more surprises to come! Really excellent and exciting so far :)

Of course, the brain wave monitoring will let them see his reactions to what they say as well as what is done to his body, an excellent way of checking that they are working him up as much as required. Teasing him to associate pleasure with encasement and helplessness should be easy given his kinks and track record smirk

At breakfast, really enjoying setting the women going about their normal lives while he is trapped and moved around as an object. But then the interactive program, the concern, all deeply ominous and wickedly exciting! I want to learn and see Phil learn what is going on here.

Recharge rate? Guessing you mean Phil's penis recovering and recharging, which just begs even more questions!

Wow, wicked wrap the mummy game! That's inspired!  Also it works very well for adding an information and interactivity element to the display for the public, so it works well on more than one front.

So Phil is already learning and associating touching the screen with pleasure and other feelings. The company is likely to absolutely love all of this data!

The teenage boy being a teenager, good to be reminded that people are like this and real world problems can happen. Also why the women need to be actively monitoring the situation for now.

Drunk and angry co-worker, excellent way to add character depth to the factory. I did mildly wonder if he was going to cause problems for our lovely ladies, but it doesn't look like we are going in that direction, probably for the best!

Phil having an orgasm from the electro stim alone is indeed wild, and helps to open up new options going forward *wicked smirk*

Oh dear though, is the Sarcophagus about to be sold as is, for immediate collection? Called it sort of...

And the part ends and I have to wait who knows how long to read the next part??!!  Grrrrr!!!!!

Cannot help wondering how this will be presented to Phil. Just own up? Tell him they have arranged an extension of his fun and games? Something else.

OK, having thought about this for a little bit, and now getting to post all of this, firstly, someone is in TROUBLE!!!  I am looking at you...  do you have any idea of HOW LONG you have made me wait for an update to this story, and now it arrives, instead of something that is a complete experience, I am left hanging?!?!  This is NOT how one behaves unless they are looking for very creative "consequences"...

Now, on a totally different front, but do pay attention to the above...  as I was saying, on a different front, obviously very high up management were involved in agreeing that sex toys and research was a good direction for their biggest printer.  Yes, we all know sex sells, but at the same time so many people like to pretend that it doesn't, and that they don't have sexy thoughts or products.  So this says serious management buy in...

Now this is where this gets interesting.  The simple and easy answer is that the big boss had no idea that the sarcophagus could be used like this, but that doesn't seem reasonable.  Next, he didn't realise that anyone would be inside of it during the public showing...  that is possible, but actually is questionable, given the need for all of this data collection and testing that is being done.

What about, instead, if the big boss knew that Phil was locked inside, and "didn't care".  Now I don't mean in a totally arsehole way, I mean instead he saw this as an interesting opportunity.  So much of this product idea is based around presenting the bound and packaged "customer" as an object, and keeping everyone around it unaware that a person is locked away inside.

Consider someone with no emotional connection or interest in Phil, who simply sees them as a guineapig in an expensive, but very promising set of experiments to make the company a pile of money down the line, and suddenly we have an actual, logical motivation that makes sense to extend the test in a casual manor like this, keeping the "subject" locked up for another day or so, doing the company a favour in the new exhibit at the museum, and also exploring, and collecting data on, using packaged "customers" as objects, and how this enhances their experience...

Oh it freaks them the hell out in the now, but this is for the companies greater good, so they won't care about that.  Plus the reports so far say that their current guineapig likes being treated like this...

Just thinking that if the company backing all of these experiments has its own agenda, and occasionally "modifies" an in progress experiment / game that the women are running, it adds a whole new aspect to what is happening.  This does assume that Paula, is to some degree, aware of what is happening and is able to manage the risks this presents.

An idea for you to consider at least.

Great feedback, almost like a live feed as you were reading it.

" This is NOT how one behaves unless they are looking for very creative "consequences"..."

Luckily I am not Phil to your Maggie.

I promise part 4 and 5 are written and just waiting to be published and all will become clear.

Sorry/not sorry about the cliff hanger.

Glad you are still enjoying the story.

I am reminded of the risk of encouraging Granny Weatherwax to go away and think about what to do...  but if the reference means nothing, then I will let the results, when they appear, speak for themselves...

Let you hope that parts 4 and 5 aren't long in coming, and that they solve these outstanding concerns...

The journey so far has been most excellent, but this is far to early, and the wrong place, to end that journey.

I am big Terry Pratchett fan, so I do understand your comment.

I'd be slightly more worried about "creative consequences" if I was not safely hidden behind the anonymity of this interface.

That being said I have no desire to lose my singular fan, so I do hope the webmaster posts parts 4 and 5 soonish.

Also to reassure you from taking any untoward actions in punishing this humble author, even though part five is a natural break point in the story. I do have parts six and seven outlined.

And I am only taking a break after part five to explore your thinner and lighter fantastic plastics idea.

-unrepentant

Talking about the thinner and lighter plastics idea, I have been wondering what else could be done with it, and tried to think of something fitting, yet a little bit different.  One idea that seems like it might have some potential uses a female model, and I am thinking a statue display.  Something artistic and elegant, but with removable breast covers.

There is something about the idea of a totally anonymous, helpless woman, placed and shaped into a display piece, put up and on display like this, only to discover that for some of the time she will be less "art" and more "part sex object" that is still partly an artistic display.

Trying to find more ways to make interesting use of the whole "you are now an object" aspect of this, that shows everyone on the outside that there is someone inside, while still keeping a very firm distinction and separation between the inside and the outside.

As for being the only fan, I very much doubt that, but experience shows that most people don't comment much, so I try to make up for their silence.

As for "creative consequences", well, it is always best to feel safe and anonymous...  *smirk*

Maybe something like a display mannequin at a Sex Toys Expo. Food for thought.

Thanks for thinking I have more than a singular fan, but until someone else comments you are it.

I'll feel safe and anonymous until a crate with a sarcophagus shows up on my doorstep. ;)

-Baronlaw

Hah, I know I have been told I am no good at subtle, but I would like to think the first surprise would be a little more subtle and clever than that!  Otherwise it is never going to qualify as a surprise!

Note to self - comment enough for several fans, we have some seriously interesting writing to encourage here!

I hadn't thought of a Sex Toys Expo at all, but that would actually work very well, and make a lot of sense.  To expand on the idea slightly, I was thinking any statue display would sit on, be merged into, a base.  The base gives you storage space for the electronics, fluid storage, etc.  If you want to keep with the option of "long term" encasement, so a couple of days or more, you need to think about this.  Thin tubes for liquids can easily be run inside the case, especially if you allow for bodies to be a little compressed, with care.  Watch for pressure points, etc.

Then you also need thin sensors, so a readout display can be enabled when it is time to "entertain" the models.

Thinking in terms of this setting, and thinking back to the mesh that was printed over our sarcophagus, outside of the joints, you don't actually need a solid layer of plastic to enclose and remove all motion.  So a different approach would be to have entire parts of the body covered by a rigid "mesh", giving a largely "naked" and available for touching model, who is still completely restrained, compressed and unable to move.

If you want to take this thought a step further, you could have a two layer outfit, so place a thin "surface skin" layer over the top, at which point suddenly we are back to simply a statue, with no hint for the unaware that there is a person locked up inside.

This then opens up the fun and games of the models being prepared off site, and then shipped to the expo for display, and any interaction with the guests that their suits allow for...

I never really firmed up my thought process here, I was just trying to think of a fun and interesting "display" and "interactive" use of a thin layer encasement, but something more interesting than just securing someone, male or female, in place as a convenient sex object.  Nothing wrong with that at all, but without something more to make it a bit more interesting, this is "just" bondage and sex, without really making use of the extra options this fascinating printer and process is offering us.

But the sort of outline I was thinking of was the company CEO having a model, or perhaps more fittingly, a second secretary placed into one of these "display" shells for a couple of days at a time.  Depending on the programming given to the display shell, this can either be a reward for good behaviour, or a punishment to encourage them to try harder in future.  Most of the time the shell would be fully sealed up, simply being a beautiful piece of highly detailed art that came out of the companies printers, something to help set the stage and demonstrate the scale of pieces that can be "quickly and easily" produced.  Stage setting for all of the visitors that drop by, or even placed into the company lobby, since you need to show off what they can make, to help get people interested.

But for the people who are more interested in the adult side of things, you need to have a simple way of showing that this is not just a hollow shell.  You don't want to open it up completely, and a video showing a model / secretary being placed into it only has so much to show.  But a few removable panels, suddenly you have the naked breasts on an anonymous, completely silent and unable to move woman out on display to touch, feel and tease...  add in the feedback from the embedded sensors, once the display is turned on, and you can see them responding with spikes on heart rate and breathing, brain wave patterns changing, all responding to the touch and exploration of the exposed flesh...  it is about bringing the concept alive.

Plus, of course, a serious selling point is the speed of customisation...  so is there a woman, or even a man, with you in the entourage of the visiting VIP who isn't needed for the next meeting or two...  well, send them off to be scanned, and come back in a couple of hours, or less, since it is a thin shell, all that needs to happen is customise an existing design for the new body scan, and watch as they are sealed away.  "Don't worry, they are quite safe, here, use this app on your phone and you can monitor all their vitals in real time, speak to them through the built in ear buds, check their responsiveness with our full range of option extras that were installed into this model...  Of course you can take the shell away with you, it will only perfectly fit your secretary after all, so its of no use to us.  Consider it a gesture of good will..."  Leaving it up to them if they need to open the shell up or not before shipping, just to really add to the fun on offer *evil smirk*

Oooh...  thinking about this a bit more, metallic plastic...  I am thinking its not a big step to consider printing wires into the shell, the bulk of some very simple sensors...  the idea is to get a nearly ready to go shell straight from the printer, with the minimum amount of finishing required afterwards.  It wouldn't be as good as adding high end sensors, etc, afterwards, but a lot faster and cheaper.  Plus a tens pad is "just" electrical contact with the skin, so could be printed in as well.

In the back of my mind for this is the way I remember the VP, Steve (just checked) from your Halloween story "Jabba's Palace Party", who seemed to take a very casual "people are just objects for my pleasure" attitude to people.  Not looking for a clone, just thinking that a rather casual attitude towards using people as objects fits with how many people in power tend to be portrayed, if not actually are.  Plus, it can work well in echoing a dominant mindset of "this is happening because I want it to happen", while we have a very safety and consent first Paula acting as a counter balance within the company, at least to some degree at least.  You need someone passionate about all of this, who wants to see their ideas taken seriously, printed up and tested out, and as we have seen, Paula really has no objections to a surprise or three, especially if someone else is happy to step up and take "moral responsibility" for their captive and the surprises that are being applied to them.  Look at the events so far...  yes, everything, included the detailed scans and monitoring, proves how much Phil enjoys and responds to what is being done to him, but there is a clear sense of "happy to push the limits since we know he will forgive us later" along with "Maggie said it was all good, so it is," at work here that gives this a small, gentle but still delicious edge.  No need to go to far or get to nasty!!!

Now, on a completely different front, I was thinking about thin shells, and "wearable", and went "corset" along with "chastity belt".  Perhaps even high healed boots.  All things that could be printed, person specific, small and fast to produce, but then "locked" on...

One trait I do share with Phil is a love of surprises. I'll have to keep my eyes open for more subtle "creative consequences".

That being said and not to tease you into any rash evil plotting against me. But many of the ideas you are bringing up I am currently exploring in the newest Phil, Maggie, and Paula storyline."Scanned, Printed and Sealed" implied subtitle Further adventures at the Fantastic Plastics factory.

Rapid prototyping to literally encase a visitor during their visit would be quite amusing, at least for the other guests. Of course it could be done quickly with the sarcophagus model by changing out what I called the modular body plates. Let's just hope they are as big a fan of encasement bondage as Phil is.

Not to steal my own ideas (Jabbas Palace), but an AI paired with an unfeeling corporate executive is a very dangerous combination. Maggie and Paula enjoy tormenting Phil and pushing his boundaries, but they do actually care about him. Even if it's easy to forget there is a soft Phil center inside some of their devices / ideas.

Also in the new storyline Phil does get to experience a chastity device of sorts.

Don't want to give too much away, but just letting you know your feedback is not falling on deaf ears. Also your mind is in some cases on the same track as mine in exploring the abilities of this fantasy world of sex and 3-D printing.

Wish I could speed up the "printer" process in getting you the new stuff quicker. But then antici......

....pation can be delightfully naughty and rewarding in itself. ;)

-Baronlaw

Must resist evil plotting at recalcitrant authors...

Nope, stupid idea, back to work!!!

Being a bit more on topic, the point about the AI being used to reprogram someone, it is a very dangerous and open ended idea.  More than that though, it risks changing the basic dynamics and character driven nature of the entire story so far.

Some form of feedback loops, based on what Phil, or anyone else secured inside one of these fun devices, is one thing, but you want to keep some element of human connection here, otherwise you are likely to loose what makes this fun and "romantic", turning it cold and "robotic", for want of a better word.

It comes down to what you are looking to achieve here, where you want to go, and if you are looking to keep Phil as a willing and interested participant, which clearly you are.

As for the plates that go into the sarcophagus, the "problem" with them for the idea I was toying with is that the final result, from the outside, is "just" a sarcophagus.  Now there is nothing wrong with that at all, in fact it is very good, but it doesn't have the same visual appeal as a statue, and it is a lot bigger and somewhat heavier to transport.  Plus its generally a bigger print job, unless you have a selection of sarcophagus pre-prepared on hand.

It comes down to what you are trying to achieve here, but it is good that there are lots of ideas being explored here, since I do feel there is lots of interesting potential here :)

"Must resist evil plotting at recalcitrant authors...

Nope, stupid idea, back to work!!!"

Are you resisting the urge to evil plot, or getting back to work on it?

Worried minds want to know!

I see your point about the visibility issues with the sarcophagus and of course the sheer bulk of it, as a sales tool. I will need to think on the concept of "while you wait" on demand printing in regards to printing demo pieces some more.

Of course "word of mouth" among high end customers will be the most effective tool for "bespoke" pieces, custom ordered for the rich and jaded and truly kinky.

Luckily Phil is not only a willing participant but a rather eager one, we will have to see where that leads him on these flights of fantasy.

-Baronlaw

Worried minds should remember that they are on record as liking surprises, so should not expect any answers before the results speak for themselves, in whatever form that might end up taking.

For the size of pieces that are printed, I have the general feeling that there are two broad markets to target here. One is the "minimal" look where the who is almost visible and perhaps quite accessible. Making the person contained a key part of the appearance of the finished display piece.

The second broad area being where the final outside is more than big enough to contain a person, or more than one person, but there is no need for there to be any sense that a person is in there, only those in the know would have any idea that this was even an option.

Now saying this an interesting idea for a middle ground appears... consider two or three women of similar height and roughly similar build. Now consider three fully equipped "cases", all of the sensors and stimulators you could possibly want, but the cases have identical human outsides. Just big enough to contain the tallest body, widest hips, etc of the three women. Perhaps slightly too small if they are to be compressed a little along with encased!

Once the three women are locked up there's is no way to tell who is inside which display statue. You can monitor their responses to various stimuli, but would this be enough to work out who was in which case? Does it even matter? This is something that really plays with the whole objectification and dehumanisation of what is going on here, but differently.

I will admit I am not quite sure yet where this idea might lead, but it does cycle back to an odd idea I came across years ago in a bondage story book by House of Gord. In this story there was a society where the women were kept very much as sex objects, but they wanted the women to be judged objectively, on their sexual skills, not on their looks.

In the story this involves keeping unmarried women in devices that kept most of their bodies bound and hidden, so all you could judge a woman on was mid torso to mid thigh, and her sexual performance, since the exposed part was quite naked and available.

Not really a direct overlap with this story at all, but there is something in the delightfully anonymous nature of the engagement, combined with the almost invasive level of monitoring and awareness of what they respond to that makes me think of this as a way of moving past how women look and getting more in tune with their sexual beings...


Back to the story as is I have just finished reading and editing part 3 for my re-reading pleasure. Let me know if you would like a copy. It's mostly tidying up commas when there is dialog.

But the point, it is where the two women watch Phil have an orgasm from the electrostim. There are two threads to the response, firstly how the company is going to love the data, and secondly how they are going to use this knowledge to drive Phil wild.

It is a very vivid moment, you can feel the wicked glee coming from the page, and it does beg the question of what data and experiments they have been asked to seek out... although on reflection, it can probably be summed up as any and every way to drive a captive wild with lust, especially since the shell gives them the scope to fully control all touch input over the entire body, everything they hear and see...

Smell and taste are actually up for full control too if they wanted to put the work in, for a serious leap forward in terms of how they control someone and what they experience!!!

A shell game of mummy cases is a very interesting idea. Or the turning of a variety of people of close but not exactly matching body dimensions into matching statues. But in either case subjecting them to similar stimulation and comparing results, then engaging in feedback loops to drive them to higher and higher levels of excitement.

I must beg pardon for my overuse of commas, the few times I've actually had someone edit my work, that has been a recurring comment.

I'm glad the "wicked glee" was conveyed in a manner you enjoyed.

As a male writer it is easier for me to write from Phil's perspective, but I hope I've done justice to Maggie and Paula as three dimensional characters and their motivations. Not simply plot devices to get Phil into more and crazier situations.

Smell is probably easy enough to simulate or use to stimulate, taste a little more difficult. More ideas to throw into future designs of Fantastic Plastics bag of trick and ways to torment Phil.

-Baronlaw, comma abuser.

Looks up from plotting plots about plots and more plots on my plotting table, casually converting it before turning... nothing to see here...

OK doing this out of order, and I should start by saying that while I read voraciously I failed English at school several times in a row. But I don't think you over use commas at all. Let me find an example...

From the start of part 3

>> Maggie happily replied "That's wonderful news Paula, we'll get together real soon to start work on the next model."

>> Paula cautioned Maggie "We do need to be a bit more scientific though."

After "happily replied" there should be a comma before the speech starts. After "cautioned Maggie" another comma, but sometimes a full stop before the speech starts. It's about breaking the text into the correct logical blocks and showing what's grouped with what.

Does that make sense?

Maggie and Paula definitely come across as real characters, people with their own agendas, desires and needs in all of this. You can watch them, understand them and care about them, and care if they are also getting what they want from all of this, and appreciate that they really are getting plenty of their own rewards from all of this hard work locking up and tormenting Phil :)

Smell and taste, for taste I was simply thinking about having the gag deliver tiny traces of certain chemicals, tastes, on demand, rather than when Phil prompts it for water or liquid food. Since the mouth only picks up a very few tastes this would be quite simple. Smell is more complex, but can be worked on in stages.

Cycling back to touch, temperate and vibration should be easily added with time, and having vibration "move" across the skin will feel like touch, with some development... that's really going to blow some minds!

Shell game... oh my!!! Now I am thinking about the tricky game of find the ball under the moving shells, where it's never where you think it is. Never knowing which person is inside which shell, even as you are interacting with them, manipulating them, choosing what they see, hear, experience, picking who gets released first and who has to stay locked up for longer, while never really knowing for sure if you are picking the person you think you are picking... oh my! The  ideas and games that start to come to mind simply by calling this a shell game...

Adding to the comment about feedback loops, another not sure how it would work yet idea, but the three shells and women, for discussions sake, woman one is teased with the "threat" of being kept locked up for another 48 hours and the system detects that this excites her.

So the computer system then starts trying to encourage women two and three by giving them pleasure whenever images or comments about keeping them locked in the cases for longer are made.

Perhaps what you are already thinking about, encouraging the women to show similar reactions and kinks while inside the cases, making it all the harder for anyone unknowing on the outside to tell who is who.

For a small but interesting addition, anytime the room the women are displayed in is empty there is a chance that the computer will engage the wheels in their stands to swap the women around, so even if you started out knowing which women was in which position, soon you know they were all mixed up. Obviously the women would know this was happening, so they could really feel it when sometime was talking to the wrong case, expressing their devotion and counting down the hours until "their" girlfriend is released back to them...

A dedicated plotting table? But I've been told there's "...nothing to see here..." Repeated in a hypnotized monotone voice.

So not overuse, more needed. Nods nods.

I'm glad that Maggie and Paula are fully fleshed out characters, nothing worse than people just being props.

Taste might be the easiest to deliver through some micro tubing added to the sides of the gag and delivered in small doses. Phil is of course inhaling air and that could be scented before reaching him.

I do have some ideas for vibrations and temperature. I think those will be in the next upgraded sarcophagus. Sorry you'll need more patience for that version.

I'm happy my offhand comment of a "shell game" inspired such extensive feedback. I was indeed thinking of the "wrong" feedback reaching the "right" volunteer. Perhaps kindling new desires or releasing hidden depths they were not even aware of prior to the their time inside.

-Baronlaw, plot free since 23.

I made this account for the sole purpose of expressing my appreciation of the author. You have more than one fan ^^

I am also a big fan of being teased in a public setting by unknowing participants. I hope to see more of it in the future and can't wait to read parts 4 and 5

See, your fan base has grown by 100%  8) !!!


Plotting table?  What plotting table?  This sounds interesting, do tell me more...  *radiates helpful interest*

Commas, its about where and how you use them.  But entering / leaving a speech block tends to benefit from some punctuation.  There is a difference in how it flows if the speech block ends with a comma before the closing double quotes and a full stop after all.

If you are interested, I will pull together a few paragraphs that show my edits, to try and show a bit more clearly what I am thinking, and maybe even doing correctly ;)

For taste, the tongue does the tasting, and only picks up 5 different flavours, sweet, bitter, sour, salt and umami.  So a few micro holes on the "base" of the gag, where the tongue would end up resting, would be enough to allow taste to be delivered to anyone who is locked up.

Scent is harder, partly due to the massive number of smells that people can detect, but its certainly something that can be worked on with time, but a simple place to start might be the "smell of sex", to be added to the air flow when the vibrator is running, to add another dimension to what is going on, and what is being done to "drive" the "lucky" passenger towards a pleasure peak...

The shell game, the correct stimulation being sent to the "wrong" encasement...  suddenly I am remembering and thinking about a totally different story...  follow along for a few moments if you will.

The story was "Mental Institution Weekend", actually available here:

https://www.mummified.net/storieslr/mental_institution_weekend.html

with 8 parts in total, if anyone wants to check it out.  The somewhat fanciful idea was a boyfriend, who's girlfriend worked in the local mental institute, who had a long running fantasy of being a patient, and his girlfriend, and some others, including one of the doctors, smuggled him in as a pretend patent for a few days, as a giggle, to see if they could, to toy with him, and also so the doctor could run some tests on a "normal" person.

The point that my mind jumped to was only in passing in the story, our temporary patient was wired up to a load of sensors and had a whole slideshow of images played at high speed.  The images were designed to cover all sorts of possible erotic triggers, and the sensors would tell them which images and ideas he responded to, so the doctor had a much better idea than either him or his girlfriend, of what actually sexually excited him, and how much.

Now, returning to us, we are considering a handful of "lucky volunteers", people we don't really know well, so we don't know what will excite them the most.

Going off on another tangent, one reason for picking women here is "ease".  If you want to wire a woman up with a a dildo and butt plug you don't need to make extra space on the outside.  But for a man, the sort of penis pump that is being used to such delightful and wicked effect on Phil doesn't fit with the elegant and clean lines of a sculpted statue encasement.

Oh dear, now I am thinking about Egyptian death masks, and Terry Pratchett...  Remember Pyramids?  All of the dead kings were made to look rather different, and somewhat identical, when their masks were prepared...

Three "identical" statues are prepared, each with a different woman inside.  At first I had been picturing these as really identical on the outside, which works so well for various different mind games, but since they are being printed on demand, keep the bodies identical, but make the faces just *slightly* different...  so statue A, which will wrap around Becky, has very subtle echos of Mandy's face.  Meanwhile statue B, which will wrap around Sindy, the face has very subtle echos of Becky.  Not enough for anyone to consciously pick up on the differences in the statues, but enough for a sub-conscious bias for anyone who knows and fancies one of these women to be drawn to the wrong statue...  after all, if we are going to confuse and lead people astray, we might as well do so properly!

Now, back to where I was going a minute ago, as it stands there is a lot of "down time" for these statues, where no one is interacting with them, or playing with these women.  Now for Phil this is much less of an issue, since his two "guardian angels", or should that be "guardian devils", are on hand, making sure he gets LOTS and LOTS of attention and stimulation...  plus we are all learning how much he enjoys simply being left helpless, dark and silent, to consider what might happen next...

But our "lucky volunteers", we cannot assume they will have the same active helpers...  so one of the first steps could make use of the computer that is linked to their case, and all of these sensors, to run through a large library of possible sexual triggers, to find out what each women is interested in, and might respond to.  If not done soon after being settled into place, then certainly that night, we need the results sooner rather than later after all!  Then we are in a much better position to start a bit of "positive feedback" to teach them that being secured into such a device is a real turn on!  Plus we need them to come out having had a large number of massive orgasms, the orgasms ideally taking longer to achieve, but being bigger, the longer they are inside, as the system learns their triggers and reactions.  After all, we are selling sex here, so we need to make sure its a key part of the experience!

The video screens can be used to show all sorts of recorded images and films, but lets not forget hearing...  add a computer voice program to the system, and the system can talk to the women, telling them what is coming up, what options were available for them, and what was finally selected...  we have seen the power of the right words whispered into Phil's ears, so others should also get a good whispering to...

Taking this a step further though, for a later part, once this has been shown to be working, what other options are offered to the people outside, once someone is secured inside one of these statues?  Do we pick which new sexual fetish / object of desire each woman is encouraged to be attracted to?  How about a little game between the statues / women, where the first to orgasm doesn't get any more orgasms until they are released, instead being teased relentlessly, while the others get as many orgasms as can be wrung out of them?  Someone needs to be making decisions here about how they are treated, and, well, we cannot ask them since they are locked up, gagged, and anonymous, so someone else will have to decide on their behalf...

At Hydrochoerus

"I made this account for the sole purpose of expressing my appreciation of the author. You have more than one fan."

I am suitably honored you went to the trouble of creating an account for this purpose, thank you.

"I am also a big fan of being teased in a public setting by unknowing participants. I hope to see more of it in the future and can't wait to read parts 4 and 5"

I hope 4 and 5 meet your expectations. There is also a whole new adventure in the works for Phil and friends.

-Baronlaw

@feline

My fan base grows by leaps and bonds.

A plotting table is what you strap unrepentant authors to, to encourage them to write more stories of course.

Re: Triggering Images being a gateway to hidden desires. I did a similar thing regarding the feedback based on images in the "Jabba's Palace" story. Also it could be used to encourage new desires in "volunteers". Maybe using AI generated images of the person in the type of bondage the person who encased them wants to indulge in. You see yourself mummified and the machinery triggers you to have a massive orgasm while that image appears in front of your eyes over and over. Until you associate mummification with pleasure.

Women do indeed have an advantage in plumbing that wouldn't be as obtrusive visually in a statue situation.

Whispered words at just the right moment and knowing that person's triggers is a powerful tool. After all the mind is the biggest sex organ.

Having someone outside the encasement guiding the desired results is food for thought, and why Phil was so lucky to find Maggie and Paula.

Plotting table...  what a fascinating idea!  I wonder if they come in portable models as well, for those occasions when going looking for the author is required...  *carefully pushes the door behind me shut*

There is a theory, more of an observation perhaps, that in terms of sexual stimulation, men are visual creatures, while women look for and need something else, often something more subtle and complex.  A collection of graphic but emotionally empty pictures can get a very strong reaction from a lot of men.  But if you look at a book shop, assuming you can find one, back in the days before 50 Shades, there were already a LOT of books aimed at women, that had a lot of sex scenes, but it was also wrapped up in a lot of romance.

Now, it is interesting to note that books where the woman was kidnapped, or married off to some unknown and "cruel" man, or any number of other plots involving "you have no choice" were very popular.  Strangely enough, it seems that in these books the woman was able to win over the terrible ogre they were trapped with, and it was all just a fantasy anyway...

But little girls are brought up on the "princess is a captive, princess is rescued" style of fairy tale, and it is widely observed that women are drawn to arseholes *shrug*  I know, broad generalisations, but we need to start somewhere.  But it might make some more responsive to "you are trapped, now you are at my mercy" :)

The point of all of this is that simply throwing some images up on the internal screen and linking it to the vibrators is unlikely to sway women quite as easily as men.  Now I see this as a good thing, an excellent plot opportunity, rather than a problem.  We can consider the sorts of teasing that gets whispered to the women, what it is paired with, how the system, or the controller will tease and toy with the women, looking at their reactions and trying to tailor their responses to the goal they have been given.  At this point, the company is in the "ideas and experimenting" stage, working out what is possible, what works, what looks like it will sell, etc.

But think about what the company wants, and what makes them money...  sell someone the sarcophagus and you have a sale.  Sell someone the sarcophagus and then sell them some "we personalise the program, so it learns and keeps on getting better" and you have a sale AND a subscription...

Now I am thinking of Phil and his two controllers, sorry, I mean loving and doting partners, friends, and controllers, as the golden goose here...  you need to give them room to experiment, printer time, money, help and space.  All the while looking to learn as much as they can from these fun and games, and offering plenty of expert help to assist in these games with Phil, to push the encasement further, the devices further, the computer programs and responses further...  Also helps to explain any leaps in the capabilities of the next sarcophagus that Phil gets to experience as well :)

But more than this, they will want to try running some tests with other people as well.  A sort of random plan here, to avoid taking this into to dark and terrible a direction, anyone going into the device needs to know that they are looking to "fine tune" their sexual responses, find out what makes them horny, and encourage them to respond more strongly.

Yes, I like that phrasing, suggestive but gentle, nothing too scary there.  But since it is all at the development stage, sounds so much better than experimental stage, they don't want to explain what they are doing to the person going in, so they have to have a significant other on hand, a sexual partner they trust and who knows what is going on.  The reason, in part, is that this partner is going to be the one picking what programming is attempted, and checking the results, and providing feedback to the company afterwards.  After all, both parties are being paid to help out here, and this is part of what they are being paid for.

Plays well when you think about the sex expo as well, since there can be people on hand explaining the type of programming they are going for, for each of the models, showing some of the changes to their responses already, in the hours they have been locked into the display statues...  how this was selected for the models, and how this is a new product they are working to bring to market.

From a story point of view, its another layer and type of control that the person going into the device gives up.

If you think the plotting table is fun, you should look at the Character Development Cage. "You'll get out when I have three new fully developed characters!"

Plumbing issues and being my alter ego aside, Phil is inside the various devices for that additional reason of men being "known" as more visually oriented. Streaming sexy images to Phil while locked inside is effective at getting his interest to "peak"

While for a woman "volunteer" I'd have a sexy male with a vague accent reading these stories into their ears. Maybe even custom write them a story featuring them by name and describing literally what was planned for them.

 "Baronlaw while cruel in some regards was kind in other areas. Peggy knew he would seal her inside his devilish creation the Sex Sarcophagus and drive her to higher and higher levels of pleasure. At the same time she knew she could trust him to keep her safe while she could not defend herself. As he was shutting the lid she asked him, voice trembling Don't let me out too quickly? He smiled down at her and replied longer than you think you can handle but no more than I think you can. Peggy smiled at his answer, knowing she had an adventure ahead of her." Etc. Etc. Etc.

And of course a true bondage lover loves more and more layers of control. Even when they already can't move, let's add some more. It never seems to be enough for that little beast in the brain. Tie me up, ooo now tape, now chains, ooo now a crate, weld it shut, what else can we add?!

-Baronlaw

What an interesting idea, Baronlaw in the character creation cage...  but we would need to fuel the creative process somehow...  characters would need to come from somewhere...  they would need to be seeded, that seems like the right process to look to use...

seeding...
pollinating?  No, that's plants...
inserting the start points of characters...
adding little tiny thoughts, ideas, beginnings...
what is it called...  I nearly have a word...
insem... in... a... t... i... o...

so close, I can feel the word out there...  I will think of it later, I am sure.  I am sure there is a good word for this idea!  Yes, I think this works well as somewhere to keep you "safe" and out of trouble while writing!


Now the comment about using images on Phil is interesting, since in the published parts so far, using visual stimulation is almost an after thought, so far!  Obviously this is just so far.  Yes, we have had the scenes of the two women keeping themselves busy, but the display panel has been used more to tease his desire to be locked up more fully, and see just how much trouble he is in *smirk*

So seeing more experimentation with finding out what works to stimulate and excite a captured and fully restrained Phil is a most interesting thought, which I am looking forward to seeing.

From a story point of view, the details of images shown to Phil, or the audio fed to Phil, or anyone else, doesn't really need to be fleshed out too much, but we do want enough information to get a good mental image of what is happening, so we can try to visualise and enjoy the ideas at work here.

The teasing voice for Peggy certainly works well, and can easily be seen as the sort of thing that will evoke the right sort of responses and reactions.

A thought on the voice though, technology is certainly at the point were a woman, who would "in general" be better at understanding the importance of whispering the right things into another woman's ears, could be talking, but her voice could be run through a computer to give her the sort of rich, wicked male voice that could work so very well here...  so the mind and imagination of a woman, the computer monitoring reactions to help offer up suggestions of what to say, so a bit of AI helping, and another computer program to give her the voice for maximum effect...

*smirk* just wondering if certain words could be "played" though the vibrators and even parts of the shell, to give them a lot of added emphasis, and sort of a deep base reverb.  This could be very subtle, just to add gentle emphasis to key points, or really overt, to stress the total containment and helplessness of our packaged captive...

Obviously no reason for Phil to miss out on some of the general feedback when he is being spoken to either, once the idea has been thought up, and there is something to wire it up to 8)

The Character Creation Cage is only to be used when an author is unmotivated and needs isolation so they can rekindle their inspiration. Not normally involved in insemination.

Luckily I have many past friends and partners to use as seeds to create my hopefully well rounded characters, so far.

Phil's video feed has not been fully utilized yet, in combination with other stimulation to achieve the desired results of say a Marketing Department selling kinky high end designer devices.

I could see where using feedback from bio monitors to tailor an AI voice to trigger our women volunteers desires would be efficient and potentially more effective than a one size fits everyone solution.

Of course sound reactive vibrators already exist, but I assume you have something more interactive in mind.  Maybe planting it subconsciously at a below hearing threshold, but with pleasurable vibrations or stimulation timed to trigger and reinforce the planted ideas.

Phil's latest escapades will have most of these ideas worked into the storyline.

-Baronlaw, still writing, no need for tables or cages yet.

I question the lack of need for the cage. After all, is it possible for an author to have too much motivation and inspiration? I think we need to consider this as a safe resting spot for certain writers, to keep them on task...

Insemination you say, what a wicked word. This does raise the idea for a mind game later on. I am thinking a woman secured and put on display somewhere very busy, so the sex expo works well, and her responsible partner is on hand and knows that she enjoys the teasing fantasy of being bred.

Once on display her partner explains to her that they are running a competition, like a raffle perhaps. The story is that each ticket buyer makes a semen deposit, and then a few winning ticket holders have their semen deposits pumped through her vibrator, deep into her vagina, to see how fertile she is at the moment. All the other samples will be fed to her through the feeding tube in her gag, so they don't go to waste.

It's just a mind game though, fake semen can be provided for feeding, bonus points if it's fortified to make good nutrition. Even better if the quantity provided for her to eat is clearly far too much for only a small number of men to produce, really pushing the mind games... yes, apparently I am evil *smirk*

Obviously something that would have to be planned and organised ahead of time, but kept as a surprise, since surprises are good :)

Now please put all ideas off a one size fits all solution out of your mind, unless there is a real need. The printed shells are all customised, this is a high end product here, not something that is mass produced and all of them are the same. The only way I can see identical stimulation and input to more than one woman, or man, at the same time working, is to prove the benefits of a tailored experience, or as part of a "who comes first on maximum stimulation losses or little game", but even that feels beneath you.

Back to Phil, to be fair we are only just starting on collecting all of the data that the company wants, and working out what tests to run, so it's no surprise that we haven't seen this sort of use of the display screen yet, but I am looking forward to seeing it when we get there :)

Now talking about Phil, one obvious thing to try when he is not at the mercy of the public is edging him, and keeping him worked up for a nice long time before allowing him an orgasm. Bonus points for his ladies teasing him and asking him to agree to more time locked up to earn his delayed orgasm ;)

Voice and stimulation, I have a couple of thoughts here. So let's try to flesh them out and work through the thinking.

Once we get to playing porn videos or letting other peoples voices come through to Phil, keep the extra vibrations turned off, but enable them at a subtle level when either of his ladies are talking to him. We want to reinforce the point that they bring him pleasure, they are the ones in control of his fate and he is safe in their hands, so some positive reinforcement whenever they are interacting with him.

Next thought, we already had one point where one of the women ordered Phil to orgasm just as the printing finished. But think about this in terms of "dom voice", those moments when the dominant is issuing a command, given the packaged nature here it's going to be a command to orgasm mainly, this is the sort of time when you want the voice to have extra power, reverberation, focus... does this make sense? This idea is adding some of that extra power to the voice and the moment.

More broadly, think about how some men are said to have such a deep voice you can almost feel it as much as hear it. I am thinking about trying to use vibration paired to the voice to add a "tingling in my naughty bits" element to the voice, something that you don't get through your ears. Does this make sense? Again it's about trying to make the experience of being teased while contained as immersive and multi sensory as possible.

Things that are more subtle and interesting than just vibrating an obvious vibration in sync with the voice or music.

Well it would need to be a sturdy cage but with openings for your hands and head to still be able to type. I suppose something could be designed.

Mind games and unknown partners, a true story. For many years I've had a partner who enjoys treating me like Maggie treats Phil. One time, as one does, I admitted to her that I had always had a fantasy of being "used" if you will by someone unknown to me. So at an event we had gotten a hotel room for, she made sure I could not see or hear or speak, and was very thoroughly fastened to the bed. Then she invited over someone she trusted, that I was not aware of wanting me in such a fashion. It was a very intense experience as you might imagine. She never did admit to me the persons name. So to this day whenever she introduces me to someone new, or even some older friends I've known for years are chatting with me, I don't know if that is the person or not. It's quite the turn on as you can imagine. Conversations seem to have a lot more potential innuendo, "is this person hinting it was her"? Is that secret smile at a fond memory of an event past?

So I can imagine some women might have a similar fantasy revolving around "Sperm roulette" as you've described. To carry it further since we are imagining some sort of plastic mannequin with an inner framework capable of holding the wearer in any pose that can be printed. With an outer shell that snaps in place, for a more aesthetically pleasing "statue" appearance. We can also imagine the hip and groin plates as removable and the "statue" being accessible for sexual purposes without the volunteer ever even being able to see who uses them.

I think you are correct about the no "one size fits all" , these are custom devices and as such will have custom experiences, whether through decisions the controllers make or through some sort of AI subscription feedback model sold a service by the company. I think Fantastic Plastics is either going to have to spin up a whole new division or partner with someone already in that tech space.

We've all heard of the literary trope "His deep rich baritone voice seemed to touch parts of her body that had nothing to do with her ears." Of course our AI friend could detect the key words such as "Cum for me!" as an imperative command and make it happen. Then Phil or our female volunteer will eventually come to associate the command with the eventual result. At some level they will realize the command is a command and the "device" will make it happen, so why fight it?

But I'm leaning towards a more subliminal programming approach as it were. Phil quickly became aware of the patterns of people activating the interactive laptop while trapped in the mummy case. The human mind is very quick to detect patterns, like Pavlov's dogs. If X happens, then Y follows. Of course as the psych boys (and game programmers) will tell you, you want to set up that expectation but then not always deliver it, the expectation of a reward and then random fulfillment are more effective then just always rewarding the player. That's why early levels of games do have a higher frequency of rewards for players, they are setting up that expectation. Then as the levels increase in difficulty the rewards are more rare. This makes the random reward all that much sweeter.

So I'm thinking that our AI or "brain in the box" has more game theory then Pavlovian programming, if that makes sense.

As always I deeply appreciate your feedback and the obvious thought that went into it.

~Baronlaw, uncaged.

*looks at baronlaw with deep suspicion*  do you think I was birthed yesterday?  Hands should be secured into mittens, with a nice rough exterior, and those mittens should further be secured to the edges of the case, nicely away from any sensitive and good to stimulate spots on certain authors anatomy...  no need for any freedom of motion there.  Certainly no need for any options for self satisfaction!  This is supposed to be a work space for focusing on what I deem important, so we need to make sure your motivation is kept up.

As for typing, a dictation system is fine.  Then any unnecessary web access, or appeals for early release, can be properly filtered out!  Really, its like you think this is all about you...

Mind games and partners...  WOW!  You have a truly AMAZING partner, and a massive amount of trust, and a very solid history together here!!!  You are BOTH deeply lucky to have each other!

So, I don't need to try and explain the level of trust, of history, connection and understanding that is required to hand over this level of control, safe in the knowledge that while you may, in fact sometimes will, be pushed past the limits you had set, and felt comfortable with, you are always in safe hands, and are constantly being watched over!  It is this history, this sort of connection and partnership that needs to live at the heart of the relationship between the characters for all of this to work, as far as I am concerned.

Here of course, the responsible party on the outside not only knows the secured person very well, they have the benefit of all of the sensors and feedback to help them gauge their responses even better, their stress levels, their pleasure levels, making sure they are never getting too close to panic, or on the other hand, getting board and under stimulated!

A brilliant concept with cardboard cut out characters that you don't care for, that don't have feelings and reactions, is never going to work so well, or achieve so much.  Instead it is going to feel quite hollow instead.

There are a few stories out there that deal with the idea of turning women into breeders, and related concepts.  My mind had actually gone towards this story, if you want to have a quick look:

https://www.mummified.net/storiesek/insemination.html

but wanted something a bit more "mind game" like, and less...  well, less trying and failing to force the issue.

Years ago I came across a fascinating set of images from House of Gord, it started with a woman in a full body cat suit and a wooden frame that was going to be filled with expanding foam that set solid.  The final position was sort of a T shape, her lower legs were vertical, she was bent at the waist with her bottom pushed well back.  Her bottom stuck out one side of the block of foam, and her head and shoulders out the other.  The rest of her body was fully enclosed, and locked solidly in position by the foam.  The same sort of idea we are exploring here, but done without the advantages of solid, and perfectly printed plastic.  Once everything was set solid, the cat suit on her bottom was cut away, leaving this part of her sticking out of a solid surface, vagina and anus readily available.  *Insert many comments about safety, and fumes from expanding foam* :)

A stand alone, and done in reality version of the "body stuck in a wall, head and arms on one side, bottom the other".  Another short story reference for this version of the idea:

https://www.literotica.com/s/locked-in-a-stockade-at-a-party

Something that could be done better, and in a lot of ways "easier", with the printing tools in this story here.  But I was trying for something more interesting than "just" someone tied up, one or more holes made available, and lots of random fucking.  Don't get me wrong, that is good, and can be excellent, but if we can come up with an interesting approach and take on the idea, all the better!  Having said that, there is something deliciously objectifying about reducing someone to just one or more anonymous holes for others to use for sex, especially since here the body can be merged into all sorts of displays, so you can have the hips / bottom sticking out unexpectedly of an otherwise "neutral" display or object...

A desk!  There is a long running fantasy / idea of the secretary disappearing under the bosses desk and providing a blowjob on demand, hidden from view by anyone who sits on the other side of the desk.  But how about taking this to the next level...  think about those rising and lowering stand / sit desks that are out there now a days.  Consider a desk with an embedded woman, or man, depending on taste, where the embedded, bent in half and anonymous person can be lowered and positioned so that the hard working and stressed out executive can simply shift slightly in their seat and slide into a pre-lubed hole when ever they want some relaxation and stress relief.  Then, when they are done, the body gets tucked away again out of sight and the desk looks normal, if overly chunky.

For all of the AI and making sense of the sensors monitoring the "volunteers", yes, this is going to call for a set of specialists that would not normally be required at a plastic printing company.  Perhaps try to pull in a couple of people first, rather than going to an external company?  After all, they want to keep control of the product here, and if done right the computer systems, AI, customised feedback that makes the most of the different shells that are produced will become the more important part of this product line.  That will take time, certainly, but if you are looking ahead, you don't want to hand the crown jewels to someone else!

It is certainly possible to train a willing submissive to come on verbal command, even out in public, in a non kinky setting - yes, I have seen the results in person :8  A lot of trust helps, and both parties wanting to play the game, but yes, all sorts of programming and triggers are possible, given time.  The idea of subliminal commands, something more subtle, is VERY appealing.  I was just trying to find a good balance point between these ideas, and avoiding going as dark as the programming aim in your Jabba's Palace Party story.  A lot of this balance will lay in making sure the loving and responsible parties on the outside have control and the final say in what is done, what they want, since they know the person inside, and are looking out for them.

At the same time though, this is something that would, presumably, be worked up to, so an earlier version can try more crude voice and vibration tricks.  Depends, I can see it working both ways to be honest.  But thinking about it, this is already happening quite quickly in part 3, with Phil responding very clearly, and quite strongly, already, to someone approaching the laptop and game.  So we can probably move quite quickly in this direction, and this is the sort of "smells of profit and opportunity" that the company should be very eager to fund and help push forwards! *wicked smirk*

I know I keep cycling back to the company, but we want to keep this rooted in the internal logic of who is funding all of these crazy games :)  After all, if we are going to move towards longer stays inside these encasements, we need to think about budgeting for paying for our volunteers time, even if only a bit.  24 hours is something someone can find if they are motivated, but 2, 3 days, let alone more, even if split across several sessions and different printed cases, its time off work and not earning.  Keeping the story rooted keeps the internal logic sound, so we can really focus on the kinky wickedness of it all!

As for the time and energy here, it's almost like I am investing in an author who is producing something OH so worth while :)  Also, you reply and discuss these thoughts, allowing us to keep thinking and exploring!  Much harder to do when talking into the void *shrug*

While I am big fan of lockable mitts ( that lock clicking shut, shivers) I was only thinking of the ability to type. A short length of chain attached to a d-ring mounted near the laptop keyboard would guarantee the hands couldn't reach ones fun parts. I was not considering dictation software because that leaves our caged author his ability to speak and perhaps convince his captor that his release is the best way to inspire new stories. After all he is in the cage because of his way with words.  ;)

Yes, I consider myself very lucky to have a trustworthy partner and other friends, and as you can imagine that has influenced how I portray Phil, Maggie, and Paula's relationship.

The unexpected body parts revealed from within an object where you were not expecting a person to exist is an interesting concept. I recall seeing it in the old Jane Fonda movie "Barbarella.

I am familiar with House of Gords website and his literal objectification of women inside expanding foam. One of the few materials that while tempting, is probably not for the uninitiated to try and use.

Now some sort of printed furniture, perhaps a sit stand desk? An interesting idea.

Commanded to cum just by verbal trigger and in a public setting? Fascinating. Phil might be in trouble with that being plausible.

Even more interesting is the programming not being obvious to our volunteer Phil, so it's a surprise when Maggie triggers him.

Yes, the company is exploring the sex toy options as a money maker, not simply in the quest for knowledge. I will continue to try and ground the company and it's products in as close to reality as possible.

I am happy to discuss concepts and ideas, but do keep in mind I am currently writing several chapters ahead of what you've currently read.

-Baronlaw, not an unresponsive void.

ROFL - concerned about talking your way out, you are SO cute at times!  It's positively delightful :)  But fear not, it's very hard to unlock a cage when the keys are not present.  After all, one does have to be aware that someone else passing by might be tempted to try and open some of the locks, if keys were to be found.  Best to keep temptation away from prying fingers that don't understand the process after all...

The level of trust going on between the characters, the depth of understanding, makes more sense now given your own history to draw on, to guide things.  It is one of the things I noticed, but never felt the need to really comment on.  The story drops us into events, but has yet to touch on any form of back story, so I am left wondering how come Phil has such trust, and Maggie has such a deep knowledge of his interests, and what is going to work on him, and for him.

I have very vague memories of the film Barbarella, I half remember the opening striptease, but that's about it.  So I certainly don't remember any body parts in objects, but I do think this is an idea that needs to be explored.  After all, normally its something that is just crazy difficult to do, but suddenly its almost easy, coming naturally from the encasement process...  so many wonderful ideas to explore here!

Oooh now if you really wanted to go for something surprising down the line, in a later chapter, find a model / volunteer who has lost one or more limbs.  This isn't about sensualising the injury, but playing with perceptions.  Firstly, the perception that someone with such an injury is no longer a sexual being, who wants and enjoys sex.  But much more importantly here, its about where the "limbs" go...

If you have a large object, then body parts appearing in the middle is easy to understand, since there is obviously plenty of space for the rest of the body to be folded into.  Yes, a contortionist can fit into a surprisingly small and twisty space, but there are clearly limits, limits that suddenly stop working the way you expect if your model doesn't have the expected body shape...

Yes, House of Gord did produce some amazing ideas!  My personal take was that while I loved the ideas, the resulting picture sets, etc, were often a bit lacking in emotion.  Partly why I am such a fan of good erotic writing, its packed with feelings and emotions!  Still, some of the ideas still live on :)

Commanding to cum on demand in public, it doesn't have to be a verbal queue.  I am a little surprised you haven't seen this done.  Apparently I have encountered an odd bunch of perverts over the years.  I have also seen it triggered by gestures, which can be a lot more subtle and less obvious.

Sadly one of the times I came across it, it was a very immature male doing the triggering on a female submissive, clearly making her deeply uncomfortable and unhappy, and driving her from the room.  Apparently she was getting quite uncomfortable and wet.  A reminder that some maturity and empathy matters here, and concern for the feelings and situation of the other party, otherwise fun and games will be cut short, as the games stop being fun.

Now, talking about programming...  if you really want to try and get clever, have Phil programmed not to remember the trigger, so he is left with the results, but doesn't know the full details of the why and how...  this is something I have seen done in mind control stories now and then, and it can be really interesting, since the "victim" discovers the effect, but without knowing the trigger, they are much more helpless.  You cannot stop someone introducing you to the trigger after all, if you have no idea of what form that trigger takes...  *smirk*

There are solutions to me being behind the current point of writing, upto and including proof reading and editing services, if you don't mind dealing with random turn around, depending on what else is going on.  Just pointing it out.


Now, onto a rather different front...  this may be getting a bit to off topic, but an idea for a different sort of printing job has been rumbling around in my head for the last few days.  It started by thinking about teasing, edging, and trying to maximise Phil's orgasm.  Years ago the book "The Joy of Sex" came out, and I used to have an old copy.  One section I found deeply fascinating talked about how to give someone the maximum possible sexual pleasure.  The book's view was that for a man this was done via "slow masturbation", basically their version of tie them up, make sure they REALLY are helpless, then edge them until they go nuts before bringing them off.

For a woman the book said that the best results came from multiple, repeated, orgasms, and just driving them as far and as high as possible.

So far, so obvious how to apply this advice.  But, it also described an interesting bra for teasing and preparing a woman.  The idea was little caps over the nipples, filled with lots of small, softish, protrusions.  The idea is that the natural movements of the body would cause the nipples to rub against these nubs, stimulating and teasing the nipples, and helping to keep the woman on the edge.  Best paired with ben-wa balls in my opinion!

Talking about books, a second book was on giving women orgasms, by one of the women who stared in "Sex in the City", the sex mad one.  The book boiled down to "there is a clitoris, learn where it is and worship it", and "there really IS a G-spot, find it, work it"

Personal experience over the years has taught me a surprising number of women still don't know about their G-spot, FAR to many men have no idea of it, and couldn't find it to save their lives.  It's there, its easy to find, it works VERY well!  But, interestingly, like the clitoris's exact position, each woman is slightly different...

Now, anyone getting something printed up needs to be given a high quality 3D scan.  But, if the scan was more detailed around the genitals, and told us the relevant positioning of clitoris and G-spot, then suddenly something can be printed that is guaranteed to sit on both, and with enough material around it, NOT move off topic, no matter what...

I am cycling back to the comments about a chastity belt, or corset, and thinking how this could be applied to a woman.  A bra top, but enclosing enough that there is no way its coming off...  a flexible mesh can be 3D printed easily enough, these days you see simple versions laser cut into wood, making solid wood curve, or simple toys of interlinked parts that were printed interlinked.  So a bra "chastity belt" could be 3D printed, perfectly fitted to the woman in question, designed to tease and torment her breasts and especially her nipples with every breath...  after all, if the cups are a TINY bit to small, it will encourage swelling of the nipples, into the little tormenting recesses for them...  and this is before any extras are fitted to the bra post printing, pre fitting.

Add in a chastity belt that comes with built in ben-wa balls, and keeps pressure and sensation always on the G-spot and clitoris, perfectly shaped and sized for her body...  but both parts can be worn under normal clothes...

Well, it would be rude to forget to point out that Phil has a prostate gland, and there is no reason that he should be left out when it comes to designing items that "accidentally" get secured on, that happen to probe and tease in JUST the perfect spot...

Yes, leaving the keys elsewhere is wisest. Can't be tempted if they just aren't there. But that just makes the click of the lock shutting all that more.....stimulating and triggering ....for those of us who enjoy such sounds. How delightful.

In any case, I have not delved into Phil's and Maggie's prior relationship too much. But I did manage to jot out a "prologue" story of one of their earlier adventures together, in between chapters. It's in the queue as the webmaster would say.

If you get a chance to watch Barbarella on one of the streaming services, I do recommend it as "campy kinky" fun. The opening strip tease spacesuit sequence is a classic. A friend of mine who does burlesque shows actually made a striptease spacesuit as a homage to that sequence to use in a performance.

I hesitate to write a story about someone with a missing limb(s), just because I do not come across as taking advantage of their disability for the sake of a story. If I can think of some way to make them a "real" character without pandering I will do so. It requires a bit of thought. Of course even people who are missing limbs due to birth or accident are still sexual people and can be kinky too.

You have articulated one of my issues with House of Gord, the lack of emotion in the photo sets. The models did not look like they were having "fun"? I found a foam encasement session another person did many years ago which looked like they were having fun, so much so, I actually wrote a "homage story" of sorts. Describing how such a session might happen.

I'm sorry to hear an immature dom was making the sub uncomfortable in a public venue. I have heard of non-verbal triggers, such as a female dom perhaps licking her thumb to signal her male sub she'd prefer to be licking something else. Of course one must be circumspect of ones environment as making someone "wet" or "hard" might be terribly inappropriate for the guest list so to speak.

I am tempted to take you up on proof reading, if for no other reason then getting you the stories sooner. Of course you'd have to wait to post such delightful and thoughtful commentary as you have done so here, until after it's available to the broader Grommet plaza audience. "Spoilers" you know.

I too have heard the way to drive men to an epic orgasm is "endless" edging. For certain values of endless of course. The most bang for your buck as you will. Where as women can build upon their experiences reaching new heights, which each successive experience.

I recall some book or story that included a "teasing bra" design. As you describe, with every twist of the torso or swing of the arms it brushes her nipples and increases their sensitivity. For our friend Phil a prostate "tickler" of some kind that rubs him the right way as he goes about his day. But of course in both cases not removable by the current wearer, only by the controller of said person.

-Baronlaw (no keys, no problems)

Just have to make sure to put out enough locks...  not TOO many locks, obviously, but plenty.  After all, too many locks and you start to loose the wonderful view through the cage bars, and that really won't do.  Plus no need to loose the access holes...  just in case... 8)

There is plenty of time to flesh out some of the back story between Phil and Maggie as time goes on.  One advantage of doing it this way is the reader is already hooked and invested, you have shown that fun and kinky things are happening, so learning more about the characters we are already interested in works well.

People with missing limbs is very much an odd thing to explore and come across.  Slightly more reasonable would be interesting results using a contortionist, who could also be packed into unexpected shapes and sizes.  Something like this would need to happen "naturally", perhaps due to the company reaching out for a wide range of models to help run tests on.  Or, perhaps one of the technical staff have a friend or relative with such a disability, and suggest that they might make a good test subject.

From the company point of view, its "good press" to be so inclusive, while also ensuring the new "what's going on in their heads, and how to drive them wild" department gets a wider range of test subjects.

Even if it makes sense, it is pulling us away from Phil and Maggie, but it does allow for different sorts of fun and games to be considered.

House of Gord...  this reminds me.  One photo story set they did, many years ago now, was a woman being transported inside a box.  They were re-enacting a scene from a story, or probably House of Gord book.  The concept behind the scene was that the woman had been kidnapped, and dynamite was packed into the dense packing foam that the box was filled with, so that if the transport was interrupted, the dynamite would go off, so there would be no living kidnap victim to talk to, so no leads back to the kidnapping gang.  This was converted into a play scene by wiring the woman up to a tens machine, and placing a microphone next to her gag.  The model knew, and consented, to the tens machine being calibrated to the maximum pain setting she could handle, then turned up several notches, making for a very effective threat to keep her silent during transport, during the scene, since the tens machine was set to go off if she made too much noise.

What they didn't tell the model, apparently, was about the vibrator that was fitted into the case between her legs - not sure how she was supposed to miss it though.  But the probably didn't know that they could operate the vibrator from outside the case.  The idea being that she was going to be pushed to orgasm during the scene, and it was then her problem to remain silent, if she could, or she would get one hell of a shock.

The whole case, with the woman firmly encased inside hard foam on all sides and then secured into a locked case, was transported by truck on the open road.  The sort of crazy thing House of Gord have been known to do.

The idea has stuck with me for years, but the pictures didn't do a lot to really sell all of the emotions that went along with this, and of course a closed up crate isn't that exiting to look at, unless you know what is going on inside.

Still, the idea of an "impossible" challenge like that might work well, I can see Maggie enjoying teasing Phil with something like that to keep him occupied at times *smirk*


I made the comment about the immature dom partly because it matters here.  We are envisioning a new department, who are given control over "people" who are helpless, packaged away, who are basically turned into "objects", simply as things to test, experiment with and toy with, to try and maximise certain graphs on the monitor outputs.  With the people locked away and so completely anonymous, out of sight and out of mind, there is a *risk* of the whole dehumanising aspect of this pushing them to forget that these are real people they are experimenting on...

Now, a BIT of this could be a LOT of fun, wicked, naughty, objectifying fun.  But you have to watch how far it goes, which is why having someone to take Maggie's role with Phil helps, someone who cares for and about the person being tested, and can be kept in the loop of what is and is not reasonable to do.  I don't know how often you have run across people who don't take the emotions and feelings of submissives seriously enough, but sadly I have seen more than enough cases where this happens.  Mostly involving younger adults, adult enough to be playing these games, but not mature enough to really understand or consider what they are getting up to, and the feelings involved *sigh*

For locked on clothes that are designed to tease, delight and torment the wearer, at the whim of their controller, normally this is just down to remove control vibrators, and related toys.  But I was / am trying to see how to apply these sorts of ideas to the printing options here.  I do feel that there is so much more to explore beyond whole body encasement.  Now, as should be clear, this is DEEPLY brilliant, but still feels like the tip of the iceberg.

For proof reading, and catching up a bit, to be fair, no one else seems to be showing much interest in this conversation, so that doesn't seem to be a big loss.  For commenting and editing, I have used Microsoft Word before.  Drop in a chapter, turn on change tracking, then do any editing / proof reading, plus drop in all of the thoughts and comments that occur to me in brackets, so they can be easily located, digested, and deleted to get the edited version.  No doubt there are various online tools that will do the same job just as well to.  It partly comes down to what tools you use, and what works well.

You might be surprised at how many small edits I have made to the first 3 parts, if you were to diff the before and after.  Let me know if you are interested, and I can suggest a diff tool as well, if needed.

Let it rumble round, but the entire conversation can easily be moved to PM's here, or email, without impacting much, if anything, here.

There is always a balancing point between enough locks and too many, although most of us kinky souls would leans towards the too many side of the scale. But of course not so many as to interfere with fun access and viewing.

A friend once remarked she'd love to see me in a cage under a piece of glass and serve tea on top to a select guest list. I of course would be securely fastened inside said cage for the ladies to be able to access as they desired.

Phil and Maggie's backstory is indeed lower on my story writing priority list. It is in mind as I write "current" events and influences their actions. But I'd have to outline it more seriously to write from there to here as it were.

I thought up a perfect segue for the company to be involved with people missing limbs. Plastic prosthetics, someone has to print out those missing limbs to fit the users remaining parts.
I understand the better the fit the more comfortable the user is. Maybe Fantastic Plastics has a govt contract to supply prosthetics to Veterans.

As far as the hard foam penalty box, a fascinating idea. Pretty much setting out "volunteer" up for failure by assigning an almost impossible task. That almost being key to active participation of the victim. If you know you are doomed to fail you'll just fail and take the hit. But if there's a sliver of hope you can succeed. That's where the story gets written.

As for proofreading services, I think it's a wonderful idea. I can easily output the stories as word docs and send them to you for early review. Let me know how you'd like to proceed.

Although for the sake of my other fan, you couldn't post public responses till after Teandra posts the latest installments.

Baronlaw, how many is too many locks?

The balance point for locks is easy, the person, or cat, in charge needs to be able to quickly and reliably pair all in use locks to the correct keys.  Otherwise they are not in charge, and the locks are.  Of course, if someone else is left to play, it's fine to provide a few...  hundred... decoy keys to slow them down.  After all, they are not the one who is in charge, who has the power, but who also bares the responsibility!

The responsibility bit being the part many people seem to overlook, forget, or even *shudder* ignore.  Another very big point in favour of Phil's two ladies :)

As for the display under the table, cages work, also being secured to the table legs, to make you seem more integral to the structure also works well...

Filling in little bits of the back story can be done as you go along, if this works well.  Conversation between the two ladies as they consider ideas, and talk about how they think Phil will react to them perhaps.

Limb printing, now that is a VERY good point!  Yes, I have heard that the better the fit the better, and the rapid turn around, along with needing to have their own in house scanner all ties in very well with this.  It is a logical area for the company to be working with and in, and once someone spots the overlap, it all ties together perfectly!

Many people are very visual, so beyond "just" the trauma of any veterans who have sadly lost limbs, you are also going to encounter veterans who have lost limbs and suffered burns, scaring, etc.  On the surface this might be going off topic, but think, once the idea of being enclosed, and treated like a sexual object, a sexual being, comes up, how long before this moves to consider hiding any "disfigured", in quotes since these people need to be honoured, respected, admired, not pitied and looked down on, parts.  Transforming them from someone where the first thing someone sees and reacts to is their injuries, into a sex display where all someone sees is a "pure" sexual experience, objectified, abstracted...

Hell, you can even weave in a point about this being good as PART of treatment for PTSD and other mental effects, showing and reminding these veterans that they are more than their past, and that with the right perspective, they have an interesting life ahead of them.

Did you ever come across the House of Gord books?  Actual story books I mean.  There were only a few, and they were published years ago, but I collected several of them back when they were for sale.  One, creatively called "Gord Collection" was a set of short stories.  One of them, that I was never quite sure how I felt about, was about a young woman, prime of her life, who was caught in a terrible traffic accident, and ended up loosing both arms and both limbs, right at the torso.  Turning her into a living torso and head.  The story was about turning her into a sex object, to try and show her that there was still life and pleasure to be had, even though her life as it was, was over.

The foam penalty box, it reminds me of a little game I have been known to play with people...  for example, when you have them tied up, working towards the brink of orgasm, balanced between pain and pleasure, beating them, flogging them, tormenting them, pushing them forward...

You get to the point of being "kind" and telling them they can let go and orgasm on a count of 10.  Initially the count is marked by hits with the flogger, or paddle, etc.  But then the counting gets to 3.5, 3.7, 3.999, nearly 4, back to 2...

It's distressing just how LONG it can take a numerically challenged cat to count to 10, especially when distracted by a toy...  and some of the expressions and noises said toy makes when the counting doesn't go as expected...  well...  would you believe I have been called evil?! :o

But yes, it is always important to provide hope, even if closing that last tiny gap never quite seems to work as planned or hoped...

For proof reading, I am sending a PM now.  But yes, no spoilers :)

A quick random thought, not even sure if it works well or not, but I have been randomly thinking about the whole "person inside an anonymous statue" look for displays that you then play with, and thinking about how much space you need, making people look identical, etc.

Then I got to thinking about a male inside, and the fact that, for a "normal" statue look, there is no space to allow for an erection, so it only works for frustrating and denying the male any pleasure.

But then I got to wondering, what about a female inside an obviously male display statue?  At first, the different gender doesn't matter at all, but if you get as far as revealing the crotch area, to make use of the "volunteer" as a sex object...

At first, only revealing the rear, and the anus, for sexual usage, there won't be any obvious telling that this is a woman or a man.  But if the front is then exposed, for extra options, or double usage...  Just wondering if its an interesting mind game or not, people thinking they are having sex with a male "hole", only to then find that despite appearances, its a female hole, and not the only available hole.

As I say, not sure it actually works or not, but from a mind game with the people on the outside point of view, perhaps it has some interesting value.

The balance point of locks to keys is indeed how fast can the responsible person get them safely free, or at least free enough to not be in danger for whatever reason. Too many people get carried away with "one more lock" and pay the price. Although I do love the idea of a "treasure hunt" with a large number of decoy keys. The hope as a key is fitted in the lock, the crushed feeling of despair as it doesn't open the lock. Repeated over and over. Almost as much fun as those locks clicking shut in the first place.

I think my friend wanted the visual contrast of "bars" under the glass tabletop for the ladies "BDSM tea party". Although I suppose if the table was sturdy enough four corners for four limbs also works. Although our struggling volunteer might spill the ladies tea. Heavens! One of those impossible missions you mentioned. Depending on the motivation applied, spilling the tea might be inevitable.

Veterans and PTSD will have to be treated with kid gloves. So I'll need time to ponder that kind of storyline to do them and it justice.

I have heard of the Gord books but only ever seen excerpts or illustrations, not the complete books. It sounds like an intense scenario.

Oh my an endless 10 count? Punctuated by paddling or flogging. Sounds horrible. I can't imagine who would enjoy such activities. ;)

In my limited experience with people who identify as "cats", I can honestly say they have been both the most evil and the most fun people I have known. As the song goes "You've got to be cruel to be kind".

I've got a million "Kitty" stories of real life adventures.

I've sent a test email to the account you indicated, I'll send the chapters you haven't read as soon as you confirm.

As far as printing a male statue but putting a female volunteer inside, messing with people's expectations is all part of the fun and games.

-Baronlaw, cat toy for many years now.