Author Topic: Cubby by 64Fordman  (Read 4533 times)

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Cubby by 64Fordman
« on: July 16, 2016, 05:28:56 AM »
You can view the story here on the plaza:

Part 1: http://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/cubby.html
Solo-F; FF; event; reporter; story; bond; rope; fantasies; discovery; cons; X

Part 2: http://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/cubby2.html
Solo-F; reporter; fantasies; auction; MMFF; pool; F/f; bond; rope; barn; cons; X

Part 3: http://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/cubby3.html
F/f; bond; rope; nipple; clothespins; tape; gag; tease; torment; denial; M/f; cloth; bedtie; strip; sex; climax; cons; X

Part 4: http://www.boundstories.net/storiesad/cubby4.html
Solo-F; reporter; cartrunk; discovery; F+/f+; sorority; convention; display; models; bdsm; paddle; bench; audience; mudpit; wrestle; cons/reluct; X

Please feel free to leave your kind comments & feedback here about this story.

Thanks  ;)

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #1 on: July 16, 2016, 11:22:34 AM »
I have only read the first three so far, but I must say they are very well written. It's a great story, great characters with a lot of depth, most especially for a short story, and the kinky dreams intruding on Cubby's thought are just wonderful. This story has a very "real" feeling to it, and I intend to write more after I have read all four chapters in their entirety, but sufficient to say that it feels like this town is a place one could visit in the flesh.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #2 on: July 16, 2016, 10:50:20 PM »
Thank you so much Jackie. My intent was not to tell a bondage story but to tell a story, with bondage. The success of which cannot be known without feedback like yours, made even more special as it is from an accomplished writer whose body of work I consider as a mentor.

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #3 on: July 18, 2016, 09:28:21 AM »
I am both flattered and humbled by your kind words, thank you.

 Chapter four was just as wonderful, and I like the premise of writing a good story with bondage in it as opposed to writing a bondage story. On that score alone I would say very well done, but your conclusion also wraps up several subplots at the same time while leaving you the option to revisit those same characters at some point in the future if you so choose.

In my humble opinion, good story telling allows the reads to enter the story vicariously, either as one of the main characters or as a bystander watching the events unfold depending on ones own preferences, and here I felt like I was present in this little town for just a little while.

Thanks for sharing, Jackie.

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #4 on: July 19, 2016, 06:47:10 AM »
Thank you again Jackie. I wanted to make Cubby a real person driven and influenced by more than just her sexual desire. The ending, which I struggled with, was also meant to be real without disappointing the reader. To leave the reader with some hope Cubby can find the happiness she seeks without the happily-ever-after ending of a fairy tale.

As for the place? Having spent years living in some very small towns while working for a truck stop chain, there is a lot that’s real about the fictitious town of Parkville. Many people come from farm families and aren’t afraid to speak their mind. A server once told me “I have three older brothers, I’ve spent a lot of time hogtied.”

I also have to acknowledge the influence of Lady Jane. She offered me friendship, encouragement, and was a tireless promoter of first person point-of-view. A technique I hadn’t considered when I began writing. Thank you Lady Jane, where ever you are.

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #5 on: July 19, 2016, 09:28:48 PM »
This is great! Humor, bondage, believable characters, well written, an absolute top drawer series. I want to move to Parkville and hang out with these people.

This is the sort of tale that keeps me coming back to The Plaza. Thank you!

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #6 on: July 20, 2016, 05:56:29 AM »
Thank you MaxRoper, that’s very kind. I’m glad you enjoyed the story.

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #7 on: August 01, 2016, 09:10:50 AM »
Just finished reading the whole set.  Very nicely done, and a nice example of first person writing.  I especially like your attention to detail here, including the "oops" moments that seem to happen way too often, just as they do in real life.  If you try, you can actually hear Cubby's voice telling you the story.  Again, very nice.
The more I look, the more I see.
The more I see, the more I learn.
The more I learn, the more I know.
The more I know, the less I understand.
The less I understand, the more I look.

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #8 on: August 01, 2016, 03:36:47 PM »
Thank you Lobo, comments from writers I look up to mean a lot. I’m glad you enjoyed the story.

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #9 on: August 09, 2016, 02:26:32 PM »
Enjoyed the series hope there is more in the works

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #10 on: August 09, 2016, 11:56:14 PM »
After quite a few days I read this story. Very good, alive, well written, entertaining.
Usually I don't care for anything "off topic" in a porn/erotic/bdsm story (everyone define them as desired) because I just want the excitement.
I don't care for a story with bondage in it, I want bondage as the main topic, and everything else as trimming.
Just my tastes.

But this one is good.

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #11 on: August 10, 2016, 03:17:49 AM »
Thank you Pilloryslave, I’m glad you enjoyed the story.

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Re: Cubby by 64Fordman
« Reply #12 on: August 10, 2016, 03:20:35 AM »
Thank you for your comments Arkane. I understand, my stories are written essentially for me, for my own personal taste and fantasies. Some of my stories don’t even have sex (whaaaat), no surprise those are also the stories that don’t get any comments. But that’s okay, I’m having one heck of a time writing, and I’m glad you found some part of my story you enjoyed.

 

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