Setting my Own Trap by Servant Joanna

[Gromet]

You can view the story here on the plaza:

http://www.selfbound.net/storiessz/settingmyowntrap.html
Sbf; naked; cuffs; rope; sybian; release; email; consequences; photos; hum; ice-release; punish; climax; cons; X

http://www.selfbound.net/storiessz/settingmyowntrap2.html
Sbf; naked; cuffs; rope; nipple-clamps; sybian; ice-release; consequences; email; photos; hum; punishment; caught; M/f; multi-climax; cons/reluct; X

http://www.selfbound.net/storiessz/settingmyowntrap3.html
Solo-f; M/f; D/s; photos; blackmail; punishment; strip; naked; public; hum; bond; bdsm; flogger; blindfold; forced; oral; mast; sex; climax; cons/reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks   

[Zephyr]

What a perfectly *horrible* place to end part 1. And with no part 2 anywhere to be found!

Please tell me there is a part 2 planned. And hopefully a part 3 and part 4 and part 5 and more. This is a bulls eye on the sort of story I really enjoy. After about the first third,  and definitely after reading the contents of the email, I was prepared and quite willing to stay up well past my bedtime to read it all, but alas it looks like I will be in bed on time.   And checking back daily to see if more has been posted. 

In all seriousness: Great story, well written, for me this concept is a home run and I can't wait (except I have to) see where you take it. But I'm looking forward to it!

Thank you!

Z

[rmcingle]

I like the premise of this story! What a clever way to set up a predicament bondage scene!

R. Mc.

[jackierabbit1]

A very tempting self set trap. One wonders who else has access to Mr. Ross' emails though, perhaps a trusted secretary who screens his emails for important vs not important things for his busy eyes, she then having her own ideas of what constitutes proper blackmail, use, and punishment. Could she have a secret thing going on with him, your main character potentially upsetting this happy arrangement, or could she just be desirous of preventing him a scandal by dealing with your randy main character directly herself? Could there be an IT guy, (or girl), charged with keeping pornography off of the company net, he instead finding the pictures and taking it upon himself to properly punish and use his randy coworker for his own nefarious purposes?

I like the almost endless possibilities for this story line, and of course the possibility of unintended random consequences, thanks for sharing, Jackie.

[rmcingle]

Oh, I do like how Jackierabbit1 thinks!

[MaxRoper]

"How could I be so stupid?" she asks. A very good question. I think she got what she wanted, though maybe now she doesn't want it quite so much...

[Zephyr]

Bravo! Marvelously done! I look forward to your next story!

[TeaSer]

An excellent story!

After the first chapter (introduction really), I was a bit disappointed - but things really got going in the second.

Thanks for sharing this story.

[citywolf]

Since I have a demented mind and like stories with the worst possible endings for our characters, here are a few suggestions.  One of the first things he should do is have a photo session with her taking all sort of degrading photos:  posing, sucking, fucking, outdoor, bondage, videos of her saying degrading things, etc.  These will make her even more under his control.  After some time, he should start scheduling orgies, first with small groups and proceeding larger and integrating women, carefully controlling the people so that she does not know them and filming her further degradation.  After a long time of sex slavery, he should tire of her and release all the photographic evidence just to ruin her.

What do you think?

[jackierabbit1]

Just a fun story with the obvious element of "be careful of what you wish for..." I also like the very natural feeling of what have I done right after the orgasm subsides, and of course the implied what will I be made to do next part.
Your main character is most certainly owned, and I can't wait to see what Master Ross has in mind for his possession, which is obviously what your main character had suggested for herself anyway. As citywolf suggested I think some pictures to further ensnare your main character would be prudent, but from his point of view why share a toy like this, at least until he has run the gauntlet of every perversion that he can imagine (after exhausting your main character's own list of suggestions), which could take years.

Is Master Ross married, or in a long term relationship? I don't recall if you covered that in the first two chapters, but it works either way. If he is, your main character can become an indentured servant with kinky overtones for both of the Ross' use, and if not, a useful tool for his exclusive use, at least until he tires of her, or decides to marry her.

Thank you for sharing, Jackie.

[johnyburner]

I loved the story! It's a common cliché of "setting your own trap and ending in servitude", but it's well written, well paced and very hot. I think what sold me was the realistic reactions on part 2, you really feel like the shit hit the fan for our intrepid kinkster. So far in part 3 it still doesn't feel "off" in that regard, if realism is your goal here.

I'm enjoying were this is going, as I was afraid it would follow the rules of other such stories with either a good natured, intelligent Dom, or an evil, but stupid Dom. You chose an evil, intelligent Dom, and the dark turn, combined with her reluctant(?) compliance, made my interest spike.

I'm waiting for the next part, whenever that appears, but I would like to make a couple of suggestions:
It would be great not to forgo the self-bondage aspect, as it would be a great way of further ensnaring her into submission, and usually stories like this don't find the sub tying herself after her indenture, which is a shame.
On the other hand, I can't stop feeling that the real hero is Ross, and I would love a happy ending for him, if you get my drift. It's good to be evil, sometimes.

[TeaSer]

I was happy about part two and part three is a very natural successor. I'm a bit worried if you'll make a part four as well - part of me hopes you will submit slave Jo to more of her own fantasy. The other part hopes you will not - as continuing the story without just lining up devilish scenes will be very difficult.

Anyway it's your story and I'll accept whatever you decide - and most certainly read the next chapter(s) if they show up.

Thanks for letting us in on those fantasies.