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Title: Roxy Music by Larkshead76
Post by: teanndaorsa on January 19, 2025, 07:33:16 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storieslr/roxy_music.html
F/f; bond; toys; frame; cuffs; trick; climax; blindfold; gag; clamps; fucking-machine; buttplug; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Roxy Music by Larkshead76
Post by: thepinkbishop on January 20, 2025, 04:45:24 PM
This was a pretty hot story. Your first one I see. Thanks for sharing. Dawn certainly had a good time.
I think you could have made it better if you'd planned it out a bit more. You'd clearly thought of an opening and a bit of background but the action seemed a bit disjointed with the jumping of perspective and the way things escalated towards the end.
Title: Re: Roxy Music by Larkshead76
Post by: gitefetichistes on January 22, 2025, 06:24:34 AM
A superb story, thank you for sharing
Title: Re: Roxy Music by Larkshead76
Post by: Dilapsus on January 23, 2025, 12:31:05 PM
That was really very lovely.  Well written, well paced and a joy to read.

Keep em coming