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Title: Her Cycle by A Lovely Violin
Post by: teanndaorsa on October 06, 2024, 07:34:45 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiesek/her_cycle.html
M+/f; fantasy; mast; public; fucking-machine; electro; gag; strip; clamps; buttplug; toys; stocks; predicament; pain; nc; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Her Cycle by A Lovely Violin
Post by: thepinkbishop on October 18, 2024, 10:51:38 PM
Hmmm. Not keen on this one. The steampunky concept was intriguing and the machine she built was cool but the build up felt too long and the final product felt too misogynistic.
Title: Re: Her Cycle by A Lovely Violin
Post by: Silver on October 19, 2024, 06:33:50 AM
I thought this was a fun story.  Very clever setting.

I am a fan of 'self bondage gone awry' which is pretty close to this, and the public humiliation of this is perfect. 

Very much looking forward to finding more of your stories!
Title: Re: Her Cycle by A Lovely Violin
Post by: Larkshead76 on January 01, 2025, 05:38:12 PM
Loved this story, great writing style ☺️