Author Topic: Oubliette by Grendel  (Read 2518 times)

Offline Gromet

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Oubliette by Grendel
« on: July 27, 2016, 08:40:42 AM »
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Solo-F; M/f; synthetic; ai; scifi; spaceship; bond; cuffs; hood; release; attack; virus; hogtie; gag; nipple; toys; insert; chast; collar; mast; stuck; controlled; cons/nc; X

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Re: Oubliette by Grendel
« Reply #1 on: July 27, 2016, 03:51:36 PM »
Well told and well paced. You know when to elaborate and when to leave things to the reader's imagination, which makes for great storytelling.

I might like to have seen the first position/predicament she would face at the end, but making me guess was probably a better choice :)

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Re: Oubliette by Grendel
« Reply #2 on: July 27, 2016, 05:59:26 PM »
Really a good story

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Re: Oubliette by Grendel
« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2016, 11:32:31 PM »
An intriguing tale which I enjoyed very much. However, given my limited imagination I would have liked a glimpse at the “multiple files she’d provided him on how to restrain and torture her” ;-) Even at nearly light speed, interstellar travel should take ample time (even taking relativistic effects into account) to enact some elaborate scenarios, especially when David apparently has access to a machine shop ready to construct any number of innovative bondage devices...

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Re: Oubliette by Grendel
« Reply #4 on: July 28, 2016, 09:50:26 PM »
Really enjoyed the story was very good read.   Kept envisioNing myself as the helpless Captain


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