Author Topic: Selma's Recollection by ElectroPainLover  (Read 1723 times)

Offline Gromet

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Selma's Recollection by ElectroPainLover
« on: May 15, 2017, 10:19:37 AM »
You'll find this story here on the Plaza:

http://www.boundstories.net/storiessz/selmasrecollection.html
M/f; courtcase; hum; F/m; revenge; kidnap; bagged; captive; bond; cuffs; gag; bfold; machine; insert; anal; electro; shock; torment; nipple; urethral sound; torture; set-up; Sbf; bedtie; discovery; police; rescue; cons/nc; XXX

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback about this story here.

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Re: Selma's Recollection by ElectroPainLover
« Reply #1 on: May 15, 2017, 08:09:41 PM »
Pretty intense, Dana. I usually prefer much lighter fare but this was excellent.

Your writing ability has increased so much since your first story here. Writing porn is a great way to improve, isn't it? Nothing like writing what you enjoy.

This one was almost too much for me but I stuck it out and was glad I did. The climax was worth the journey. I would give this my highest rating.

Max

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Re: Selma's Recollection by ElectroPainLover
« Reply #2 on: May 16, 2017, 04:44:50 PM »
Pretty intense, Dana. I usually prefer much lighter fare but this was excellent.

Hey Max, I am actually surprised that Gromet posted this story. It is very intense and after looking it over a month or so ago, I figured Gromet thought it to be too hardcore and I wouldn't have blamed him if he decided not to publish it. It really surprised me to see it posted.

Your writing ability has increased so much since your first story here. Writing porn is a great way to improve, isn't it? Nothing like writing what you enjoy.

Thank you for the kind words on my writing. I'm happy you have noticed the improvements my writing is making and hope it keeps improving. I've been on a bit of a 'break' from writing with working on the re-linking of the stories, but, hope to pop one out here shortly...in between finishing BoundStories.net and starting on another section. Writing porn has definitely helped me improve my writing skills and home out some of the imperfections. I look forward to improving my skills even more.

This one was almost too much for me but I stuck it out and was glad I did. The climax was worth the journey. I would give this my highest rating.

I'm happy you were able to stick through it until the end...but wouldn't have blamed you if you posted that you couldn't finish it Max. It is by far my darkest tale I've written, or will, write. I don't see myself writing something quite so dark in the future. I was probably just as surprised by the ending as you were...I never seen it ending the way it did, even when just a few paragraphs away from the end.

I'm also waiting for Jessica's Torment parts 4, 5, & 6, to be published...and, unfortunately, the ending of Jessi's story gets pretty tough also. Well, actually, the last two chapters are pretty rough. I guess it was just the mood I was in as I wrote them.

Again, thanks Max! I will try to keep my writings a bit on the milder side and not get so dark in the future...but, sometimes the stories take on a life of their own.

Dana

 

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