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Bondage => BoundStories Website Stories Feedback => Topic started by: Gromet on December 20, 2017, 05:10:04 am
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You'll find this story here on the Plaza:
http://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/shockcollar.html
M/f; D/s; bond; collar; shock; chast; denial; toys; insert; cuffs; latex; hobble; submissive; enslave; catsuit; sex; anal; climax; cons; X
Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback about this story here.
Thanks. ;)
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Good story! I liked it!
I am guessing that there is a part two coming?
I would like to see how the new chastity suit works out!
Ron
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great story. next part please!!
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Perhaps the next stage adds the option of a Bluetooth link to a punishment unit in the chastity belt plug/dildo: I'm not in favour of promoting electrosex in the upper torso in the real world as it can affect the heart signals. Part of this is that what you're talking about is quite draining on battery power, you've missed the time element from your scenario, and the big drain on power is the shocker: the belt can take a larger battery pack offering longer use. The sensor could then live in the collar, and a second one could live in Tim's pocket!
An edit is also needed: is her guy Jim or Tim?
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Thanks for the comments, appreciate you all reading it. Part 2 is not in the works right now but the subject may come up again later.
Sorry about switching the names, no matter how hard I try I still miss stuff, I really hate editing, and sometimes I like to leave time line vague, and sometimes I just screw it up :).
Mikel
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I try to comment on all the stories I read.
I quite enjoyed this one.
You made a petty good attempt at showing how this sexy young woman wanted to explore her ‘darker’ needs and how her husband facilitated this. A lot of it was quite sexy although at the end it almost became sinister with her total submission and isolation.
There are some nice bondage scenes too which I liked.
I did, however, feel the story was a bit unplanned and left hanging. This is something I think you should work on for your next one.
tpb