Author Topic: Betrayal by AmyAmy  (Read 5285 times)

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Betrayal by AmyAmy
« on: October 25, 2016, 02:58:33 am »
Betrayal by AmyAmy

Part One
Storycodes: M/f; D/s; bdsm; bond; cuffs; chain; intubate; enslave; punish; torment; oral; denial; reluct/nc; XXX

Part Two
Storycodes: MF+/f; D/s; party; display; hum; bdsm; enslave; punish; torment; oral; sex; climax; denial; reluct/nc; XX

Part Three
Storycodes: F/f; D/s; bond; chain; armbinder; gag; hogtie; susp; enslave; bdsm; whip; punish; torment; toys; oral; climax; reluct/nc; XX

Part Four
Storycodes: F+/f+; D/s; bond; chain; armbinder; latex; catsuit; gag; bdsm; cane; punish; torment; toys; insert; oral; climax; reluct; XX

Part Five
Storycodes: F+/f+; D/s; bond; chain; armbinder; latex; gag; bdsm; crop; punish; electro; torment; toys; insert; oral; mast; climax; cons/reluct; XX

Part Six
Storycodes: F/f; MMF/f+; D/s; bond; latex; armbinder; leather; gag; bdsm; piercing; transport; boots; corset; stables; ponygirls; outdoors; oral; climax; cons/reluct; XX

Part Seven
Storycodes: F/f+; M/f+; D/s; bond; armbinder; rope; susp; harness; gag; bdsm; electro; bdsm; torment; stables; ponygirls; cart; outdoors; force; oral; anal; denial; sex; climax; cons/reluct; XX

Part Eight
Storycodes: M+/f+; F/f; D/s; bond; rope; corset; susp; harness; gag; bdsm; cage; piercing; branding; torment; stables; ponygirls; cart; outdoors; force; chast; oral; anal; denial; sex; climax; cons/nc; XX

Part Nine
Storycodes: M+/f+; F/f; Solo-f; D/s; bond; rope; corset; susp; harness; gag; hood; bdsm; torment; stables; ponygirls; outdoors; force; toys; mast; sex; climax; cons/nc; XX

Part Ten
Storycodes: Solo-F; MF; public; conversation; revelations; conclusion; slavery; cons; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story. Thanks.

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Re: Betrayal by AmyAmy
« Reply #1 on: November 05, 2016, 11:59:01 am »
IMHO this is my darkest story, and it was something of a turning point for me.

I wanted to write something to counterbalance all the really vile stories out there that seem to be written for people who get a thrill out of imagining inter-racial sex as something transgressive, and who actually get off from reading about the torture and objectification of women, as if they were doing it themselves (rather than imagining the things are happening to them).

Sometimes I worry that in deconstructing that sort of story I got too close to making something that could be misconstrued as supporting those same negative attitudes. That certainly wasn't my intention. As an author, it's almost impossible for me to judge how others are going to read my work, or what they'll take away from it.

If Betrayal is trying to say one thing, it's that the important qualities of human personality are not bounded by lines of race, gender, or perceived entitlement. What makes a person good or bad, cruel or kind, dumb or smart, isn't decided by the colour of their skin, or whether they have an inny or an outie, or whether they were born in a rich country or a poor one.

Perhaps Betrayal is too dark for most people, and too dark for me. After spending a couple of years, or more writing it (here and there) something of the protagonist seeped into me, instilling an aggravated sense of gender injustice. This had the unfortunate side-effect of making me preachy and annoying - for a while at least. I'd like to think I'm getting over it these days. Unfortunately, Mr. Trump may have brought on a relapse.
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Re: Betrayal by AmyAmy
« Reply #2 on: March 28, 2017, 08:42:40 pm »
I am looking forward to finding the time to finish this story. I've read two chapters so far and find it very interesting and well written. I just have a problem sometimes with spreading myself so thin that I don't find time to read much lately. It does seem to be pretty dark, but, sometimes dark tales have to brought into the light.


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Re: Betrayal by AmyAmy
« Reply #3 on: March 29, 2017, 07:17:49 pm »
It's taken me some time and a bit of fortitude to make it all the way through this. As you say, it's a dark tale, but it's a painstakingly crafted piece of literature as well. The writing and editing are excellent, the plot is intricate (and occasionally a bit hard to follow, but that's probably me) and the work involved is overwhelming, especially for something placed on a free site. Thank you AmyAmy. You are truly a Writer.



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Re: Betrayal by AmyAmy
« Reply #4 on: March 29, 2017, 07:23:07 pm »
Hey Max,

That's what I've taken away from my reading of the first two chapters so far. Very well written piece of work. I will have to take the time to finish it...I just have this bad habit of only breaking from my work after my eyes won't focus anymore...  :o



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