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Title: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: teanndaorsa on August 07, 2024, 10:19:26 PM
You can view the story here on the plaza:

https://www.maidbots.net/storiessz/undercover_maidbot.html
Solo-F; roleplay; maid; maid-bot; uniform; collar; scifi; transform; F2maidbot; cons; X

https://www.maidbots.net/storiessz/undercover_maidbot2.html
Solo-F; roleplay; maid; maid-bot; uniform; collar; scifi; transform; F2maidbot; party; machine; cons; X

https://www.maidbots.net/storiessz/undercover_maidbot3.html
Solo-F; F/f; F2maidbot; maid-bot; roleplay; maid; uniform; collar; scifi; party; stuck; enclosed; cons; reluct; X

https://www.maidbots.net/storiessz/undercover_maidbot4.html
F+/f; maid-bot; F2maidbot; maid; roleplay; collar; scifi; blackmail; electro; hum; reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments and feedback about this story here.

Thanks  ;)
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: HannahAnne on August 08, 2024, 06:01:01 PM
Love the start of this story. Cannot believe how naive this human can be. I am looking forward to many chapters to this stories topic. Thanx again, Melissa
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: bentbliss on August 08, 2024, 10:18:31 PM
This is an excellent start and setup for more in the future. I look forward to seeing them.
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: taurired on August 13, 2024, 12:14:05 PM
Interesting start. what could go wrong?
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: jackierabbit1 on August 14, 2024, 09:13:43 AM
You could go almost anywhere with this tale, and I'm curious to see where you take this. I am of course interested to see what else that collar can do, just as I am the metalic hairweave, wondering if either, or both form some kind of human control system. In this world you've created I also wonder where maidbots come from, as in are they repurposed, electronically-controlled human stock, or are they truly mechanical beings.   

Thank you for sharing, Jackie.
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: nsfwaccbo on August 16, 2024, 12:59:27 PM
I really enjoyed it a lot. <3
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: iborg on August 19, 2024, 11:10:55 PM
This is a great story. I see the potential ways you could take this and I'm looking forward to see the next step.
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: teanndaorsa on August 27, 2024, 10:19:52 PM
Part 2 up tonight, enjoy!
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: feline on August 30, 2024, 05:25:07 PM
Having finished part 2 I am intrigued, and curious as to where this might go.  Not sure I would call this sexy yet, but there is a lot of interest value, and the actual maid bot has just shown its self, her self, to be a lot more intelligent and crafty than expected, turning up like that.

So having both of them out and about, mixing their identities and roles, I am most curious to see if there is a destination in mind yet for this fascinating concept :)
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: iborg on September 01, 2024, 03:08:58 AM
This has taken an intersting turn with the maidbot attending the party also. Definetly a role reversal. I'm looking forward to part 3.
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: teanndaorsa on September 08, 2024, 04:42:05 PM
Part 3 has dropped, enjoy!
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: iborg on September 09, 2024, 11:09:37 PM
Part 3 is as good as parts 1 and 2!  Thanks for sharing your story.
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: jackierabbit1 on September 10, 2024, 01:56:05 AM
I very much enjoyed the adventure, and the "be careful what you wish for..." theme. I wonder if there's a new market for organic maidbots, perhaps unit 734-B the first of a new series of machines, but of course somebody, or something, will have to take Melissa's place in the human world for a few days at least.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: taurired on September 10, 2024, 06:26:01 AM
Thanks for next part. Interesting turn of events.
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: feline on September 11, 2024, 04:02:59 PM
Part 3 is definitely interesting, and is taking things in a new and fun direction!  I do get the strong feeling that there is going to be more to this servicing the mother in law than the simple description suggests!  Definitely feels like an old rival who is really up to something... but what?  :)
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: teanndaorsa on October 12, 2024, 11:33:16 PM
Part 4 up tonight, enjoy!
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: jackierabbit1 on October 15, 2024, 10:55:37 AM
I loved the perpetuation of this service for Melissa, the adroit trap that was set, but I also wonder how Melissa's husband will react when he finds out that she has a job now. I can't help but to wonder if Nicole was happy to have somebody else there to deal with the mother in law for a while, or for that matter if the two "ladies" had conspired to prolong Melissa's service like this, Nicole's shock at the collar not coming off just part of the act for her.

Are maidbots a status symbol in this world that you've created, and if so do both ladies like having one, maybe even enough to purchase her "contract" from her husband, who may or may not already have somebody else in mind as a replacement wife? Maybe he suspects she has a lover on the side, and her emergency is visiting with that man, or even woman I suppose. I can't imagine that in this futuristic world that being out of phone-range is plausible, so this must be curious and throw up some red flags for Melissa's husband.

Speaking of husbands, I'm surprised that Nicole's didn't take advantage of the robotic servant for a bit of oral relief for himself at a bare minimum, even if he did realize that this was a human playing a part here.

So much fun, so many possible directions to take this, thank you again for sharing, Jackie.
Title: Re: Undercover Maidbot by Melissa M
Post by: feline on November 06, 2024, 03:19:16 PM
Part 4 is definitely interesting, and a good read.  The sense of helplessness, anger, bitterness and hatred that our maid is feeling is very well shown and conveyed.  It makes quite the contrast from some maid-bot stories, where the maid is enjoying and revelling in her roll and position.

In a way this is more natural and reasonable, while still being quite surprising and fresh.

The husband surprised me, so clearly looking like he was planning on something most wicked with the new maid-bot, but then no further sign.  Perhaps the mother being in the house was the reason for his backing off.

The mother in law, Eleanor, is a surprise though.  A mixture of being supportive, understanding, and down right manipulative and cruel.  She was also rather unclear on actually releasing the collar after this coming weekend.  Events do just keep on going don't they!