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Title: Too Clever By Half by Guy le Bouc
Post by: teanndaorsa on September 22, 2024, 08:57:46 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/too_clever_by_half.html
F/m; F+/m; F/mf; bond; chastity; cuffs; collar; buttplug; cane; punish; gag; cbt; stuck; strapon; trick; cons; XX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Too Clever By Half by Guy le Bouc
Post by: thepinkbishop on September 27, 2024, 03:56:45 PM
The Spanish certainly added colour and helped to give Alex's character. I thought you captured the mood well (and got the impression you were pretty invested in some of the scenes). There were a good few twists too. Not exactly my usual kink but I liked it. Thanks for sharing.
Title: Re: Too Clever By Half by Guy le Bouc
Post by: le Bouc on November 19, 2024, 08:42:13 PM
Thank you Bishop for the feedback!

This was a one-off for me as it's not my usual kink either. I was inspired by Lockedup4eva's series (and hope to be reading more/new from him soon). I tried a 'less is more' approach with a focus on the character's interactions, and what is hidden, to build off of. I utilized Sofia Vergara as my muse for Alex, so hot when she's angry.

Au Revior,
Le Bouc